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Maneet FF.. DushtDanav ki Mishti~chap#9(page-50)

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SCENE 1

one girl is entering in a beautiful house she is shouting

DADi maa!! Dadi maa!! Main a gai dadi maa!! Where r u???

Dadi: hum yahan hain

Girl: dadi maa!!! (hugs her) how r u??? u knw last tym aap kitni change hotin thin, now u have changed

Dadi: aap ain bhi 15 yrs pehlay thin tb aap sirf 5 yrs ki hotin thin,

Girl: dadi maa!! M jxt kidding u r not so change,

Dadi: acha chalo Geet betay!! Aap fresh hun jae phr hum aap k room main khana bhijwatay hain,

(she stepped and then step back)

Geet: dadi maa!! Where is maan????

Dadi: betay wo raat bhr parties main rehtay hain or hamari kahan suntay hain pr,

Geet: how stupid he is!

Dadi: laiken yeh baat hai k wo hamari respect bht krtay hain,

Geet: ok jxt leave maan, pta hai dadi maa Canada main main bht  fun krti thi,

Dadi: (by intruppting) betay apni kahaniyaan baad main sunaye ga pehlay aap fresh hun jaen,

Geet: okkk, (smiles)

 

SCENE 2

(geet's room)

Geet: dadi maa pta hai papa kehtay hain k delhi main jao wahan k culture ko jano or dadi maa I thought that tym about u k delhi main meri dadi maa hain, so I m sure I ll enjoy ,

Dadi: haan pta hai aap hum say kitna attachd hain or maan ko zra bhi ehsaas nahi hai k ap canada say ai hain us say milna chahiyae,

 

Geet: dadi maa jxt leave naa subah mil lain gaye hum or ab to college bhi same ho ga naaa???

Dadi: same class,

Geet: yeahhh dadi maa u r soo cool naa,

Dadi: hmmm chalo ab so jao safar kr k ai ho sooo,

Geet: ok dadi maa good nyt and byyyeee

Dadi leaves room and geet lock the door and turn on the song "ON THE FLoOR" and start dancing...

 

SCENE 3

Geet is cmng down through the stairsss

Geet: dadi maa! Main first day late ho gai ab kia ho ga punishment??? Oh God I hate ittt,

Dadi : abhi 10 mins hi late ho aap driver k saath ja skti hain.

Geet: no dadi I hate drivers!! I'll drive!!

Dadi: pr aap ko raasta nahi pta??

Geet: wo, wo main driver se pooch lun gi (running) ok byeee, see u

 

SCENE 4

Geet in the car

Geet: where is the CD I put it in mai bagg oh God aaj meray saath kia ho raha hai???

Suddenly car stops

Geet: ab kia ho gaya???

She starts the car but Car doesn't start.

Geet: Oh God stupid idiot car aaj hi kharab hona  thaaa,

Geet steps out from the car.

Geet: tyre b punkchr!!!! Ahhh..ab kia krun?? Lift lun?? Ufff ab kia krun india main meray saath kia ho raha hai wahan kbhi aisa nahi hua pehlay late phrr car ahhh...

Geet starts asking for lift

She asks with two cars for lift bt no one stopsss she asks for another car

 Firstly car doesn't stop bt it stops and come backkk

Geet: thanks God!!

Door opensss

Geet: meri car kharab ho gai hai and m going to collge this is mai first day

Boy: which college???

Geet: XYZ College

Boy: ok sit I m also going to that college..

Geet:ohh thank u, (she sits) u knw what I m new in delhi aaj first day hi meray saath yeh ho gaya..

Boy is silently driving car with sme attitude

Geet: ouper sy it seems to be so hot,  I don't how I'll survive here. I was so stupid that I decided to come here.

No response.

Geet: hello m talking to u

Boy: I knw I dnt want to ansr you!

Geet: (thinks) how stupid he is!

Geet:  u knw I hate this whether! Its so frustrating.

Geet: k jxt leave tell me about you,

Boy is silently driving suddenly, he stops the car.

Boy: uttro car say,

Geet: bt why?

Boy: main nain kaha utro!

Geet: (with tensed and somewhat surprisied expressions) okkk.

Geet utar jaati hai,

Geet: prrr, (car goes) thanks to kehnay diya hota, how stupid he was kitna attitude tha stupid man!

 

SCENE 5

(in class)

Taniya: hey whatever u are?? This is Mk's place you can't sit here

Geet: hey main jahan beht gai, beht gai, ab main yahan say nahi uthun gi,

 

Tasha: hey uth jao Mk bht ghusa kray ga!

Geet: main kyun uthun? I came first here. kahan hai tmhara Mk???

Tasha: wo aata hi hoga,

Taniya: sir!! Itni jaldi???

Geet smiles

Everybody says Goood morning sir!

Mr Mehra: good morning!!! Today v have new student geet Handa hey (with pointing geet) u r geet???

Geet: yess sir

Mr Mehra: introduce ur self...

Geet: mai name is geet and I came from Canada

Mr mehra: why you came here from CANADA???

