I am on a train...with my husband next to me, immersed in his book...as i idly refresh the IF screen on my ipad...and suddenly exclaim,,,whattt???!!!
Making my husband look up...glance at my screen...and shake his head..muttering something about me and fanfictions...
But of course, i was shrieking with delight, having seen a story by semanti on the rr forum...
That was...sexy!! Sexily subtle i mean... Loved the way Paro communicated just with her eyes and her expressions...and Laila has no trouble understanding her...
These women share a weird bond...their love for the same man binding them together in hatred..but liked your twist..the almost-sympathy and the advice about the real world and its cruelties..
Hope you're going to write more... Please please please!!
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