PaRud FF ll Mo Chuisle ll Prologue

Posted: 2014-01-21T19:33:03Z



Mo Chuisle


Dusk had already fallen when he finally reached home. He was never in a hurry to be home, as one would imagine for a lonely man like himself. He pressed the key into the padlock and flung it out of the door. There was a rusted lantern hung on the door that he grabbed on his way in. Dropping the items in his hand on the table he proceeded to light the lantern. The dark room was suddenly illuminated by the dimming flame. He removed his revolver from his holster and placed it on the table as well.

He walked over to the hemp woven bedstead and sat down pushing his shoes off in the due course. A few minutes later he was lying flat on with his forearm across his face.  His eyes began to close as sleep came over him.

The sound of anklets pulled him out of hard sleep. Opening up his eyes and seeing her standing over his bed seemed like a dream until she finally spoke.

"Oh Major Sahib" she whispered in her mellow voice.

 He immediately sat up causing her to jump back in anticipation.

"Laila, What are you doing here at this time?" he objected coldly.

However, without much regard she settled on the bedstead next to him, resting her head on his shoulder.

He immediately flinched away and rose from the bed irritating her immensely.

"Why won't you just leave me alone?" he yelled.

Boiling with anger she pulled him by the arm.

"Why don't you just forget her?"

"Get out Laila"

"I only came here to tell you that your Parvati is getting married..." she broke the news to him without hesitation and intended to say more but Rudra grabbed her neck pinning her to the wall.

"Let me go Rudra" she pleaded as her throat constricted under his grip.

He released her at once and sprinted out the door.



 Character Sketch
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Edited by Carabelli5 - 2014-01-21T22:21:30Z
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Posted: 2014-01-21T19:55:47Z
Wow very interesting prologue , pls continue soon
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Posted: 2014-01-21T22:16:16Z
Continue soon please, loved the intro!
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Posted: 2014-01-22T05:37:38Z
interesting add me to ur pm list and accept my buddy request...continue soon...
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Posted: 2014-02-20T15:42:07Z
Awesome prologue!
Plz pm me the updates :)
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Posted: 2014-02-20T16:31:34Z
Omg what a dramatic start!Clap
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Posted: 2014-02-20T18:09:27Z
Interesting ... waiting for more. TFS
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Posted: 2014-02-20T19:16:26Z
Sounds great :) Please update soon
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