FF : MAIN HUN DEEWANA TERA PART 6 PAGE 8

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Posted: 2014-04-19T00:56:56Z

early morning mumbai skyiline with an idol of ganpati bappa one lady doing puja and sing


Vakratunda mahakaaya suryakoti samaprabha


Nirvighnam kuru me deva sarvakaaryesusarvadaaff :mai hun deewana tera


Prathmeshwara gandeshwara


Chintamani parmeshwara


Gannaath surmani ganpati


He ramb shri lambodara


Prathmeshwara gandeshwara


Chintamani parmeshwara


Vakratunda mahakaaya suryakoti samaprabha


Nirvighnam kuru me deva sarvakaaryesu sarvadaa


families other membar came and stand behind her closed  thier eyes and joined thier palms and pray puja


was done she give parashad  to her husband and took his blessing he is head his house owner of kapoor


indutry amarnath kapoor he love his family his family not so big but five membar in his family happy family


his mother his wife krishna kapoor and his two kids ram and natasha


krishna kapoor she is a good wife , mother and  bahu she's take care her of her husband ,kids and her


sasuma she goes to her mother-in-law she give prashad and took her blessing


amarnath,s mother she is nice mother ,nice grandmother and very good motherinlaw she,s lovely person


she,s put her palm krishnas head and say jidi rhe puttar sada kuch rhe


one plam come infront of her she smaile and give prashad she,s amarnath kapoor,s daudthter natasha kapoor


she,s famaily,s jaan evryone love her she took her mother,s blessing and hug her krishna hug her and kiss her


forehead jiti raho bacche she,s gose to her dadi took her blessing and hug her dadi hug har and say khush


rhe puttar and then ran to her father took his blessing and hug her kiss her forehead and say kush raho beta


natasha kapoor youngest daugther of kapoor family she join now kapoor industry and working with his


father amarnath kapoor and natasha talk about today,s meeting


dadi and krishna staring at tham dadi to krishna dekha puttar ghar pe bhi officeki bate chalu hai


krishna : ji biji abhi tho sirf dolog hai jab tisra aayega tho pata nhi hamari koi bat bhi sunega ya nhi


dadi : ha puttar abhi ye hal hai ham yaha hai ye tho indono ko pata bhi hai ya nhi aapas mai hi bate chalu hai


oye khotya amar tum donoko pata bhi hai ham dono bhi yahi rhete hai kabhi ham dono se bhi bat kiya karo


hamesha jab dekho tab office ki bate chalu hoti hai tum dono ki


amarnath to natasha arre bapre ab tho gaye ham dono


amarnath : biji vo


dadi : kya biji vo vo kya ha tum log na apne office ki bate na office main hi chod ke aaya karo samje


krishna smailig at tham and say chalo sab log brekfast ke liye chlo natasha chaliye biji


natasha and dadi gose to dining table and seat dadi to natasha tu bhi aapne papa ki taraha hoti jarhi hai abhi


tuje business join karke sirf do mahine ho gaye hai


natasha : dadi kam tho karnahi padega na vaise muje papa aur bhai se bahot kuch sikhna hai muje papa aur


bhai ki taraha banna hai


amrnath to krishna thanks tumne aaj muje bachaliya nhi tho biji aaj meri class hi laga deti


krishna : ha par aapko bhi tho biji ki bat sunni chahihai na aap log bhi ghar ko office bana dete ho na unebhi


apne bete se bat karni hai vo bhi chati hogi ke pura parivaar milke eksath bethe aur bate kare par aap aur


bacche hamesha kam main hi ulje rehete hain


amarnath : ha krishna tum thik khe rahi ho mai  nhi ham ye bat dhyan rhakhenge ok ab chale brekfast karne


bahot bhuk lagi hai aur der bhi ho rhi hai


krishna smail ji chailye


both gose to dining table and seat


dadi : krishna puttar tu na natasha ko na khana banana bhi shikha do


natasha : kyu


dadi : puttar har kisi ko khana bana na aana chahihin kal ko teri shadi hogi tho tuje khana bana na padega na


