Priya's Birthday Gift.....OS - Page 2

Posted: 9 years ago


This is small piece for my lovely nanad...as her birthday gift๐Ÿ˜ƒ...Thank you Valli for helping me๐Ÿ˜ณ  and thank you rashmi for encouraging me to post it...๐Ÿ˜ณ




Geet is pacing in the hall...waiting for Maan's call...she called him thrice but he was busy in a meeting...

 

Geet - yeh Maan aaj ka din bhul gaye...kitna kaam hai...aur yeh jaake meeting mein baith gayi...inhe toh koi kadar hi nahi hai...kitni saaree shoping karni hai...cake lena hai,,,,,gifts khareedna hai...phir ghar aake tayyar hona hai...aur party mein bhi toh time se pehle pohunchna hai...yeh Maan abhi tak call kyun nahi kiya

 

Geet again started pacing in the hall...she tried once again and  the same recorded msg came...she thumped on the couch...


On the other side...Maan came out of his meeting and checked his mobile...There were missed calls from Geet...

 

He immediately called her...Geet answered in one ring  and set on hoshiyarpur express mode...

 

Maan called her to office to save time of travelling to and fro...Geet reached office ...and both left for shopping...

 

Maan - Geet yeh batao ki kya kya kahreedna hai

Geet- Pehle Cake...

They bought a very beautiful cake with awesome flavours...

Happy Birthday Scraps, Wishes with Graphics for Orkut, Myspace 


Maan - Next

Geet - Flowers...

Maan - Ok...

 

They got very beautiful flowers...


 

Maan - Next

Geet - Gifts...

They went to the Mall and got gifts...

 

Happy Birthday Scraps, Wishes with Graphics for Orkut, Myspace


Maan - Geet itne saare gifts...


Geet - Haa Maan...waha meri bohut saari saheliya hai...unsab ke liye bhi maine kuch na kuch liya hai...they all are special to me...

 

Maan got into the car...they rode towards their home to get ready for the party...


Maan - Geet mujhe apne inn doston ke bare mein batao...kaun kaun hai...


Geet - Yeh saare mere friends nahi hain maan...balki hamare fans hai...


Maan - Lekin hamara show toh khatam hogayana...toh fans kaise...


Geet - Haa..Maan show khatam hogaya aur bohut saare log aage badh gaye...par duniya mein aaj bhi aise log hain jo hame har din... har lamha yaad karte hai...jaise ki yeh log...yeh lo IF naam ke ek site pe members hain...aur hume roz yaad karte hain...Koi hamre siggies banata hain toh koi VM's banata hai aur koi humare naam pe stories likhte hain...

 

Maan - Jaise ki...


Geet - Ek shruthe hain...jo bohut hi ache siggies aur banners banati hain...aur woh banners kayi stories mein use karte hain...


Aur ek Rashmi hain...jo bohut hi achi stories likti hain...haa logon ko thoda rulati hai par bohut hi achi likhti hain...


Ek babbie hai...woh bhi ek achi writer hain...woh toh har roz update karti hain...aur mujhe uska update ka intezaar hota hain...


Ek mona hain...woh toh itna acha likti hai...main bata nahi sakti...ek baar aap bhi padhlo...aap bhi addict hojaoge...woh emotions likne mein mahir hain...pata hain usne hamare naam pe ek aur nayi story shuru ki hain...


Aur lakshu hain...jo siggies aur banners banati hain...aaj kal woh humari kahani ko pictures mein bata rahi hain...main toh uske updates padhke hamari saare yaadein taza karleti hoon...


Aur VAlli hain...jo aapki sabse badi fan hain...jaha aapka pic dikha waha like karti hain aur drool bhi karti hain...aur uske gaal laal laal hojate hain...woh toh aapki dewani hain poori tarah,... aur aaj kal woh  VM's  bhi banana lagi...


Maan - Acha toh mujhe usse zaroor milna hoga...


Geet - Kya...


Maan - mera matlab hain ki tumhare saare dostonse...

 

Aur Praff hain...woh bhi writer hain...haaye kitna acha likhti hain...lekin tedhi hain...kisi bhi baat ko seedhe tareeke se jawab nahi deti...๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜†

 

Aur dona hain...Payal hain...aur insab se choti...humari Bollywood Express hain...aur bhi bohut saare hain...main sab ke naam abhi nahi lesakti...jab party mein jaayenge tab mila doongi sab se...

 


Maan - acha yeh batao ki party kiske liye hain...

 

Geet - arre asli baat toh reh gayi hain...yeh party Priya ke liye hain...aaj uska birthday hain...toh sab dost milkar usse ek surprise derahe hain...


Maan - Acha yeh Priya kya karti hain...


Geet - Priya...woh toh bohut kuch karti hain...woh siggies banati hain...banners banati hain.Vm's banati hain ...


Aapko pata hain woh sabki help bhi bohut karti hain...agar koi usse kahe ki kuch chaihye...toh minuton mein karke dedeti hain...


