Channel V Dil Dosti Dance

One question || A Kriyaansh One Shot.

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Posted: 9 years ago
This is just out of randomness and boredom. Sorry if I disappoint you at the end.

Warning: It's short.

Warning 2: It's unedited.

Enjoy!
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His palms sweat as he parked the car in the driveway of his house, their house. He took a deep breath and picked up the large bouquet of roses and the box of chocolates from the passenger seat and got out of his car, reaching the front door of the huge bungalow.

He was dressed in her favourite suit and held her favourite white roses is his right hand and had a box of her favourite chocolates in his left. Breathe. He told himself. It's just one question. Stop being such a coward. She will say yes. Will she? Of course she will, he told himself.

He slowly opened the door to their house and tip toed inside. She was nowhere to be seen. He turned around, he was sure she was reading, and as expected when he walked into the diwaan and saw her reading some book to cure her boredom.

He stared at her for a moment or two. He still had time, he could back down right now. What if she said no? What would he do then?

Just as he was about to escape, he tripped over something and was about to fall when he regained his balance. Kriya's head shot up and she looked at her husband. She immediately stood up to help him.

"Rey! What's going on?" She asked him.

One question. Just one simple question, right? One question could change his life forever.

"Uh... Kriya." He said.

"Yes." She replied looking at him intently.

"Uh... Umm.. Honey." He called.

Okay, Rey never calls me honey. Kriya thought.

"Rey?"

He kneeled in front of her and said in one go.

"Please, let me have the right side of the bed."

Done.
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Okay, how many of you expected that he is going to propose her? Batao batao...

Okay, please comment. I think it will be unfair to ask for long comments but... Life isn't fair.

Please long comments and don't forget to like...Edited by FrozenTeardrops - 9 years ago

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Posted: 9 years ago
naaz...🤣🤣🤣
this was hilarious..i literally rolled off my bed...itna dat i told it to my sis...
superb..okay i got it dat they were married were u wrote their house...
nd after knowing dat i was really anticipating ki kya question hai jo life badal dega...nd seriously i mean right side of bed..???🤣...
it proves kriya apne pati ko kitna dara ke rakhti hai...
PS: i know u r burdened with ur works but plz give a second part i really wanna know kriya kya kahegi..???Edited by akankshaArsha - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
😆😆😆...It was an amazing OS! xP
Mrko sachi laga tha he'll propose...
Right side of the bed? LOL...xP

Edited by kriyaanshfreva - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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🤣🤣🤣 i was waiting with so much of anticipation and end mein kya mila Please, let me have the right side of the bed

bwahahahaha XP .. ... anyway ,it was awesomeee !!! ^_^ 
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Posted: 9 years ago
LOL..dat ws really really funny..me too imagined dat..bt in d end i ws lyk..bichare ko kinna dar lag rha hai apni wifey se..it ws awsum n funny
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Posted: 9 years ago
Oh my God !!

I thought he was going to propose her or maybe ask her for a Divorce (weird) 😆

But, Bed ka right side? 🤣

That was awesome !!

Edited by Cookielicious - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
omg.. this was amazing...
🤣🤣
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Posted: 9 years ago
Wow... that was awesome!!!!!!!!!!!🤣
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Posted: 9 years ago
awesome.. Like it.. At first i was like how sweet but at last i was like 'WHAT THE!!!'.. Hehehehe.. Thanks for pm..
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hahahah🤣
Wt was dis???? It's epic...
Really dint expect...
He does dis for right side of bed.🤣