Paro-Rudra OS: Comely (Mature? May be...) |18th April| - Page 12

Posted: 9 years ago
This one, this one, this one!!!! This is the one I love the most. I really enjoy your writing but this one is special. There is just that something about it. It sets just the right tone, the right mood. Write a second part! 😃
Posted: 9 years ago
Originally posted by SherryGS


This one, this one, this one!!!! This is the one I love the most. I really enjoy your writing but this one is special. There is just that something about it. It sets just the right tone, the right mood. Write a second part! 😃


Thank you so much..this is part of an SS that I started writing.. But kind of drifting now, not able to move forward with the story..inshallah, inspiration will strike soon and I will be able to continue..

So happy to know that you liked this OS so much!!
🤗
Posted: 9 years ago
I loved it! True, Paro can look good and equally attractive in any outfit. I want to see Paro in a beautiful churidar in the show once, just to see Rudra's reaction.
I loved the way you described the intensity of Rudra's desire too. 
I'm looking forward to more of your work ðŸ˜³
Posted: 9 years ago
Maya, this is too good...
i  hope u find your inspiration soon...   🤗   


Posted: 9 years ago
oh wow!!! Another good one. You've just proved that no matter what Paro is wearing, be it fancy or simple, Rudra will always find something (or almost everything actually ðŸ˜†) to love about Paro. Loved how you described the minute details (from Rudra's POV) about Paro. 
But, THAT ending... normally I don't like endings like that. But, this one lets you imagine the possibilities!! ðŸ˜³ðŸ˜† My imagination has been on fire lately coz of RR.😛


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