PART FOURTEEN
Neha n Natasha follows Priya upto her room. Priya was grumbling while pacing in the room.
Neha: Priya kya hua?Itne gusse mai kyu ho?
Priya: Ram ki wajah se
Natasha: bhai ne kya kiya?
Priya snaps: kya nahi kiya wo pucho
Natasha:ok...Kya nahi kiya bhai ne?
Priya: mujhe nahi pata
Neha: what! Kuch nahi kiya toh phir us se naraz kyu ho?
Priya thinks, "kuch kar nahi rahe hai isi baat ka gussa hai"
Priya: i mean wo meri kisi bhi baat se agree nahi karte, tum dono ne dekha na kaise behas kar rahe the
Neha: itni si baat ke liye kyu pareshan horahi ho, usne bas apna nazariya bataya aur tumne apna, so chill
Priya: tum theek keh rahi ho
There Ram was still thinking whether he should make first move. Mamaji comes to irritate him again.
Mamaji: abhi tak yahi ho
Ram: aapko koi problem hai?
Mamaji: toh kab aur kaise parpose karne wale ho
Ram irritatedly: mai kabhi bhi propose karu aapko kya aur aap kyu itna interest le rahe hai
Mamaji: maine socha k agar koi chance hai toh mai try karlu
Ram shouts: nahi, mai aaj sham usey propose kardunga
Mamaji: mai koi help karu?
Ram: kaisi help?
Mamaji: shaam ko mai antakshree ka program rakhta hoon aur tu koi romantic gaana gaa kar apne dil ki baat keh dena
Ram excitedly: thank you mamaji, mai abhi jaake song select karta hoon
Ram happily goes to his room settles on the bed with laptop n starts searching for the perfect song for proposing Priya. He looks at Priya who was visibly upset and engrossed in her book.
"aaj mai tumhe propose karke rahunga aur aaj ke baad tumhe koi mauka nahi dunga mujhse naraz hone ka", Ram chuckles at his own thought.
Priya wonders, "Ram itne excited kyu hai aur laptop pe kya kar rahe hai?"
Meanwhile Shipra n Shiney were chatting in the hall.
Shiney: sisterji kahan reh gaye hamare jijaji
Shipra: ab tak toh aajana chahiye tha
Sudhir enters the house calling Shipra's name. Mamaji goes to receive him at door n to surprise him.
Mamaji: kaise ho jijaji, badi der lag di aate aate
Sudhir was shocked seeing Shiney as he expected him to be here only on marriage day.
Sudhir: toh aagaye aap?
Shiney: aana hi tha ji, ekloti bhanji ki shaadi jo hai
Sudhir while sitting: mujhe laga tha k aap kisi tour pe ho aur seedha shaadi mai aaoge
Mamaji: kaam toh hota rahega ji, lagta hai aapko mera aana pasand nahi aaya
Sudhir murmurs under his breath, "bilkul pasand nahi aaya"
Shiney: kuch kaha kya?
Sudhir: nahi toh...Shipra mehmano ka khayal rakhna
Shiney: aap meri fikr mat kariye, mera apna ghar hai ji...Oye Shipra, yaad hai na aaj dinner terrace pe hoga
Shipra: mai tayyari kar lungi
Sudhir: terrace pe kyu?
Shipra: wo bhaiyya ne dinner ke baad antakshiri ka program rakha hai
Sudhir: koi nach gaana nahi hoga aur dinner ghar mai hi hoga
Mamaji: meri gal toh suniye
Sudhir: ek bar keh diya na
Mamaji has no option other than to agree with Sudhir. Sudhir goes to his room after declaring his decision.
Mamaji to Shipra: ye itna boring kyu hai
Shipra: mere pati ki burayi mat kariye
Mamaji goes from there.
In Mamaji's room:
Ram comes to meet Mamaji.
Ram: mamaji, mamaji
Mamaji: kya hua bhai
Ram: aap itne udas kyu ho?
Mamaji: wo rehne de, tu bata kuch kam hai kya?
Ram excitedly: maine list prepare karli hai romantic songs ki but konsa song choose karo samajh nahi aaraha hai
Mamaji takes the list from Ram's hand n starts reading the songs.
Meri aashiqui ab tum hi ho,After reading, Mamaji tears the list in pieces n throws it in dustbin.
Ram: ye kya kiya aapne?Meri din bhar ki mehnat waste kardi
Mamaji: ab iski koi zaroorat nahi hai
Ram: kyu?
Mamaji: hum koi antakshree nahi khelne wale
Ram: kyu?
Mamaji: kyunki Sudhir sharma urf pyar ke dushman ne mana kardiya
Ram was disappointed.
Mamaji: udas mat ho, mai koi aur pilan(plan) banata hoon
Ram: aap apne ideas apne paas rakhiye, mai dekhlunga ke mujhe kya karna hai
Mamaji: madad chahiye to batana
Ram: koi help nahi chahiye, bye
Everyone had their dinner n nothing much happened that night. Priya was thinking her fake sadness is not working, "she should give one last blow to Ram next day", she thought.
Next morning, Mamaji asks to Ram whether he has proposed Priya.
