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OS-A Birthday Surprise! Part 2 on Page 2..

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Posted: 10 years ago
Hi People..Writing down as OS based on Thursday's episode..Will be posting it in three parts..Hope you all like it.. :)

Here goes                                            
                                                   PART-1
The clock struck 12 am..She unlocked her cell phone,scrolled his snap looked at it lovingly teary eyed...Wished him a very Happy Birthday and pecked it...
Yes its 12th January.Her Ram's birthday.She had decided that this birthday would be special for him and she will fill in for those 7 years she wasn't with him on this special day.Only if she knew there was something else planned for them...

On the other hand he looked at his cell phone hoping to see her name flash on the screen.All these years she was the one who wished him on his birthday first.Even when she was in coma he made it a point that she wished him first.He use to sit by her side the whole night.
This year he thought he would again search for his birthday gift which Priya must have hidden somewhere in their room..But only if he knew he would be sitting in his room alone..staring at his phone...
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It was a normal day at KM.Nobody came to wish Ram.Everyone was busy in their own lives.Ram felt lonely between his own family members.He atleast expected Neha & Vikram to wish him.But they seemed busy pampering their daughter-in-law.His Choti,Ma and Dadi din't wish him either.He was heartbroken.He missed Priya badly.A lone tear escaped his eye.He wiped it and left for KI..
Once he reached his office he got himself busy in work...
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Meanwhile Priya was in the kitchen preparing Chocolate Mousse and Black Forest cake..Her Man's favourite...Secretly wishing he was here with her teasing her like he always did...

Flashback
Ram:Priya..Priya...Kaha ho tum yar...??
Priya:Main yaha hu Mr.Kapoor,kitchen mein.

Ram comes in the kitchen searching for Priya and is mesmerised at the sight in front of him..Priya is standing at the counter,her hands dipped in the cake mixture.A lock of her hair is disturbing her which she tries to put behind her ear but her hand are making it impossible for her to do that..
Ram comes behind her hugs her tight..This startles Priya for a moment but she knows its him.He nuzzles her nape teasing her,sending chills down her spine.She tries to stop him but Ram continues nuzzling her bare back..
Ram:Kaho to main kuch help kar du?
Priya:Ra..Raam...Aa aap chodiye mujhe plz.. Aur mujhe apki koi help nahi chahiye..Thank You..
Ram turns her around,brings her face close to his and puts her flick behing her ear.
Lo hogaya..Main is help ki bat kar raha tha... This makes Priya blush..
He goes more near and whispers in her ear..Agar kuch aur help chahiye toh...
Priya pushes him and then realises what she did..
His white kurta is now bearing the stains of Chocolate...

Ram gives Priya a "What did u do??" look. Ram:Ye..Ye kya kiya tumne Priya..Ruko tum you will pay for this...
Priya giggles looking at his irritated face..Serves you right Mr.Kapoor...
Ram stamps his foot and goes to clean himself up...
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Present
Priya giggles remembering the incident but is suddenly aware of her surrounding..A lone tear escapes her eye..But she is unable to wipe it..She wished Ram was here to help her today as well...

To be continued...

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Posted: 10 years ago
Chickieee
LUUUV IT...
Felt sad for RK but flashback made up for it.
I wish CVs play this on screen.
Mr.Kappu helping PrK? Ahem Ahem...

Eeeagerly waiting for Part2

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Posted: 10 years ago
nice start...
bechara ram..
fb scene mast πŸ˜‰
Ram ji gussa nhi karte daag ache haiπŸ˜†
are show mein abhi tk priya wish nhi ki ...
aap kara do πŸ˜†
continue soon !!!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
lovely os love ram teasing that made priya blush
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Posted: 10 years ago
in donon ki chekker me hum tho pagal hojayenge
any way suprb
😳😳😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
sweet update :):) very lovely
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Posted: 10 years ago
superb update!!!!
lovely flash back...
continue soon...
waiting
waiting
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Posted: 10 years ago
nice oneπŸ‘πŸΌ
continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice start, continue soon.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice start..
Very sweet OS..
Cont soon..