OS - Tum bin....Updt - Page 2

Posted: 2014-03-04T03:33:25Z
Tum Bin

Paro...She was not there!...Rudra could feel his heart just tightening up,,,, squeezing up.

Thadd!!!... the sherbet glass became his victim, the glass squeezed and thrown down at the floor...

Thadd!...The door of the changing room fell open...

There stood Paro...

Seeing the Rudra avatar fuming away... Just then when she thought of going back behind the door, away from him, she felt big arms circling her... His hands feeling her back,  as if to check if she is for real, if she is alive...

Rudra stepped back...Paro tried to catch his eye, but all he did was to catch her wrist, to drag her down...

He said in a low tone with a soft look at her slender wrist...Chal tumhari sangeet hai, tum bin kya maaza...

Tum bin tho mujhe saaza... this he could never ever tell her...

Edited by sara_in - 2014-03-10T01:25:36Z
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Posted: 2014-03-04T04:17:43Z
Originally posted by Jaz1990

That was good

Thank you sooo much...I am just getting too effected by endearing SANISH on screen and offscreen, the in depth and engaging analysis and the lovely pics posted by the forum members...
That it makes me happy to write.

Thanks to all who are reading, do post in your comments.

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Posted: 2014-03-04T04:48:43Z
Short and sweet
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Posted: 2014-03-04T04:48:44Z
Originally posted by massu91

Wow nyc

This might sound like a stupid question, what do you mean by nyc?
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Posted: 2014-03-04T07:45:14Z
Originally posted by sara_in

Originally posted by massu91

Wow nyc

This might sound like a stupid question, what do you mean by nyc?

nyc=nice Big smile
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Posted: 2014-03-04T07:50:56Z
I loved it I wish u would writesomething longer :D <3 
U r a very good writer
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Posted: 2014-03-05T06:05:01Z
Very nice. Why don't you try continuing the story. This was a lovely start.
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Posted: 2014-03-05T06:34:42Z
wow !! zor se seeti for u, sara !!Thumbs Up
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