agar khana bana na nhi aaya tho tere sasural vale ham logo ko tane marege fir


natasha ; dadi muje shadi nhi karni hai


dadi : shadi tho tuje karni hi padegi har ladki ko karni padti hai


natash : lekin muje nhi karni hai dad bolona dadi ko aur vise bhi agar aapko kisiki shadi karni hai tho vo na


bhai ki karo vo mujse bade hai


dadi : ha tu bilkul thik khe rahi hain amar kaha hai kaha ram ha 3 mahine ho gaye usko na ata hai na patata


krishna : ji biji aap thik khe rahe hai 3 mahine ho gaye abhi bhi konsa kam kar raha hai ye ladka pata nhi


kaisa hoga khuch khata pita bhi hoga ya nhi pura din kam kam kam aur ye sab inki galti hai pata nhi kyu


bheja hai use suniye ab bahot ho gaya bapis bula lijiye use


amarnath : arre ma krishna aap log kaise bate kar rhi ho jaruri kam tha isiliye tho gaya hai vaha aur vo aapna


kam khatam karke hi aayega


dadi : thik hai putter par kab aa raha hai ram


natasha : dadi aap tension mat lijiye bhai kal aa jayege


dadi : tuje bada pata hai tuje bataya hai kya


krishna : ha beta tume kaise pata


natasha : mom dadi aap ko pata hai parso kya hai


dadi and krishna : kya hai


natasha : parso neha bhabhi aue vikram bhai ki 1st marriage anniversary hai une tho aana hi padega na aur


agar nhi aaye tho neha bhabhi ke hat se maar khani padegi


amarnath : neha aur vikarm kishadi ko 1saal ho bhi gaya


krishna : suniye ab hame bhi ram ki shadi kar deni chaihian meri tho ek nhi sunta aap hi usse bat karege


dadi : ha puttar krishna thik khe rahi hai ab ram ke liye ladki dhundni hi padegi


natasha : mom dad and dadi une jaisi ladki chaihihian na vaise ladki dhudna aap logoki ki baski

bat nhi hai


tho aap log unkeliye ladki dhundne ka kam bhai pe hi chod do


krishna : ji aur vo ladki kab tak milegi


natasha : ye tho bhai pe hai vo jitna jaldi karege utna hi jaldi une aapne liye ladki mil jayegi


krishna : aru vo ladki milihi nhi tho


natasha : tho bhai shadi hi nhi karege


krishna and dada : kyaaa


natasha : aap dono chila kyu rahe ho


amarnath : vaise mere najar mai ek ladki hai


natasha : kya dad aapne ladki dhund bhi li


amarnath : ha beta main bhi chata hu ke mera beta bhi shadi kare muje bhi uska parivar

dhekhna hai


dadi : tu thik khe raha hai puttar ham use bat karke dekhenge

  

Edited by shonrayarockss - 2015-04-16T05:11:10Z
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Posted: 2014-04-19T01:13:40Z

Awesome update


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Posted: 2014-04-19T02:46:24Z
Nice start Smile
Continue soon Smile
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Posted: 2014-04-19T04:11:57Z
beginning is good
nice intro of Ram's family
waiting for Priya's entry
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Posted: 2014-04-19T04:28:20Z
Superb start pls now make entry of Raya in ur ff
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Posted: 2014-04-19T10:37:00Z
good start..kiska ha a ff?cntinue soon
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Posted: 2014-05-29T01:55:01Z

part 2

natasha : dad vaise muje bhi ek ladki pasand hai jo bhai ke liye sabse acchi ladki hai aur jasi bhai ko


chahihain bilkul vaise hai


dadi  : tune bhi ram ke liye ladki dhund lihain oye muje bhi ek ladki pasand hain


krishna : sab ne ladki dhund rakhi hain par jise shadi karni hai uska koi ata hai na pata vaise muje bhi ek


ladki pasand hai


amarnath : sabne ladki tho dhunli hai par ram shadi kiske pasand ke ladkise karega


natasha : bhai tho apni pasand ki ladki se shadi karege na


 when she got a massage from ram hey choti kisi ko kuch mat batana  ke mera massage hai tu abhi gharke


