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Posted: 10 years ago

      

Prologue     


 

Today -  was the first day of all her tomorrows.

 


Her tear-drenched eyes, looked up out the splintered-wooden window frame, as the thought crossed her mind. And it was in that moment that she began to take in the beautiful corner of the of the hot Rajistan desert she had called home so all these years.

 


She closed her eyes as her fingers traced her still empty maang , where the heavy bridal tikka hung as if in an attempt to hide it from being filled with the dash of sindoor, which would finally end all those childish hopes and dreams she had nurtured: which would finally force her to accept, that he was never coming back.

 


A lone silver tear trekked down the expanse of her flushed pink cheek, as if caressing her the wayhe had once, not too long ago.

 


Paro, dragged in a ragged breath of air, her thumb carefully wiping away the very existence of that errant tear, as if even his very memory was too much for her to handle.

 


Then again, perhaps, it was.




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Author's Note: It's been ages since I've posted a story on this site, here's with the hope that RR can live up to all the hype!

Do read and review!

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Edited by Nmyra - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago

CONTENTS

Chapter One 

Edited by Nmyra - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago

First Parvati FF.
Good start.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Wow! Sounds as heartbreaking as Paro's tragedy!
Cannot wait! 
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome start!
Plz pm me the rest of the updates :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
Amazing and heart- breaking start @Nymra Can't wait to read more !
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Posted: 10 years ago
Fantastic start. Do continue!
Nice to see people already writing FF's and OS before the show has even started.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Intriguing prologue!
Looking forward to  it...

I am really excited.. so many good things are coming up along with the show!

All the best, Nmyra!
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Posted: 10 years ago
First FF of RR! It's an awesome start. You write amazingly! Will love to read more. Do continue soon. :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
Great start! I also hope RR becomes successful.