Smitar's OS 2: The Missing Mat (25/5/2014)

rulama

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Posted: 9 years ago

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shutter

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Posted: 9 years ago

Nice and sweet!!!!!! Ohhh the feelings that the innocence of Paro evokes in Rudra was a treat to see...

He needs to escape his wife's never ending questions because he himself is searching for answers, answers far more important and seemingly complicated than his wife's simple questions!!!!

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lalpeeli

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Posted: 9 years ago

you are incredible ... how do you manage such sweet and beautiful stories on TWO forums... (that i know off😉)

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Aruni.

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Posted: 9 years ago

Oh oh oh!

Reswa

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HOW CUTE WAS THAT!! I would have given anything to replace the fridays episode with his OS. Loved all - the chuha threat, burning mats, major running away from his wife...

One small point though. It's Arnav ji who says "samjhi tum?" Rudra dev says "Samajh gayi?" instead 😃

Love you smita, rashmi... hope to see more OSs on Parud in the future...

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surenkal

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Posted: 9 years ago

Oh Yay. Another one. Made my Sunday

Can I request for a PM ... pls pls

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Ameera.

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Posted: 9 years ago

Lovely

Enjoyed reading ur arshi stories

Looking forward for parud

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Jasmin

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Posted: 9 years ago

That was super cute! Simply loved it !!!

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lourel24

@lourel24

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Posted: 9 years ago

it was beautuful.hooked till the end.loved every moments.rudra sleeping on the floor,running away frm her innocent question,paro's dailogue"I will bring tea n then ask about mat"LOL.if major saab was thinking he cud escape then he was definately mistaken."the devil born to plague me" was also perfect line.exactly wat rudra wud have used for ranawat.

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