Parud ss Never Healing Wounds part 1 up

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Posted: 2014-04-10T03:51:29Z

Hey guys I am very new to this Forum..I do write for MEIEJ and IPPKNDEBP forum want to try something on Parud as well

 

PARUD-ss Never Healing Wounds

The loud noise of someone screaming brought everyone out to the hall where Rudra was busy beating up Sumer. Mohini rushed to help her son but stopped seeing the mad glint visible on Rudra's face. She watched terrified as he continued landing blows despite Samrat and her husband and Ranawat tried to control him but of no use. Sumer by now was half dead; and before Rudra could kill him a voice stopped him.

"Stop it Rudra please..."It belonged to his wife Parvati as she tried to release his hold from Sumer's neck.

All Rudra could see was the pain in her eyes, the pain he had caused due to his misunderstandings in not one but many ways making him hurt her so much that she was now reduced into a mere spirit of  her shadow. She had gone quitter, paler, weak and appeared thoroughly exhausted because of all the pain he had given her..

She was no longer the Paro he knew.

After 4 months of continuous torture he had given her he learnt only today that he was wrong about her and had punished an innocent girl; the girl who was his love and his soul reason to live. All she had wanted was to heal him with her love but now it would take Rudra a life time to heal her, as she was scared of the word LOVE

 

Good, bad, ok should I continue?

 

Edited by smritiz - 2014-04-25T08:51:56Z
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Posted: 2014-04-10T03:53:52Z
i liked it..do continueSmile
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Posted: 2014-04-10T04:06:55Z
Great start do continue
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Posted: 2014-04-10T04:10:22Z
Pls cont...wanna know what rudra gonna do to heal paro...
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Posted: 2014-04-10T05:43:38Z
intersting plz continue
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Posted: 2014-04-10T05:57:45Z
Brill start! :)
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Posted: 2014-04-10T06:09:25Z
wonderful start. do update me on ur updates.  congrats for the lovely concept
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Posted: 2014-04-10T06:29:30Z
This was fab.
Do continue soon.
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