OS: Smoulder (Mature) 6/4/14

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Posted: 2014-04-05T11:56:44Z


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Posted: 2014-04-05T12:08:26Z
Although I reserved the first post I haven't replied back, let's just say I don't have time to sit and read lol, I do on da run here and der posting n dats it. My comments are jus short sentences n dats about it

Anyway getting back to your post! Damn girl your such a fab writer!! Who leaves da reader dreaming!Edited by Jaz1990 - 2014-04-07T04:12:42Z
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Posted: 2014-04-05T12:16:35Z
Clap.. Hawt as promised!  Embarrassed.. I liked the way , how you made it to be all about the scars.. Perfect stage for what followed..Beauty! 
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Posted: 2014-04-05T12:17:25Z
yeh kya hai baisa !! OMG !! now I need a rudrr to ermm comfort me or  a cold shower to jerk me back to reality !! U hav become a Puck, and teasing us mercilessly with such smolderingly alive descriptions !Blushing 
pehle sense mein aane de, a proper feedback will be posted LOL
Edited by shreya_rc - 2014-04-05T12:18:07Z
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Posted: 2014-04-05T12:20:55Z
Oooh Hawtt!! EmbarrassedBig smile Loved the story, Niyoti! Made my weekend. Beautifully written. Love this Rudra who has the nerve or lack of control to carry through with what he craves, and this Paro who is not too inhibited to give in to what she desires. Lots of smoulder!! Big smile Clap I'll be re-reading it in a mo'.
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Posted: 2014-04-05T12:21:46Z
still Blushing Embarrassed nice dear


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Posted: 2014-04-05T12:21:47Z
OMG Clap

That was AMAZING Embarrassed

CVs need to read this...i so want this scene on the show ...i could feel their emotions, rudras desperation...paros shybess and nervousness

I found the first half very amusing...rudra looking as ifs caught with his hand in the cookie jar ROFL

Please you have to write again Embarrassed I could feel my face grow hot towards the end Embarrassed Wink
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Posted: 2014-04-05T12:23:45Z
Originally posted by shreya_rc


yeh kya hai baisa !! OMG !! now I need a rudrr to ermm comfort me or a cold shower to jerk me back to reality !! U hav become a Puck, and teasing us mercilessly with such smolderingly alive descriptions !Blushing
pehle sense mein aane de, a proper feedback will be postedLOL


Shreyoo i dont know about cold showers but im definately off to wash my face with cold water and have a nice cold drink of water Wink LOL
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