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REPOST: RaYa FF - Tu Mera Humsaaya Part 5, note on Page 7(My first FF)

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Posted: 10 years ago
Hey guys..
was scrolling through my laptop a few days back and found this.. I had written the ff long ago and poster it here too I guess.. Some of u must've read it.. But for others, here goes.. Tu mera humsaaya once more..
And for those who have read it, u guys can read it again.. I would love the extra likes and comments..
There are 25 parts to the story.. Ill post one part each day..
The story starts from the 1st leap back in 2012 where we got our cute lil Peehu.. Theres no peehu in this story coz I wrote this much before the leap happened.. I thought of this when there were rumours of a 5 year leap and Priya being a mother to a baby..
So here goes..
TTU MERA HUMSAAYA!! Ek baar phir😉

" Jo aap sunna chahte hai na.. Mai bolti hu...
I Love You...I Love You...I Love You... and i really really do"
" Priya mat jao please.. mai nai jee paunga tumhare bagair..
I Love You Priya.."
" Priya tum jo chahe karo mai seh lunga..
Bas mujhe chod ke jane ki baat mat karo"
" Agar tum apne iss nalayak bhai ka sath dena chahti ho na toh phir ek kaam karo.. tum yehi reh jao.. I don't want uback.."
" Maine faisla kiya hai ke mai aaj se iss ghar me nai balki uss ghar me rahungi..
Apne bhai ke sath.. Apne maa Papa aur choti behan ke sath.."

it had been 5 years since she met him.. but he still ruled her thoughts.. Suddenly there was somethingm disturbing her...
"Priya.. Priya kaha ho tum yaar?", He called, "Kab se awaz laga raha hu!!.."
Priya: Shekar mai kamre me hu.. Aa jao
A handsome guy entered the room with a kid of about 3 or 4... The kid ran to Priya and hugged her..
Priya took the kid in her arms and kissed him...
Shekar: Lagta hai koi Ganga maiyya ko competition de raha tha.. Come on Priya.. Move on...
Priya: Nai shekar.. Aisi baat nai hai... Maa india paunch gayi?? Aur meri nanand??
Shekar: Ha wo log toh paunch gaye.. aur agar umhe shaadi me rehna hai toh hume abhi nikalna hoga... Maine gadi bulwa liya hai aur saaman bhi rakhwa diya hai.. chalo warna flight miss ho jayegi!!
The leave from there..
INDIA.. 2 days later
Ram is standing near his window with a pic of priya in his hands...
Ram: Kaash Priya, Kaash ki tum aaj bhi mere sath hoti.. Mere paas... I Love You Priya.. Aur tumhe jane dena meri sabse badi bhool thi...
Niharika entered the room just then...
Nih: Baby, Kya kar rahe ho.. Kyu apne aap ko itni takleef de rahe ho.. Jo hona tha wo ho gya na baby.. Ab jane bhim do..
Ram quickly wipes his tears and turns around..
Ram: maa kuch kaam tha?
Nih: Ha baby, wo tumhare manager ka phone aya tha.. Keh raha tha ki tumhara phone nai lag raha.. office me kuch complication aa gya hai aur tumhe urgently bulaya hai!!
Ram:Ok maa, Mai jata chala jaunga...
Ram leaves for office and Nih goes to Shineys room...
Shiney: Oye sweety penji, kya hua.. Tuje dekh kar lag raha hai jaise bandar ke hath se kisine kela cheen liya ho.. Bata na kya baat hai!!
Nih: Bhaiyya, ye mota 45 ki umar me bhi Romeo bana baitha hai.. aaj mbhi uss bhikaran ke liye aasu baha raha hai.. Naa kaam pe jata hai na kuch aur.. Aise toh Kapoor Industries barbaad ho jayega aur mun phir se raste pe aa jayenge...
Shiney: Oye shub shub bol sweety..Shub shub bo... Kuch nai hoga.. Chal jake SKAACH  peete hai... Oye chal...
Meanwhile, Ram has finished with his meeting and driving towards KM.. He sees Priya's faveouerite kulfi wala and decides to have a kulfi there..
He takes his kulfi and stands leaning on his car watching the road and enjoying the kulfi when he sees HER!!!
 
 
Excuse me for the errors guys.. Havent proof read it earlier and havent done it now either.. Exams comin up in 3 days.. Gtg.. Back to studies..
Edited by RaYaKapoor - 10 years ago

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luvsakshi thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hey ...
Thanks for poting it again ..
I feel i read it but again its giving a fresh remeberence ..
So Priya and Ram were separate 😭
Ram is longing  for priya ..
Nih  😡here again
well atlast he saw her ..
what will be his reaction ..
waiting eagerly

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Posted: 10 years ago
Originally posted by: luvsakshi

Hey ...
Thanks for poting it again ..
I feel i read it but again its giving a fresh remeberence ..
So Priya and Ram were separate 😭
Ram is longing  for priya ..
Nih  😡here again
well atlast he saw her ..
what will be his reaction ..
waiting eagerly

 
Dude u have read this obviously.. Tere comments bhi hai har part pe..
but hope u enjoy reliving the journey again!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
amazing waiting for next one 
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Posted: 10 years ago
hey very nice start❤️...I always enjoy reading the FFs of first or second season
but bahuth choti hai length thoda bada kardo na...
continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
Originally posted by: RaYaKapoor

 
Dude u have read this obviously.. Tere comments bhi hai har part pe..
but hope u enjoy reliving the journey again!!



Kya karu ...
I might forgot 😆
But if i go read on next part deffo I will get my memory back
anyway nice to read it again ..
man kartha hai tera old thread search karo our read it
But as iam in office ..
still some more ffs pending too
so will be wait here 😆
P.S:Still your exams are there infront
than bhag yaha se our when you feel come here again 😆
All the best for your exams 👍🏼
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Posted: 10 years ago
Sounding nice
Waiting for next
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Posted: 10 years ago
intresting
hope they unite soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
Originally posted by: lpsakshi

amazing waiting for next one 

 
Hey thanks!! :)
Next part up tomorrow
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Posted: 10 years ago
Originally posted by: anupam_dil

hey very nice start❤️...I always enjoy reading the FFs of first or second season

but bahuth choti hai length thoda bada kardo na...
continue soon

 
The first n second season rocked!
no worries about the length.. U'll get an update everyday