bahar aa


natasha read the massage and ran outside


krishna : natasha beta kaha ja rahi hain nashta to kar le


natasha : abhi aai mom


dadi : par ye gai kaha


ram is standing outside of house


natasha ran to him and say bhai aap kab aaye  and hug him


ram hug her back bas abhi aaya hu


natasha : tho yaha kyu khade ho andar kyu nhi aa rahain ho aur muje massage karke kyu kaha kisi ko batana


mat


ram : muje andar aanese dar lagta hain yaar vo dadi meri vaat laga degi


natasha : ha vo tho hain aap ne kam hi aisa kiya hain ab bhugatna tho padega na


ram : aur mom kaha hain and dad


natasha : sab log hain aap chaliye


ram : nhi mom tho mujse bat bhi nhi karegi


natasha : arre bhai aap darte kyu ho sab log apse bahot pyar kate hain aur agar naraj ho bhi gaye tho aap


une mana lena


ram : ok chal


natasha : chaliye best of luck bhai


ram : kisliye


natasha : mom aur dadi ka gussa dekhna padega na aap ko aur


ram : aur kya


natasha : aap ko pata hain mom, dad, dadi and maine aap ke liye ladki dhundi hain


ram : kya musibat hain yaar sab log shadi ke piche kyu pade hain


natasha : bhai muje tho lagta hain is bar aapki shadi hoke hi rahegi


ram : nhi main aaya hi kyu hu main ja raha hu phirse


natasha : kyu


ram : tum logo ne mere liye ladki jo dhundi hain muje apni pasand ki ladki se shadi karni hain


natasha : accha tho aapki pasand ladki hain kaha


ram : vahi tho nhi pata pata nhi kaha chup ke bheti hain


natasha : tab tak hamari pasand ki ladki dhekhi ye


ram : accha par ye bata tum sab ne ek hi ladki pasand ki hain ya alag alag


natasha : mom , dad aur dadi ka muje pata nhi par meri vali alag hain


ram : sab ki pasand alag hain sorry yaar main tum logo ki pasand ki ladkiyo se shadi nhi kar sakta


natsaha : kyu


ram : main 4 ladkiyose kaise shadi kar sakta hu


natasha : 4 aap ko sirf 1 ladkise shadi karni hain


ram : ha par sabne alag alag ladki dhundi hain agar main kisi ek ki pasand ki ladki se shadi karunga tho


baki 3 logo ka dil tut jayega na aur main tum sab logo se kitna pyar karta hu na


nataha : ok ok samaj gai main aap sirf bahane hi banavo chaliye ab andar


ram : ok choti chal


natasha : bahi aap muje choti mat bulavo


ram : kyu


natasha : ab main badi ho gai hu


ram : ha tu badi ho gai hain par mujse tho choti hain na choti


natasha : bhai abhi dadi ko bulau


ram : nhi chal vaise tu badi ho gai hain tho teri shadi kar dete hain


natasha : dadiii


ram put his hand in her mouth sorry sorry natasha kapoor chale andar


natasha : ha chali ye


ram : tu ja phele main ata hu


natasha : enter mom


krishana : arre tu kaha gai thi chal aaja nashta kar le


natasha look back and say bhai came na


krishana : tu vaha khadi hoke kya kar rahi hain aur phiche kya dekh rahi hain


natasha : ma vo


dadi : kya hua puttar kone hain bahar


natasha : aap aa rahe ho ya nhi


ram ha ruk na


amarnath : kise bat kar rahi ho beta


natasha : mom, dad ,dadi aap logo ke liye ek surprise hain aur uski entry bhi kuch khas honi chahiye


ba adab ba mulaiza hoshiyarkapoor khandan ke chirag sahenshah ram kapoor tashreef la rahe hain


everyone were surprised to hear this


ram enter walked to the his dad took his blessing and hug him aap kaise ho dad


amarnath : main tho thik hu tum batao aur sab kam kaisa chal raha hain


ram : sab accha chal raha hai dad aur jo problem thi vo sari solv ho gai hain


amarnath : muje pata hain beta tum sab kuch solv kar loge


dadi to krishna dekha puttar abhi aaya hain par ye nhi ke aake hamse mile dekho bap beta kam ke bare


main bat kar rahe hain aane do main tho isse bat hi nhi karne vali


krishna : aap thik khe rahi ho biji


ram took a step towards dadi and took her blessing and krishna she just moved back


