Intro:
Shraddha and Kunal has been married for the past two and a half years. Together they are raising Dhruv while balancing their individual careers. Their relationship at one point was nothing but smooth sailing and filled with affection and love until a misunderstanding creates tension and a rift in their relationship. Things cannot go back to being the same when one day, their world is turned upside down. There is only one chance to make things right and its up to Shraddha to put two-to-two together in order to save her family.
Prologue
My heart was racing, it wouldn't stop, it wouldn't stop...
The pain was slashing across my brain; the vessel in my temple was throbbing nonstop.
I tried moving but I couldn't, I tried breathing, but it was coming out in painful, sharp breaths.
Something was pressing on my rib-cage and I wasn't sure if it was whiplash from the impact or if it was the death grip the seatbelt had across my upper body.
I tried moving my hands, my arm, but it felt so numb almost as if it wasn't connected to my body.
A terrifying thought arose, what if my hands weren't attached...
But it was stifled once I was able to move my pinky, slightly and then was able to move an index finger and slowly was able to move all my fingers.
I tried to move my hand, but it ran across glass and I could feel as pieces of glass easily sliced through my skin, causing blood to form and instantly causing pain to ripple through my arm.
I tried searching around, trying to figure out where I was and what I was doing there but nothing was forming in my mind and nothing was coming to mind.
I continued to swim in confusion for a few minutes or so until his face...no their faces pierced before my eyes.
KUNAL...DHRUV...
I opened my eyes and tried to twist my head but pain greeted me as it shot down to my spine and causing my body to protest.
I tried to move even more, but it was difficult as I was trying to gain orientation of my surroundings.
After a few brief unsuccessful movements and my vision starting to clear, it was becoming obvious that that I was upside down...
No...WE was upside down.
My mind started to slowly kick into action but my body was having a hard time in catching up.
I tried to get my hands to grip the seat-belt as I twisted my body once again despite my body's protest.
I needed to see if he was okay.
Please let him be okay.
It's my fault, my fault all my fault...
Don't let him...
As soon as I turned around and I caught his face, my heart stopped knocking the breath out of my chest.
My blood seemed to burn as it squeezed painfully through my veins and tears wanted to make its way forward but I had to maintain it, I had to...
Kunal...
There was a small stream of light coming from one of the light posts that was on the street
His eyes were open and glazed over; staring listlessly in the dark night.
His lips were cut and split from the glass; his face a swollen pulped mess.
His dark brown hair was matted around his forehead due to his sweat and something else I couldn't clearly make out.
His blue dress shirt was covered with blood and glass...HIS blood that was pooling slowly down from his head and his chest.
I wanted to cry, I wanted to grab and touch him, but if I did...if I knew that he really was...
I forced the thought down immediately and then I whipped my head around
Meeting with a nice sharp pain down my neck and spine and nausea to boil from my stomach
Dhruv...
"Dhruv," my voice tried calling out in the dark car, feeling as if my voice wasn't carrying any weight in reaching my son, our son...
"Dhruv" I continued and continued.
Fear took over in my bosom and with little strength, I grappled my seat-beltfighting to claw it off but the belt wouldn't come off.
I continued, in hysterical motions.
"Dhruv."
I continued my movements until I was able to come loose and a quick "dud" was heard when I hit the roof top of the car.
Pain went through my body, my vision blurred, but I wasn't going to stop. I couldn't stop.
"DHRUV" I called, trying to maneuver, to see, to reach the back seat
My heart dropped, the breath was stumped out of me.
I wanted to grab my hair and rip it out, this wasn't real, this wasn't happening.
His body was slumped and blood was slowly flowing down his neck, where a large piece of glass was lodged in.
His small hands were still holding on tight to his favorite Superman toy that Kunal brought for his ninth birthday
His skin was taking on a dangerous bluish-purple discoloration but his chest was still rising, slightly, struggling for breath.
I tried to move to the seat but couldn't get through. My stomach was preventing me from it, but I couldn't stop and I couldn't think as I tried to get to Dhruv.
But I never made it as a hand ripped open the door, while another hand grabbed my leg and pulled me out away from the car
away from Dhruv ...
away from Kunal...
