Awarded OS : Making Khushi: Vandana Sagar's Birthday OS - Page 2

simply superb
loved it/

happy birthday vandana...god bless you

I am sorry for the late edit, was caught up in something. I hope you don't mind. 😃

Coming to the story, I am so happy that I read it, and even more happy that you dedicated it to Vandana Di. 😃

It was one of the best OS I have come across on this forum and it depicted the emotions of two hurting souls very beautifully. What struck me most that you weren't biased to either in your narration, and I liked it very much. The way you have used words- I am in awe. The narration flowed smoothly, never breaking flow in between. 👏 I could feel Khushi's hurt while reading about her misery, I could feel Arnav's agony and anguish.

Your OS once more put life into the show's tagline- Nafrat paas aane na de, mohabbat dur jaane na de.

Beautifully written. You're an amazing writer. Thanks for writing it. 😊
Edited by guggu - 10 years ago

Woah. What a beautiful piece of writing.
Loved it.
The detailing, emotions, reactions and feelings, everything was so well blended.
Would love to read more of your work.
Very well written.
Glad I came across it.

This was just beautiful
loved the os

Thats a really nice os.

Nice to know Khushis pov.

Loved it.. Arnav had his own way of knowing the truth and Khushi being the self she is forgave him..  ❤️ 

okay this is the third OS I am reading celebrating Vandana Birthday. 

Wow took him long enough to realise what was in front of him

That was beautiful and something that I wish was actually canon...

Edited comment here... 😊