OS: Yesterday and Tomorrow--Forgiveness (completed) - Page 22

rati123

@rati123

Goldie

Posted: 9 years ago

It is simply amazing the way you write. They way you have shown the strong side of Paro. It is so true. Seemingly frail and weak people show such strenght of conviction in trying times !

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Smokyeyes2014

@Smokyeyes2014

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Posted: 9 years ago

Napster

What a beautiful piece of writing! Your portrayal of Laila is so mature, her heartbreak excellently captured. i am so into your Laila now after the jail scene. And of course, cried buckets 😭 before i could get thru it fully!

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DDC1

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Posted: 9 years ago

Navin,

Reading this again with tears in my eyes...Paro & the babies.

Let's make a deal Baisa- if I win the lottery I will produce what you write, no interference whatsoever!

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dprover

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Posted: 9 years ago

This is one of the most torturous part I read, glad Amanda & ruder a got on time.

Loved tomorrow part

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pal81

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Posted: 9 years ago

Was viewing the old epis of #RR which were shown in jan 2014. And while i was watching it.. remembrd my fav story series.. so came back here to re read.. evry time i read this i get awed by ur talent.. most of the times i think u were better than the shows CVs.. wished #RR and ur series both were still ongoing.. Edited by pal81 - 9 years ago

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