~Ashlok FF: Written in stars: Ch 50 on pg 138 - Page 17

Originally posted by: Vanzi

Only 17 :-P It reminds me of the movie Lamhe..The Anil and Sridevi Saga. Ohh well if he could fall for her mother and then her...Im pretty sure SHlok can also fall for Ashta😆

Thank you for commenting.yeah but I think anil Kapoor was much more older 🤔

I Love the way u write.. I dint comment on this till nw bt i must say tht i njy ur writings a lot
In prologue or chapter 1 i guess, u wrote abt astha putting her fingers in her mouth and the story abt da bride.. Thats my fav! I jst cant frgt those lines. I hav shard it with almst evryone who r close to me n all ur updates r awsum
i never regret waiting fr ur update..
Posting frm mobile so sorry fr ny mistakes

Awesome update

Originally posted by: pranud

I Love the way u write.. I dint comment on this till nw bt i must say tht i njy ur writings a lot
In prologue or chapter 1 i guess, u wrote abt astha putting her fingers in her mouth and the story abt da bride.. Thats my fav! I jst cant frgt those lines. I hav shard it with almst evryone who r close to me n all ur updates r awsum
i never regret waiting fr ur update..
Posting frm mobile so sorry fr ny mistakes

Originally posted by: Meilliures

Awesome update

But this time update was delayed

But loved it

Originally posted by: Neelum.drashti

Nice update😳

Aww lovely update god can't wait to see her reaction when she finds out about Swati poor girl she will be upset but I hope she doesn't break or get depressed 

what 's there in the luggage?...surprise form shlok to astha?...i am curious...astha already in love with shlok...but shlok is going to open swthi matter soon?...how astha will take it?...sorry for lot of question 😆...mai be na...waiting for your next update 😳

This is such a beautiful story. Really loving it, and I'm addicted to it. Was waiting for u to update. Keep up the amazing writing.

Originally posted by: .Ashleydevlin.

Thank you for your lovely comment😊. I am deeply touched by your words😳. Don't worry about any mistakes😊