Ram: aapko kyu jaanna hai?
Mamaji: wo mai soch raha tha k agar koi chance hai toh mai bhi try karlu
Ram: kitne besharam hai aap, wo aapki beti ki umar ki hai aur aap aisi baatien kar rahe hai
Mamaji: kaisi baatien?Mai bol raha hoon k agar chance hai toh koi help karu, kuch bhi sochte ho yaar
Ram: sorry maine galat socha par mujhe help nahi chahiye
Mamaji goes from there murmuring, "bhalai ka toh zamana hi nahi raha"
Ram was very confused thinking how he should propose Priya without taking anyone's help. Lost in his thoughts he entered his room n bumped into Priya.
Priya screams, "ouch"
Ram: sorry...Sorry
Priya: dhyan kaha hai aapka?
Ram: sorry bola na
Priya: it's ok, mujhe aapse kuch baat karni hai
Ram excitedly: kya...Kya batana hai?
Priya: maine decision liya hai kuch
Ram: kaisa decision?
Priya: mai sirf kal subah tak ka intezar karungi
Ram: kiska intezar?
Priya Ram ko ghur ke dekhti hai jaise asking him to let her finish.
Ram: tum batao
Priya continues: agar mere boyfriend ne mujhe aaj raat tak propose nahi kiya toh mai usse baat nahi karungi
Ram: you can't do this, i mean tum baat nahi karogi toh wo udaas hojayega na
Priya:udaas ho toh hojaye, jab usey meri udasi ki fikr nahi toh mai kyu chinta karu
Ram argues: how can you say that he doesn't cares for you?
Priya: arey care karta toh ab tak apne dil ki baat bata deta
Ram:toh tum batado na
Priya: mai kyu batao, ladke ko propose karna chahiye
Priya walks out of the room. Ram was very upset n irritated too.
"kya musibat hai yaar? Ajeeb faisla suna gayi, kitni ziddi hai ye ladki...,.Ufff...Ab shaam tak kaise propose karu"
Ram taunts himself, "Mr. Ram Kapoor happy now, aapko toh hamesha se hi aisi ladki chahiye thi na jo kisi ke liye bhi khud ko na badle toh ab bhugto"
Whole day Ram kept himself busy thinking about how to propose Priya. He, infact searched on internet also but found nothing. He didn't proposed Priya and as a result Priya decides to sleep in Neha's room.
Ram: kahan jarahi ho?
Priya: Neha k room mai
Ram: milne jarahi ho? Mai darwaza khula rakhunga
Priya: mai Neha k saath so rahi hoon
Ram: par kyu?
Priya: good night
In Neha's room:
Neha n Natasha who were chatting were surprised to see Priya in their room.
Neha: kuch chahiye Priya
Priya: kya mai tum dono ke saath so sakti hoon?
Neha: ofcourse, come inside
Three of them lie down on bed with Priya in middle.
Natasha: aap apne room se yahan i mean kuch hua hai kya?
Priya: kuch bhi toh nahi hua
Ram too comes to Neha's room behind Priya.
Ram: hi girls!
Natasha: kuch chahiye aapko?
Ram: haan Priya chahiye i mean Priya se baat karni hai
Neha: ok karlo baat
Ram: Priya wo meri blue file kahan hai
Priya: aap khud dhund lijiye, room mai hi hogi table par
Ram: nahi mil rahi hai, tum please dhund kar dogi
Ram was praying that Priya should agree to come with him.
Priya: theek se dekhiye wahin par hogi
Natasha teases: bhai mai help kardu aapki?
Ram: its ok, mai dekhta hoon, you guys sleep...Good night
Natasha: good night bhai
Neha: good night fatty
Ram goes from there defeated n disappointed.
Neha: Priya tum upset kyu ho?Fatty ne kuch kaha kya?
Priya: Ram ne kuch nahi kaha
Natasha: bhai se jhagda hua toh aap room chodkar yahan aagayi
Priya fumbles: mai thodi na unki biwi hoon jo upset hokar room chod do...,...Hum log sirf pati patni hone ka natak kar rahe hai
Neha: tum nahi batana chahti ho toh it's ok
Priya: mai bata rahi hoon na
Neha: hum sun rahe hai
Priya manages to speak one word, "couch"
Nuts confusedly: couch?
Priya: haan wo roz couch pe sone se back pain ho raha hai aur Ram ke saath bed share karne mai i was not comfortable toh yahan aagayi, tum logo ko problem ho toh mai chali jaati hoon
Neha: no it's fine, tum yahan so sakti ho
Priya: thank you
Natasha switches off light n they dozzes off but Priya was still awake thinking is she being very rude to Ram. Her thoughts were disturbed by her phone's message tone. It was Ram's message, she didn't want to read it but goes against her mind n opens the message.
"i know Priya you are still awake, please tune in to your favourite radio station right now, please:)"
Priya tunes in radio.
RJ: hamare next caller hai Hiraman aur wo Iravati se kuch kehna chahte hai
Priya was wondering what Ram is up to. Why he has make a call on Radio.
