Parud One Shot---THIRST (New--22nd March) - Page 2

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I dont have words to appreciate your work, it was full of emotions , and i think that parexcellence is a small word for this unique piece of writing!!!!!! LOVED IT

Awesome OS..thoroughly loved it..could visualize each amd every scene..except maithili's reaction..can't wrap my head arnd it yet :(

Naps that was sooo beautiful! My heart hurts for these two!

The fact that she kept going back To him, and he kept accusing was just so sad.
And then at the end she leaves him, and now his the one that needs her. 🥺 Edited by Jaz1990 - 10 years ago

I am sorry to take up the first page and leave an inane comment, but I couldn't wait. This is so... brilliant. No really. I really could imagine that these brilliant actors could really do with this for their script and bring it so alive for us. Too bad that this is not what we will get. I hope Rudra is able to make the leap of faith and not put Paro through the fire. I have faith, somehow. Like I also have faith in Maithili 😆

trust me sis, this made me feel so much better. Damn it was good LOL. Loved the Dilsher/Paro parts the best. you capture their characters especially dilsher's sarcastic humor perfectly. And of course the cherry on the top was rudra searching for paro at the end. *sigh*

Amazing piece of writing :) hope cvs read this and get inspired!

😭 Paro..

thank you! thank you for writing this! Maitili's reaction was the last straw! Finally got some peace...  n here is a heartfelt wish that at least some of this or something soothing like this may happen..

as u said, yes there is a limit to goodness and forgiveness! And Paro's behavior with each person is what should rightly be.. and i honestly think u have gotten Parvati... better than the writers who write the show..
And she indeed needs that time away.. to as u said, to heal herself.. as both she and Rudra had some space to reevaluate... before forging a future together..

beautifully written! loved it like everything else u have written till no! 🤗
 
Edited by princessunara - 10 years ago

I read this like five times. And now I feel fit to respond.Edited by Exprimere - 10 years ago