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intense.. loved Dadi here..

Good to see you back. Lovely OS

Wow...just a wow...I am a big fan of ur writing👏...And u never leave a chance to prove that...Loved it...😊

Intrigue, suspense, romance...everything in one OS...quite a challenging task...but all in a day's work for our master story teller...Kalyani, a big fan of your work and this one lives up to the amazing collection you have already to your credit. Great stuff! 

First thing first, I love your choice of song..its my fav too; all songs from that beautiful movie especially "Adayein bhi hai"..

I loved the way you combined IPK dialogues with your mind blowing ones..I can actaully imagine Sarun acting them..Your Kushi is always strong and a pleasure to read her characteristics.. I loved the entire theme of the story and guess this is your best OS till date but my fav will always be PoL ;-)   Please K, write more..missing your stories a lot..

"Kalyani ji!"...Rubbing my eyes.."Ui maa!!! YE KAHAN CHUPPI HUI THI!!"😆😆😆 

its awesome os...beautifully written...loved it..:)...good to see u after long here kalyani :)

Welcome back Kalyaani ! 🤗

ahaan... very well written...
enjoyed reading it...
the whole plot of the story was just amazinggg..
its good to see u back dear...

*rubs my eyes*
its frm u K?:o
like Meera said...i saw glimpse of PoL in it...and for a moment thought it as a random shot of pol...
I loveee ur Khushii...its areare to read khushi's strong char...
In just one shot u told us a full story...of arhi wid alll d char...shyam..devyani.. La , nk, anji...
Wud love to read more oS's frm u:)

and plz do inform me when u solve ur blog problem:)