Rangrasiya

Oneshot OS:Hope TIME will heal!!!!!

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Posted: 9 years ago
This is my first one shot based on the precap adn todays episode.
i dont know how i have written , just wrote whatever came to my mind.
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"do u love her"

PAined PAro asked Rudra!!

rudra sprang up next moment from his place and said " NO " " Never"
" no Paro i didnot love her" and " she absolutely means nothing to me"

Paro was too weak to speak anything.
"major Saab, take me home , i m tired and i want to sleep"

By the time they went out to the jeep both were drenched fully due to the heavy rain.

Paro hurt within her cudnot speak!! she acted like a achine.
she gave him the towel to wipe himself,
she helped him to wipe his hair seeing else where.

She felt teh emptiness in her heart, nothing to think over nothing to talk to.
No one to share her feeling.She was upset with her Bolenath!!

God why should i suffer like this???
What sin have i done to undergo this torture??
God u took away my parents!!!
then so called marrriage and so called pati!!!
then Takursa's deceive!!!y ?? y me????
She had questions questions and only questions!!!
no answers!! nothing at all!!!


She took her pillow and bedsheet and lied down.
Rudra sat near her and tried to speak but Paro turned her back and
avoided him!
She cried!! her tears rolled down her cheeks!!


Rudra was watching her crying!!
what could be more painful and heart wrenching tahn to see his innocent beloved wife 
crying her heart out that too because of him!!
he felt miserable.

He cudnot sleep in the bed where her wife is not there.
Somehow or the otehr they are used to sleeping in teh same bed on either corners of the bed.
now he felt the emptiness.

He weent out and sat in the joola!!!

He was both physically and mentally drained out!!
and soon drifted in to sleep.


He felt a hand run through his hair!!!

Thinnking it wa Paro ," u came???? i know u will forgive me"

"rudra i am waiting for u to come to me"
Rudra got up with a jerk.

He was already in deep shit! he doesnot want his wife to see him with the drama queen.
He said " laila dafa ho javo yahan se"

Suddenly Laila hugged Rudra and started blabbering about her love towads him.

Paro was coming towards them and saw them!!!
 he saw Rudra was standing like a pole!

She got frustrated but doesnt want to show it to her.

"Laila Bhaisa, Rudra maara pati hain, aur yeh aapko shoba
 nahi deta ki aap kisi aar ki pati ko chuuae"

"aur laila bhaisa meinae maara pati ko chunae ke haq kisiko  nahi di hai"
"aagar se aap dyaan rakiyae ki aap maara pati se door rahaen"
Aur ek baath mainae do din se dekti aa rahi hoon , ki aap to intae bi tameez nahi hain 
ki aap kisis ki ,haas kar ki naye naye shaadi sudha logon ki kamraein mein aanae se
pehle knock karna chahiyae"

Aur swal pyar ki Rudra mujae pyar kartha hain , unki patni se,
isliye aap rudra se dor hi rahiyae"

Paro glared at laila and said the last few words " aagae se
main me aap ko maarae pati ke aas paas bhi dekha na tho mujse bura koi nahi hoga"
"aap apnae kaam se matlab rakiye" 
aur rudra aapko do din ke andhar meri haweli se aapko door liker jayegha, mera matlab
hian BSD office mein"
Isliye in do dimon mein aap maarae pati se door hi rahiye to aapkeliye achcha hoga"
SAying this Paro turned to leave.
But seeing Rudra staning like a stone she glared at him saying " shub muhrat aagaye hain,
aapnae kamrae mein chalen"

Rudra was so shocked to seee this side if Paro , was stunned and he left the place.


Inside the room:

"Paro..."
rudra called out.

She didnt turn but started to speak " major saab, jo kuch bhi meinae bahar kaha woh
isliye ki pati patni ki aapsi mamle mein koi dhakal na dein"
Mujae kuch samay chahiye ki sochnae ki , is mamlae to suljanae ki.
Mein abhi bohot thak gayi hoon, kuch soch nae ki himmat nahi hain mujae"
lekin yeh math samjeyegha ki maine aap ko maaf kiya"

Samay bahot bada dawai hota hain. mujae bhi samy dejiye, aap ko bhi kuch samay chahiye"
isliye ab ke baar is mamlae mein hum kuch na bath karigi toh achcha rahe gha"

saying this she went off to sleep.

Rudra was stunned! he didnt have any words.

His wife innocent wife naive wife made him speechless.
she awas thinking clearly.

There was ahope in him tht one day HIS PARO WILL ACEPT HIM.

till then he deceide to give their relation some TIME!!!!!!!!!!


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pl do post your comments!!
pl forgive me if there is any mistake in my grammar, my hindi
and my writing!!

HOpe it is not rubbish!!!!!!!!

thanks all!!!


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Posted: 9 years ago
im liking dilogue with paro warning tht laila direct to stay way. good. 
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Posted: 9 years ago
Thanks for all your likes and comments!!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
hi sreeya !!
remember, me ?? os is good !! ek bat hai woh laila bhaisa nehi, baisa hai .baisa matlab ms.
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This content was originally posted by: shreya_rc

hi sreeya !!

remember, me ?? os is good !! ek bat hai woh laila bhaisa nehi, baisa hai .baisa matlab ms.


Thanks for the corection dear!!!

i do remember u!!!

This was my first time writing OS!!!

thanks for the comment!!!!
what do u say??can i write in future???????