Uske banners bohut se log use karte hain...jaise ki Rashmi, Babbie, Mona...Indu...Pooja...Dr. ...Sab use karte hain...Aur pata hain insab mein woh indu haina woh priya ko bohut tank karti hain...priya ke bholepan ka faayda uthati hain...ek story likhti jo kisiko samajh mein nahi aati...woh priya ko kehti hain ki pics chahiye toh...bechari priya dhoondke deti hain...kehti hain ki banner chahiye ...toh Priya banake deti hain...par madam ko ek baar mein pasand kaise aayega...bechari priya ko kitni baar corrections karni padti hain...mujhe bohut gussa aata hain uspar...๐Ÿ˜ก

 

Maan  - Yeh indu wahi hain...jo hamesha mujhe...smart aur intelligent dikhati hain...๐Ÿ˜†


Geet - Zyyada tareef karne ki zaroorat nahi hain chaliye...aur ek baat bataoon...Priya ke banaye siggie dekh karr...BB ko...matlab Kalpana ko ek poori series ki idea aagayi...aur Priya har story par comment zaroor deti hain...aisi hain meri priya...aur uske party mein mujhe late nahi hona hain...toh main chali ready hone...aap bhi jaldi ready hojayiye...

 


Maan and Geet get ready and leave for the party...


Priya is overwhelmed to see the love of her friends...all are enjoying the party and aur surprise guests came...arre aur koi nahin Maan aur Geet...

 

Maan aur Geet ne Priya ko wish kiya aur saare gifts diye usse...

 

All the girls requested Maan and Geet for a Dance...They readily agreed and They danced on Priya's favourite number...


Geet left from there to get his dinner and all the girls surrounded him...Maan is also enjoying the attention...and looked at geet...he thought that he would  see her jealous...but to his surprise.Geet is very calm and composed...


Maan excused himself from there and went to geet...Geet ffered him his plate ..Maan asked...


Geet tum mujhe unsab ke beech mein chodke ke kaisi jaa sakti ho...itna bharosa hain mujh par...


Geet -  bharosa hain Maan aap par...par aapse zyaada innlogo par...Woh Geet aur Maan ko abhi bhi laga nahi hone denge...unke beech mein kisis ko aane nahi denge...unke liye Maan aur geet do insaan nahi hain...unke liye hum Maaneet hain...toh mujhe unse koi darr nahi hain...


Chaliye ab chate hain ...


They went to priya...again wished her and left from there...and this is a dream come true for Priya and others...

 

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Yeh meri pagal pan ki ek jhalak hain...๐Ÿคช...


Happy Birthday Priya...๐Ÿ˜ƒ...Love u a Lot...๐Ÿค—...โค๏ธ...


Sorry If I have hurted Someone...Plz pehli galti samajh ke maaf kardo๐Ÿ˜ณ




Edited by -indu- - 9 years ago
Posted: 9 years ago
That was just awesome
idea bahut achchha hai \nanad ko gift dene ke liye
superb work
but the way you included Maan and Geet was just Mind blowing
waise ye idea kab aaya tere dimaag me๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†
Edited by rashmivaish - 9 years ago
Posted: 9 years ago
wow awesome OS dear!!! Loved the way you explained the IF and Mannetians...so true some of us can never move on...
And Priya!!! Happy Birthday dear!! Wish you an wonderful life ahead!!!๐Ÿ˜Š
Posted: 9 years ago
awesome gift di...
lovely
Posted: 9 years ago
best birthday gift , just lost in birthday ,
invitation to hai na ,
and about valli to good yaar ,
di ki to poll khol di 
Posted: 9 years ago
Wah wah indu di app ku kya hau aur yeh kya tha...?๐Ÿคฃ๐ŸคฃEdited by paripayal - 9 years ago
Posted: 9 years ago
Superb fantastic and phenomenal OS.

I can't explain in word how much I loved it. I think it's one of the best B'day gift of Priya and she will also agree with it. 
Posted: 9 years ago
yeh meri khushi ki aansoon hai jo itna behrahi hai๐Ÿ˜†

sachi this is the best gift 


thank u bhabhi ji 


meri bday par meri saari friends ke saath saath maaneet bhi entry maari๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†


aur meri itni tareef๐Ÿ˜ณmujhe na bohut sharm aarahi hai๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†
Posted: 9 years ago
Originally posted by priya111111


yeh meri khushi ki aansoon hai jo itna behrahi hai๐Ÿ˜†

sachi this is the best gift 


thank u bhabhi ji 


meri bday par meri saari friends ke saath saath maaneet bhi entry maari๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†


aur meri itni tareef๐Ÿ˜ณmujhe na bohut sharm aarahi hai๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†
jyada mat sharma
abhi bahut kaam hai tujhe ..
bahut saari wishes accept karni hai

Happy Birthday Priya

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