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Posted: 2014-01-09T16:01:34Z
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Edited by -Zara- - 2014-07-15T07:06:53Z
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Posted: 2014-01-09T16:12:44Z
Originally posted by Lemonsunrise

Amazing OS :)

Aww thank youEmbarrassed
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Posted: 2014-01-09T16:13:28Z
Beautiful and If I am not worng first writing on Parud
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Posted: 2014-01-09T16:15:10Z
Originally posted by sushan

Beautiful and If I am not worng first writing on Parud

OMG! Yeah! I've written so much OS/SS/FF for Arnav/Khushi yeah this is my first PaRud piece. LOL
Edited by -Zara- - 2014-01-09T16:12:04Z
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Posted: 2014-01-09T16:17:48Z
fab loved it 
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Posted: 2014-01-09T18:13:25Z
That was very sweet...:)
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Posted: 2014-01-09T18:22:02Z
It's beautiful dear. Keep writing. :D
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Posted: 2014-01-09T18:24:27Z
Really a beautiful OS!

The story was simple, something all of us would love to see in coming days.. Paro and Laila's interaction was very nice.. although I doubt Laila would be 10% of that sweet to Paro, if Rudra really brings her home.
I loved the fact that, Paro does not remember vividly about that childhood incident and she doesn't claim outright that the doll was actually the one she had! That was very much realistic..

However, what I loved the most is Rudra's reaction. If the execution follows the idea, Rudra will be a character of complex nature. He would feel bad sometimes at his acts.. and then again something will turn his mind into suspicion and hatred...

I wish something like this scene really takes place... 

Keep writing!
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