Geet: sir actually mai father forced me for coming here for knowing the culture

Mr Mehra: oh that's great,. We hope you'll enjoy this place. (smiles)

Suddenly door opens one angry young man enters taniya and tasha says MK

Mk: good morning sir!

Mk comes to his place he finds that anybdy is sitting here he angers and sits with her's next chair

Geet realizes that he is the man who gave the lift

Geet: thanks for giving me lift,

Mk: stop it main nain tmhain car say isi liyae utara tha kyun k mjhe bht bolnay larkiyaan bht,, buri lgti hain.

Geet: (thinks how stupid) okkk!

Class ends geet wants to talk with Mk bt he leaves the class immediately.

Geet: kitna stupid hai!!

Pinky: hi I m priyanka mai nick name is pinky!!

Geet: hi

Pinky: Mk bht stupid hai sort of dusht and danav

Geet: what u said??

Pinky: stupid hai...

Geet: us k baad???

Pinky: hahaha!!! Its dusht danav

Geet: oh what that mean?

Pinky: lets go to caf I'll tell u

Geet: ok y not!

Pinky: it means stupid or gamandi sort ov

Geet: ohh to DUSHt DAnab

Pinky: not danab its danav..

Geet: ahahhhaahha so funny acha tell me us main itna proud attitude kun hai???

Pinky: ptta nahi pr larkiyaan us pr maarti hain wo kisi say baat kia kr lay wo larki pagal ho jaati hai!

Geet: aisa kia hai us main???

Pinky: yehi to mjhe smjh nahi aata!

Geet: k jxt leave him koi achi si baat kro .

 

SCENE 6

(geet pinky enters in the caf)

Pinky: this is our caf!

Geet: nicee!!  hmmm

Pinky: yaahan behttay hain.

Geet: ok!

Suddenly they hear sound of slapping someone and tripping down.

Geet: O God!!! Yeh kia hai (she turns) again MK.

Pinky: roz kisi kip tai zurur hoti hai aaj aadi.

Geet: mjhe wahan jana chahiyae!

Pinky: nahi koi un k jhagray k beech aye MK ko bht bura lgta hai!

Geet stands up

Geet: MK yeh kia kr rahay ho tmhain sharam nahi aati what u doing??? He is also human.!

Mk: hey who are you to interfare!

Geet: main jo b hi hun pr tmhain us k saath aisa nahi krna chahiyae tha sorry bolo usay!

Taniya: shut up Mk or sorry??

Mk: main nahi bolon ga balkay tm sorry bolo coz pehlay tm meri jaga pr beht gai or ab tm mjh se badtameezi kr rahi ho!

Geet: main badtameezi kr rahi hun? tm misbehave kr rahay ho apnay aap ko smjhatay kia ho koi prince ho??

MK: (touches her arm) haaan phr.?

Geet: (with step back) how dare you??? How dare u to touch mee?

Mk: (attitude) now get lost !

Geet: main nahi jaon gi main caf main ai hun apni marzi say yahan say jaon gi!

Mk: then jao apnay frnds k saath ja kr behto idhr kia kr rahi ho???

Geet: you bl** (with turning back)

MK shocks and steps forward;

Geet: (sitting on her place) how stupid he is larkiyon say baat krnay ki tmeez hi nahi hai!

Pinky: dnt spoil ur mood leave him kia khao gii???

Geet: ummm I dnt knw yahan kia milta hai!!

 

SCENE 7

Geet turns back  to home

Geet: dadi hyyyeee

Dadi: hello betay kaisa raha first day???

Geet: dadi  bht bura actually subah jaatay huay car kharab ho gai or mjhe lift leni parhi or wo b itnay stupid idiot and kia tha wo, , , , haan Dusht danav, , , , itna idiot gamandi insaan tha apnay aap ko pta nahi kia smjhta tha ahhh..

Dadi: geet betay chorain yeh btain maan say mulaqat hui???

Geet: nahi dadi maa! mjhe to yaad b nahi hai us ki look kaisi hai??

Dadi: haan 15 yrs pehlay aap un say mili thin yaad kaisay ho ga wo?

Geet: right dadi maa!!

Dadi: college kaisa lga new frnds bmnay???

Geet: mt poochain wo idiot hamary college main kia, meri class main hai us nain saara din mood kharab kia or frndss, , ,, , yeahhh one new frnd pinky!

Dadi: chalain aap thk gain hun gi main aapka khana lgwati hun

Geet: ok dadi!

Dadi left and geet was sitting on couch using cell phone,  suddenly one handsome man enters in the house and geet sees him

Geet:  tm???

 



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Precap

Geet is in room and dancing on song on the floor and suddenly door opens!!

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Edited by -KitKit- - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
simply brilliant
loved it
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awesome update!!!!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
awsom 
loved it

love maan geet first meet
cont soon
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Res 
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nyc maahi... my jaan keep it up.
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Posted: 9 years ago
nice start...maan is too haughty!! n geet is cool...
continue soon
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It's nice...do continue...