Rangrasiya

OS | Pieces of me - Page 6

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Posted: 10 years ago
The best thing about your Os'es or any piece you write is your wisdom before you even start the piece. The little words of wisdom that show how beautiful as a person you are.
As for the OS, its beautiful how strong you have shown Paro, in fact Rudra seems weak in this one for me, from a point of view of vulnerability. He is feeling all those things he cant control, and she already knows what all that is, and so she does what she can to get him out of it, slowly opening him, and thats why she feels like she went somewhere with him today.

Great OS...:)
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Posted: 9 years ago
A wonderfully written OS... Paro wants to help and be with Rudra while he is scared of opening up and letting her into his life... But somehow Paro managed to get to him, and voila he did tell her the reason for his fears... Loved the entire progression of thoughts and talks...