I have to no clue about Viswa or Rudra from the other stories, but their leelas were surely worth the time
in your story. Very subtle comments from the author's perspective revealed in italics.
I wonder what tapas ASR had done for both of them to come down for him, but its a great twist in the story telling.
Its always refreshing to read story lines that convey much and its a real talent. Keep them coming...
-H
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