ram : dadi aap nujse bat nhi karogi


dadi look otherside dadi plz yaar sorry mujse bat karo na agar aap mujse bat nhi karte ho tho muje bilkul


accha nhi lagta plz dadi mujse bat karona and make papy face


dadi smile oye khotya tuje ab dadi ki yad aa rahi hain 3 mahino tak hamari yad nhi aai ha vaha jake bheth


gaya tha tum log hamesha kam kam karte rhete ho aur tum logo ke pass hamareliye time hi nhi hota hain


ram : sorry dadi aagese aisa nhi hoga paka


dadi : tu rhenede kuch mat bol tu bhi apne papa jaisa hota ja raha hain aur teri bhen bhi jab se office kya


join kiya hain ghar main rukti hi nhi


ram : dadi plz ab ki bar maf kar do agli bar se aisa nhi hoga and hug har plz dadi dadi hug him back aaj tho


maf kar deti hu par dubara aisa kiya na tho dekh lena


  ram took a step towards momand took her blessing  krishna she just moved back  


ram  : mom plz yaar aap bhi mujse naraj ho plz mom muje accha nhi lagta jab aap mujse naraj hote ho


plz mom muje dato maro par aise chup mat raho plz mom bat karo na mujse


ram look her dadi and adn say dadi kuch karo na mom mujse bat nhi kar rahi hain


dadi : krishna  jane de beta bat kar le isse nhi tho abhi rone lagega


krishana : biji ise hamari koi fikar nhi hain tho ham kyu kare iski fikar ye tho chala jata hain ise tho hamari 


yaad bhi nhi aati hagi ham hi iski inti chinta karte rhete hain aur tu kyu aaya hain bapas ha ata hain fir kuch din


rahega fir chala jayega


amarnath : nhi krishna ab ye khahi nhi jayega yahi rahega tumare paas


ram : mom plz i am sorry muje maf kar do 


krishna : accha thik hain main tuje maf kar dungi par tuje meri ek bat manni hogi


ram : konsi bat mom


krishna : phele ye bata ha ya na


ram ti himslfe ab kya hain yaar kya karu ha bolu


ram : ok mom 


krishana : tu mere liye ek acchi si bahu leke aa


dadi : ha ram puttar ab bas ho gaya muje bhi teri biwi ko dekhna hain


natasha nd amarnath smile and say dad bhai tho gaye lagta hain mom aur dadi bhai ki shadi kara ke rahen ge


ram : mom dadi main kha mana kiya hain par aap ke liye acchi bahu dhundne main time tho lagega na


krishna : main teri koi bat nhi sunne vali hu tuje shadi karni hogi main tuje 1 mahine ka time deti hu tu mereliye


apni pasand ki ladki dhund nhi tho ham sabne ladki dhund rakhi hain 


ram : mom plz


dadi : oye chup kar teri ma sahi khe rahi hain ab tu ja ja ke fresh ho ja safar main thak gaya hoga


ram : ji dadi


amarnath : ha beta tum aram karo ab ham bhi chalte hain office 


ram : dad main bhi ata hu


amarnath : nhi tum aaram karo kal se aa jana


ram : ok dad 


natasha : bye bhai


ram : bye chotiii and ran upstairs ti his room


nathasha : dad bolo na


natasha and amarnath bid bye to dadi and krishna


ram  was standing in his room staring at the room kitna accha lagta hain apne ghar aake par mom aur dadi ka


kya karu ab itni jaldi ladki kaha se dhundu yaar kya musubat hain abhi main ghar main rahunga tho bar bar


yahi chalu rahega ek kam karta hu thodi der rest karta hu fir office chala jata hu kitne din ho gaye arre din


nhi mahine ho gaye vikram se nhi mila aur uaski pagal biwi


kapoor industry


amarnath kapoor enter all staf wish him good morning


amarnath wish them back


thodi der bad nathasha bhi aa jati hain aur apne cabin main jati hain aur ram kr bare maun soch thi hain


aaj bhai tho gaye ab une sahdi karni hai padegi  isbar mom aur dadi manevali nhi hain and smile but kitna 


