OS:Yeh hai aashiquii UPDTED PG 1

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Posted: 2013-11-26T07:04:43Z

Pratimpura se(fictitious name) jo ek pichda huaa gaao

wha ke log aur aaje ke yug mai zammeen assmaaan se bhi zyaada phark

Baldev Singh gaao ke mukhya hai

unki ek pyaari si phool si beti hai jiska naam hai Priya

whi doosri taraf

Khatimpura(fictitiuos name)bhi ek pichdwa gaao

wha ke log aur aaje ke yug mai zammeen assmaaan se bhi zyaada phark

Tansen Rathod gaao ke mukya hai

unka ek beta hai jiska naam Ram hai

dono Baldev Singh aur Tansen Rathod

ko ek doosre ke khoon ki pyaas hoti hai

kuiki dono ko pana ilaaka badhaana hai

dono humesha ek dooosre ko maarne ke liye yojnaaye banaate rehete hai

Par inke bacche Ram Priya ek doosre se be intehan pyaar krte hai

Do u wnt me to cntnu???
plz reply sooon
Edited by priyajan12 - 2014-01-10T05:22:17Z
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Posted: 2013-11-26T07:13:33Z
Awww...itna nice and unique concept...would love to read it...continue soon
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Posted: 2013-11-26T08:01:08Z
Dushmani ke beech Pyaar??Wink Embarrassed  Wavo... Tongue Continue soon Smile
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Posted: 2013-11-26T21:16:40Z

actully its nice concpet & I would like u to continuee this... plz continue & sand me PM next time when u updat
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Posted: 2013-11-26T21:58:27Z
pls continue with the os
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Posted: 2014-01-10T05:24:23Z
sorry frgt bout this
 
 

Hola guys am back with another OS

well iske end thoda tragic hai

its inspired from Yeh hai asshiqi on Bindaas

Ishaqzaade nd Ramleela

Yeh Hai Aashiquii

Kya Pyaar Karna Galat Hai??

Kahaani shuru hoti

Pratimpura se(fictitious name) jo ek pichda huaa gaao

wha ke log aur aaje ke yug mai zammeen assmaaan se bhi zyaada phark

Baldev Singh gaao ke mukhya hai

unki ek pyaari si phool si beti hai jiska naam hai Priya

whi doosri taraf

Khatimpura(fictitiuos name)bhi ek pichdwa gaao

wha ke log aur aaje ke yug mai zammeen assmaaan se bhi zyaada phark

Tansen Rathod gaao ke mukya hai

unka ek beta hai jiska naam Ram hai

dono Baldev Singh aur Tansen Rathod

ko ek doosre ke khoon ki pyaas hoti hai

kuiki dono ko pana ilaaka badhaana hai

dono humesha ek dooosre ko maarne ke liye yojnaaye banaate rehete hai

Par inke bacche Ram Priya ek doosre se be intehan pyaar krte hai

aur bahut baar apne parivaaro ko samjhaane ki bhi koshish krte hai

ki yeh ladaai jhagda khoon kharaaba sab bekaaar hai

lekin koi nhi sunta hai in dono

ek raath dono laal kue par milte hai

yeh kuaa dono gaao ko alag krta hai

R:tum taiyaar ho na

P:mai bilkul taiyaar hu

tum

R:tum taiyaar to mai bhi taiyaar

aaj yeh dono humesha humesha ke liye yha se jaane waale hai

apni zindgi ki nayi shuruaat krne

Ram apna haath Priya ko dte hai

aur Priya haath thaamle leti hai

kiski majaal... koi rokle...
kiski majaal.. koi tok le...
ishq k junoon ruke nahi...

Hai baanwri... Ye aShiQui...
Gustaakh si...ye AshIQui...
bekhauff si... Ye ashiqui...

dono lgta hai ki hai ki woh safal hogye

par inhe kya pta tha ki inke parivaaroko in par pehele se hi shak tha isliye dono parivaaro ne inke piche kuch jaasooos bhejhe the

Baldev Singh"Kya khabar laaye ho Chintu"

Chintu"Priya Tansen ke bete ke saath bhaag gyi"

Baldev Singh"mujhe to pehele hi shak tha

saare aadmiyo ko nikalo aur chalo sheher ko aur

woh vahi jaa rhe honge

aur yaad rkhne zinda na bach paaye"

whi doosri taraf

Bheem"Ram woh Baldev ki beti ke saath bhaag gya"

Tansen"mujhe laga hi tha

sab aadmiyo ko nikalo aur chalo

zinda nhi chodna hai unko"

Dono apni jeepo mei nikal padte hai

haatho mei mashal aur bandooke hai

aur aankho mei gussa

Dono mukhya phir ussi kue paas aate hai

Tansen"Baldev yeh thaari beti ne acha na kiya

ab dekhna tujhe uski laash hi milegi

ha ha haa"

