Totally inspired by Red !!!

Posted: 10 years ago
This is totally I am trying for first time,so it can be really bad , will be more than happy for feed back from all of you .
( and Saba is really scared ..so please be kind)

Laal tu bhi hai, 
Laal main bhi hoon,

Laal meri chahtein hai, 
Laal teri nafratein hai,

Laal mera iqraar hai , 
Laal tera inkaar hai,

Laal mera chehra hai, Laal mera dil hai,
Laal meri dhadkan hai , Laal mera  pyaar hai.

Laal tera dard hai , Laal tera bhed hai, 
Laal teri chuppi hai, Laal teri saadgi hai.

Laal mera jog hai ,
Laal tera rog hai .

Laal mujh bhi hai,
Laal tujh main bhi hai .

phir hum dono ke beech ye kaisa laal hai 


The color red is the color of energy, passion and action

This color is a warm and positive color associated with our most physical needs and our will to survive. It exudes a strong and powerful masculine energy.


If any one needs translation (I doubt it though) they are most welcome.

Posted: 10 years ago
Dose kuchh jyaada he heavy hogaya..sir pe sirf MriAra n MriAra n MriAra,... dil sambhalega kaise๐Ÿ˜ณ
PS: Red toh mera bhi favorite color hai, par uspe itna analogy hosakta hai, yakeen nahi tha

way to go, saba๐Ÿ‘

PS::no more complaints for mj's pov in d os part, this1 resolved that problem, happy now๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†
Posted: 10 years ago
Superhugs...

Mwah mwah mwah mwah..

Chalo ab mujhe sahram aa rahi hai...

But the poem is ufff no words..

I dont know but i was imagining mj speaking those lines...

Posted: 10 years ago
Originally posted by sonalp


Dose kuchh jyaada he heavy hogaya..sir pe sirf MriAra n MriAra n MriAra,... dil sambhalega kaise๐Ÿ˜ณ
PS: Red toh mera bhi favorite color hai, par uspe itna analogy hosakta hai, yakeen nahi tha

way to go, saba๐Ÿ‘

PS::no more complaints for mj's pov in d os part, this1 resolved that problem, happy now๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†
Thanks sonal 

๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜† I am glad you are happy  and your issue is also resolved ๐Ÿ˜‰
dil ko sambhalon , aaj ka episode baki hai ๐Ÿ˜‰

Posted: 10 years ago
Originally posted by Worldpeace


Superhugs...

Mwah mwah mwah mwah..

Chalo ab mujhe sahram aa rahi hai...

But the poem is ufff no words..

I dont know but i was imagining mj speaking those lines...

aawee.. Thanks Bani.
first attempt ke liye itni tareef bahut zyada hai.
you guys are too good ๐Ÿค—
Posted: 10 years ago

wow saba...that was ...no words๐Ÿ‘...I am turning crazy waiting for the epi to start

Posted: 10 years ago
Originally posted by shena07


wow saba...that was ...no words๐Ÿ‘...I am turning crazy waiting for the epi to start

Thanks shena  ๐Ÿค—and i think you described the condition of all of us here ๐Ÿ˜‰
Edited by sabaSpeaks - 10 years ago
Posted: 10 years ago
Saba ๐Ÿค—
I'm speechless โค๏ธ
Posted: 10 years ago
Originally posted by dsnair


Saba ๐Ÿค—
I'm speechless โค๏ธ
Thanks Divya ๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค—
I am actually getting overwhelmed nowโ˜บ๏ธ
Posted: 10 years ago
Waahhh Waahh Kya baat hai..
awesum hai bilkul..โค๏ธ

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