RJ: aap apna message de sakte hai
Hiraman urf Ram: mai janta hoon Iravati tum is waqt mujhe sun rahi ho, maine bahot socha k kaise tumse apni dil ki baat kaho aur is natije pe pahoncha k agar kisi bhi ladki se poori duniya ke samne apne dil ki baat kahi jaye toh usse accha kuch nahi hosakta
Priya's heart was racing as finally Ram was going to say those 3 magical words which she wanted to hear from so long.
Ram continued: I am in love with you, i want to live my life loving you...I LOVE YOU AND I'LL KEEP LOVING YOU TILL MY LAST BREATHE
Priya was on cloud nine, her eyes started flowing with tears of joy.
Ram took a deep breath n continued: so Ms. Attitude, Will you spend your whole life with your Driver? Will you grow old with me? Will you marry me? I am waiting for your reply.
RJ: Hiraman ne apne dil ki baat kehdi, let's see Iravati call karti hai ya nahi
RJ gets a call immediately.
RJ: hello, is it Iravati?
Iravati urf Priya: yes
Even though Ram knows Priya's answer, he was still curious, impatient, anxious, nervous, excited, happy-all at once.
Priya speaks: Hiraman My answer is...
Priya delibarately took few seconds before answering. Ram was furious n murmurs, "speak up Priya, i know tum mujhe pareshan karne ke liye kar rahi ho"
Priya continued: Yes I do, I really really love you and will keep loving you till my last breathe(Ram closes his eyes in satisfaction with smile adorning his face) agar aap poori life mujhe jhelna chahte hai toh mujhe bhi aapko zindagi bhar jhelne mai koi problem nahi hai
Ram laughs at her last statement.
Priya ends the call and slowly moves out of the Neha's room and tip toes in Ram's, rather their, room. The room was completely dark.
Ram: mujhe pata tha k tum zaroor aaogi
Priya: kahan hai aap?
Ram switches on the light n taps on Priya's shoulder from behind. Priya was surprised to see the whole room decorated with flowers.
Priya: ye aapne kab kiya?
Ram: tumhare jaane ke baad, pasand aaya?
Priya: bahot pasand aaya
Ram takes out his finger band n goes on his knees
Priya Sharma kya tum mujhe apni khoobsurat zindagi ka hissa banaogi, mujhse shaadi karogi?
Priya says, "yes"
Ram slides his finger band in Priya's finger. The band was loose for Priya's finger. Ram bits his tongue in embarassment.
Ram: wo actually ring kharedne ka time nahi mila
Priya smiles: it's ok
Priya takes out her finger band, holds Ram's hand n slides it in his finger but the band was small for his finger. Priya pushes hard the band hurting Ram.
Ram screams: ouch! Kya kar rahi ho Priya
Priya: kuch nahi, aap chup chap nahi reh sakte
Priya's efforts pay off as she successfully slides the ring. She gives winning smile to Ram.
Ram: dance?
Priya:is waqt??
Ram: haan is waqt
Priya: agar is waqt music on kiya toh sab jaag jayenge
Ram: hum music on nahi karenge
Priya questions: bina music ke kaise dance karenge?
Ram excitedly: i'll sing the song
Priya: no way, aap bilkul nahi gaa sakte
Ram pleads: please, please
Priya: i can't tolerate your singing
Ram: this is not done yaar, abhi poori duniya ke samne tumne kaha ka tum poori zindagi mujhe jhelne ko tayyar ho aur ab meri singing nahi jhel sakti
Priya: it's ok, natak karne ki zaroorat nahi hai
Ram excitedly: thank you
Ram starts singing the song
Hum dil de chuke sanam
Priya: acha khasa gaana bigad rahe hai aap
But Ram paid no attention to it n continued singing.
Hum dil de chuke sanam
Tere hogaye hai hum,
Teri kasam
They start swaying to Ram's melodious song, lost in each other's eyes.
Chalo update khatam , thodi privacy de do unhe π, let them enjoy their old found but newly confessed love. π.,..,tata...Bye, bye π
OMG I cannot explain to you how perfect this update was! So I'll explain it in the best way I know... For this update, you deserve a lifetime's supply of chocolate cake π
I loved Ram's possessiveness when Mamaji wanted to see if he had a chance π€£.
Priya getting angry and going to Neha's room, and Ram's attempt to get her to come back to the room was so cute "haan Priya chahiye"
I'm glad the antaksharee plan flopped π... because his actual proposal was the most romantic thing ever... Future husband ko yeh update padna padega (you should have known this was coming) π€£ Hiraman & Iravati on the radio his whole speech was so romantic it actually made me very emotional... like a hopeless romantic, my eyes got all watery (Happy tears π), I was smiling so much reading it... and in the same way Ram laughed at Priya's last statement, I did too π such a cute way of proposing and accepting... Finally Driver & Miss Attitude have professed their love for each other ... The ring part was so cute and funny... and the end, dancing to Ram's singing π so sweet...
I have to say... THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR THIS UPDATE AND FOR MAKING ME SMILE LIKE A CRAZY GIRL π€
Edited by ShazK.123 - 10 years ago