Baldev"thaare bete ne koan sa garvo waala kaam kiya hai

agar meri beti maregi to tere bete ke bhi tukde tukde ho jaayenge"

Udhar Ram Priya in sab se be khabar

ek doosre ka haath thaame apni zindgi ki ek nayi shuruaat krna chaahte hai

par unhe kya pta ki unke parivaar unke saath kya krna chaahte hai

Dono Tansen Baldev hawa mai goliya chala rhe hai

idhar udhar dekh rhe hai par Ram Priya ka koi naamo nishan nhi hai

Chintu ko Priya dikh jaati hai

Chintu"woh rhe woh dono"

Tansen aur Baldev mud kar dekhte hai

aur unhe yakeen aa jata hai

dono apni pani jeepo mai unke peeche bhaagte hai

Par Ram Priya bhi unhe dekh late hai

aur woh ek doosre ha haath pakad kar bhaagne lagte hai

Besharmiyan,, barbadiyaan..
Hai ishq ki,,,shaitaaniyan...
Ye fitoor jo.. sir pe sawar ho...
jeena bhi phir Dushwaar ho..

Iss rog ko kuch sujhe na...
koi farq ise bujhe na...
Ye hararatein,,, utare nahi...

Hai sarphiri.. ye AshiqUi...
Maddmast bhi...Ye AsHiQui..
Kambhakht bhi.. ye AshIqUi...

Jo ye sang chale... Sang challe...
jo ye rang chadhe... Rang Chadee...
kya fikar koi kya kahe...

kiski majaal... koi rokle...
kiski majaal.. koi tok le...
ishq k junoon ruke nahi...

Hai baanwri... Ye aShiQui...
Gustaakh si...ye AshIQui...
bekhauff si... Ye ashiqui...

YE ISHQ NAHI ASAAN
BAS ITNA SAMJH LIJIYE...
Ek aag KA DaRIya hai..

or doob k jaana HAI...

Raaste mei ek pathar aata hai jisski vajhe se Priya gir jaati hai

aur usse bahut buri tarah se chot aati hai

Par Ram Priya ka haath nhi chodta hai

Priya"Tum jaao Ram yha se

yeh sab tumhe maar daalenge"

Ram"mai tumhaare bagair khi nhi jaa rha hu"

Ram apni bandook nikalta hai aur jeep ke tyre ko nishaana rakhta hai aur goli challata hai

goli chahate hi dono jeep o mai gadbad aati hai

Ram Priya ko godi mai uthaata hai

aur bhaagne lgta hai

bhaagte bhaagte hai

dono ek mandir ke paas aate hai

Priya"Ram dekho yeh whi devi maa ka mandir hai"

yeh whi mandir hai jha Ram Priya peheli baar milee the

pyaar ka ehsaas huaa

aur izhaar e ishq bhi yhi huaa tha

yeh mandir in dono ke liye bahut khaas hai

Ram"tumhe yeh jagah yaad hai"

Priya"mai kaise bhool skti hu"

Priya"Ram hum kab tak aise bhaagte rehenge?"

Ram"matlab"

Priya"mujhe aisi zindgi nhi jeeni hai jisme humaare pyaar ko samjhe nhi jaata hai"

Ram"tum kya kehena chaahti ho"

Priya"mujhe marna thak gyi hu mai is chori chupe mulne se bhaagne se

aaj gar humme se kisi ko kuch ho jaata toh"

Priya"kill me Ram"

Ram"tum paagal ho gyi ho kya

hum pani zindgi ki nayi shuruaat karnege khi"

Priya"aapko pta hai humaare parivaar hume jaise taise dhund lenge

aur woh nhi chaate ki hum zinda rhe hai"

Ram"to theek hai jeeyenge to saath mei jeeyenge wrna nhi jeeyenge"

Priya"tum meri vajah se khud ko mat maaro"

Ram"mai tumhaare saath hu

agar tumhe marne hai to mai bhi tumhaare saath marunga"

Priya"par"

Ram"par war kuch nhi"

Ram apni bandoook nikalta hai

Ram"mujhe maar do"

PRiya"pehele ek baar mujhse gale milo"

dono aakhri baar gale milte hai

Ram"I love you"

Priya"I love you too"

dono ek doosre ki taraf dekhte hai

aur phir do badoook ki goliyo ki aawaz sunaii deti hai

Tansen aur Baldev wha pahuchte hai

aur dekhte hai ki do laashe padi hui hai

par dono ke chehre par ek muskan thi

THE END

ab mujhe maar padni waali hai

i know u ll hate me after this one

m sorry

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Posted: 2014-01-10T07:11:06Z
Nice attempt..
Good one..
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Posted: 2014-01-10T08:33:27Z
Nice oneClapClap do write more on RAYA we would love to read...
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