PaRud OS: Musings And Memories

Posted: 2014-04-04T09:14:14Z

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Posted: 2014-04-04T09:27:25Z
A very nice OS with a completely different take but still gathering some aspects of the real thing. Brilliant
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Posted: 2014-04-04T09:28:33Z

Clap Clap .whoa.dat was one fast paced story dear.u gavd us evrything we need.saari mangein poori kar di.. Tongue

Sweet name peehu Embarrassed Edited by zanayaforever - 2014-04-04T09:27:49Z
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Posted: 2014-04-04T10:32:19Z
Beautiful OS. You weaved a complete story in single shot Amazingly. Loved it. Heart
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Posted: 2014-04-04T11:06:44Z
this is amazing.. liked the happy ending in the last..
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Posted: 2014-04-04T11:07:55Z
Oh peehu this is so sweet storyEmbarrassed
i enjoyed a lot reading it.Day Dreaming
it was so beautiful and perfect
I love young Rudra. He was a very lively and innocent boy despite being a son of a wealthy man. His innocence won sad Parvati heart's and his soothing words acted like a balm on her grief of loosing her parents. Their friendship was very pure. Love the way you present it.
Their remain connected through letters. Parvati was right that letters will bring them more together and their friendship grew more stronger, it was very cute tradition between them.
Poor Rudra his father ignore it and also hid the letter of paro. I am hating him, he was so selfish and full of ego. 
At first i thought that Rudra did wrong to broke all ties with his father but i realize it was right because he did deserve it.
Love the magical scene when Rudra and parvati meet again. Just like he once fade away parvati grief, he again acted as her shield, his very own body guard. 
They were meant to find each other again.
He kissed her in front of all. He was already in love with her since from their childhood, all what needed was to accept it. 
Love the proposal, it was lovely. 
I love the contrast and the way you depict past and present. 
Love the end especially the quote in the end. 
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Posted: 2014-04-04T11:16:36Z
this was so beautiful...!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 2014-04-04T11:41:23Z
Originally posted by Jaz1990

A very nice OS with a completely different take but still gathering some aspects of the real thing. Brilliant

thank you. glad you liked it :)
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