Originally posted by StripePurple
You have style. 😆
No but seriously, this was really good. I'm not a PaRud fan at all, but I liked the Q&A thing going on here. Some of Rudra's lines, especially, had a very poetic touch to them. The whole setting in fact...the moonlit room, the woman on the bed, and the man watching her from his uncomfortable bed on the floor...your words were evocative without turning into hardcore description. & what really got me were the sly touches of humour in between- Paro thinking he deserves to be on the floor (which he totally does), and the oh-so-macho Rudra secretly worried about the creepy-crawlies on the floor. Melted my heart.
Hope to read more from you soon. :)
Thank you!
Well, I kept it abstract on purpose. I want to use this as a starting point to other pieces I may write... Let's see how it goes there!