accha hota agar bhaiki shadi use hoti jise maine chuna hain


suddenly knock on the door


main andar aa sakti hu mam


natasha are aa na puch kyu rahi hain


nhi yaar lagta hain tu kisi ke khayalo main khoi hui hain tho


nathasha  cut her nd say ruko ruko main kisi ke khaya lo main nhi khoi hui hu bas muje mere bhai ki halat


pe hasi aa rahi hain pata hain aaj bhai u s a se bapas aaye hain 3 mahino bad aur mom aur dadi ne unki aisi


calss li hain bichare aur vo sorry bolte ja rahe the par mom ne khaha ki une tab mafi milgi jab vo unki bat


manege aur vo bat kya hain pata hain une mom aur dadi ke liye bahu lani hogi apni pasand ki une 1 mahine 


ka time diya hain varna une hamari pasand ki ladki ke sath shadi karni hogi


tho tu has kyu rahi hain tere bhai kitne pareshn hoge 


suddenly knock on the door and peon come and say mam amarnath sir ne app dono ko bulaya hain


both goes his cabin 


amarnath : come sit tum dono ko join hui sirf 3 mahine hui hain par tum dono ka kam dekh kar muje accha 


laga tum dono acha kam kar rahi ho aur ab hamare pass do naye projects aaye hain tho main chata hu tum 


dono bhi ismain assist  karo natasha tum vikram ko assist karogi aur priya tum ram ko assist karogi


priya sharma natashas best friend and work in kapoor indastry


natasta : ok dad main aur vikram bhai ke sath bahot maja ayega 


amarnath : hmm aur usse sabkuch sikh lena


natasha : ok dad 


amarnath : priya tu ram ko assist karogi tum use mili nhi ho vo kal se office aa jayega 


priya : ok sir


ram : mom main thodi der ke liye office ja ke ata hu


krishna : ram tu aaj hi aaya hain kuch der aaram kar aur kal se chale jana office


ram : mom thodi der main aa jaunga bye bye bye and ran outside


krishna : ram ram suno ye ladke ke per ghar main nhi rhete 


dadi : jane de puttar ye log nhi sunege ham dono hain na ek dusreke sath 


krishana : ji biji and smile to her


ram enter in kapoor indastry all wish him he wish them back


ram go towards natashas caibin hey chotiii


natasha : aap yaha kya kar rahe ho


ram : dekhne aaya hu meri chotiii bhehen kaise kam karti hian


natasha : bhaiii aap muje yaha bhi choti kyu bula rahe ho ye office hain aur sab ke samne


ram : kyuki tu meri chotiii bhehen hain aur sab ke samne kaha yaha tho sirf ham dono hi tho hain


natasha : agar itni jor se bologe tho sabko pata chalrga na 


ram ok tho dhire se bolu chotiii


natasha : main dad ko aapka man bataungi 


ram : accha but dad ko tho mera nam pata hain


natasha : bhaiii vaise pata hain hame do projects mile hain 1 vikram bhaiko mila hain aur dusra aapko


aur main vikram bhai ko assist karne vali hu 


ram : accha aur vikram ko assist karegi tho muje kon karega


nathasha : ro kyu rahe ho aap ko priya assist karegi


ram : priyaaa ye kon hain


natasha : ladki hain 


ram ; accha muje tho pata hi nhi tha  chal main chala 


natahsh : kaha 


ram dad se milne 


natasha : accha mujelaga priya se milne


ram ; accha chotiii kam kar apna aur ye bata vikram aaya hain kaya aaj


natasha : ha bhaiii


ram : byeee chotiii


natasha : bhaiii


ram enter amarntha cabin adn say dad 


amarnath : ram aavo andar tum yaha kya kar rahe ho


ram ; dad aise hi dad ghar main vo mom aur dadi 


amarnath : dono sahi khe rahe hain beta shadi tho kheni hi padegi 


ram : ji dad but 1 mahine main kaise


amarnath : vo tum bhagvan pe chod do


ram : ji dad 


amaenath : ram hame 2 naye projegts mile hain main chata hu ek tum sabhlo aur dusra vikram


ram : ji dad choti ne batya 


amarnath : tho tume priya assist karegi


ram : ji dad 

Edited by shonrayarockss - 2014-05-29T01:52:57Z
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i will read and comment   some time later..
   two   updates in one page  wow yaar .. too good 




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