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Posted: 9 years ago
I know i am very late in commenting, but dude i gotta tell u, this is one of the best ones i have read !!
The way u showed small small everyday scenes changing the dynamics of their relationship was beautiful❤️

I like ur dry sense of humor😆😆😆 some dials of urs just make me laugh n smile at teh same time.
All the last lines of ur scenes were amazing, but i specially liked this one

Actually, I do have other choices but I really just want to kiss you😆 

Guys will be guys

Oh and 😡 U are oficially the disrupter of teh peace of BI FORUM😡😡😡

Let me go make some noise that u were teh one who were responsible for REHANs birth😡😡

Grrr😡😡😡

🤣

If zaya separation happens now we know hwo to blame😳

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Posted: 9 years ago
Honestly, this was beautiful! I absolutely loved every bit of it. Especially Zain's realization of love and him ending off with "Who would have thought?" - that was just perfect! 
Please pm me with future works! 😊

-Aamna