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Like i said earlier what do you think, should i continue or not? Is it good or not? Idk but everyone's feedback would be nice. thank you😛😊
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I want to thank everyone for their responses and i wasn't sure if this was good or not but due to everyone's responses i think i might just continue. thank you everyone for reading and ur responses. u guys are awesome😛👍🏼😳
Updated:
Chapter One on Pg 3
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/96867166
Chapter Two on Pg 4
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/96936674
Chapter Three on Pg 7
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/96991678
Chapter Four on Pg 9
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/97046135
Chapter Five on Pg 13
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/97111873
Chapter Six on Pg 16
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/97293174
Chapter Seven on Pg 18
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/3825840?pn=18
Chapter Eight on Pg 25
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/97916010
Chapter Nine on Pg 26
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/97926538
Chapter Ten on Pg 30
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/98103986
Chapter Eleven on Pg 33
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/98349875
Chapter Twelve on Pg 36
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/98982120
Chapter Thirteen on Pg 41
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/99797753
Chapter Fourteen on Pg 45
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/101602231
Chapter Fifteen Pg 47
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/102121432
Chapter Sixteen Pg 51
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/102997814
Chapter Seventeen Pg 53
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/103306266
Chapter Eighteen Pg 55
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/103596656
Chapter Nineteen Pg 58
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/104281456
Chapter Twenty Pg 60
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/104700982
Chapter Twenty-One Pg 63
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/104905180
Chapter Twenty-Two Pg 66
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/105816881
~Crashed~
We can't alter our future, without changing our past
Intro:
Shraddha and Kunal has been married for the past two and a half years. Together they are raising Dhruv while balancing their individual careers. Their relationship at one point was nothing but smooth sailing and filled with affection and love until a misunderstanding creates tension and a rift in their relationship. Things cannot go back to being the same when one day, their world is turned upside down. There is only one chance to make things right and its up to Shraddha to put two-to-two together in order to save her family.
Prologue
My heart was racing, it wouldn't stop, it wouldn't stop...
The pain was slashing across my brain; the vessel in my temple was throbbing nonstop.
I tried moving but I couldn't, I tried breathing, but it was coming out in painful, sharp breaths.
Something was pressing on my rib-cage and I wasn't sure if it was whiplash from the impact or if it was the death grip the seatbelt had across my upper body.
I tried moving my hands, my arm, but it felt so numb almost as if it wasn't connected to my body.
A terrifying thought arose, what if my hands weren't attached...
But it was stifled once I was able to move my pinky, slightly and then was able to move an index finger and slowly was able to move all my fingers.
I tried to move my hand, but it ran across glass and I could feel as pieces of glass easily sliced through my skin, causing blood to form and instantly causing pain to ripple through my arm.
I tried searching around, trying to figure out where I was and what I was doing there but nothing was forming in my mind and nothing was coming to mind.
I continued to swim in confusion for a few minutes or so until his face...no their faces pierced before my eyes.
KUNAL...DHRUV...
I opened my eyes and tried to twist my head but pain greeted me as it shot down to my spine and causing my body to protest.
I tried to move even more, but it was difficult as I was trying to gain orientation of my surroundings.
After a few brief unsuccessful movements and my vision starting to clear, it was becoming obvious that that I was upside down...
No...WE was upside down.
My mind started to slowly kick into action but my body was having a hard time in catching up.
I tried to get my hands to grip the seat-belt as I twisted my body once again despite my body's protest.
I needed to see if he was okay.
Please let him be okay.
It's my fault, my fault all my fault...
Don't let him...
As soon as I turned around and I caught his face, my heart stopped knocking the breath out of my chest.
My blood seemed to burn as it squeezed painfully through my veins and tears wanted to make its way forward but I had to maintain it, I had to...
Kunal...
There was a small stream of light coming from one of the light posts that was on the street
His eyes were open and glazed over; staring listlessly in the dark night.
His lips were cut and split from the glass; his face a swollen pulped mess.
His dark brown hair was matted around his forehead due to his sweat and something else I couldn't clearly make out.
His blue dress shirt was covered with blood and glass...HIS blood that was pooling slowly down from his head and his chest.
I wanted to cry, I wanted to grab and touch him, but if I did...if I knew that he really was...
I forced the thought down immediately and then I whipped my head around
Meeting with a nice sharp pain down my neck and spine and nausea to boil from my stomach
Dhruv...
"Dhruv," my voice tried calling out in the dark car, feeling as if my voice wasn't carrying any weight in reaching my son, our son...
"Dhruv" I continued and continued.
Fear took over in my bosom and with little strength, I grappled my seat-beltfighting to claw it off but the belt wouldn't come off.
I continued, in hysterical motions.
"Dhruv."
I continued my movements until I was able to come loose and a quick "dud" was heard when I hit the roof top of the car.
Pain went through my body, my vision blurred, but I wasn't going to stop. I couldn't stop.
"DHRUV" I called, trying to maneuver, to see, to reach the back seat
My heart dropped, the breath was stumped out of me.
I wanted to grab my hair and rip it out, this wasn't real, this wasn't happening.
His body was slumped and blood was slowly flowing down his neck, where a large piece of glass was lodged in.
His small hands were still holding on tight to his favorite Superman toy that Kunal brought for his ninth birthday
His skin was taking on a dangerous bluish-purple discoloration but his chest was still rising, slightly, struggling for breath.
I tried to move to the seat but couldn't get through. My stomach was preventing me from it, but I couldn't stop and I couldn't think as I tried to get to Dhruv.
But I never made it as a hand ripped open the door, while another hand grabbed my leg and pulled me out away from the car
away from Dhruv ...
away from Kunal...
****************************
Like i said earlier what do you think, should i continue or not? Is it good or not? Idk but everyone's feedback would be nice. thank you😛😊
Lovely FF. Please Continue.🥳👏 Its amazing. I hope that Kunal Shraddha and Dhruv are ok and they come out of this bad time soon. 👏🤗
