One Shot : Sources of Light | TY Note: Page 15 - Page 3

Posted: 10 years ago
Your Arnav here is so much more gentle and likeable. His redemption is also kinder and gentler - he persisted and patiently gave her time to trust him and his love for her.
Posted: 10 years ago
So beautiful
Take a bow
Arnav and Khushi in your story touched my heart
What a beautiful way to redeem arnav and what a beautiful way to bring them together
Kudos
Posted: 10 years ago
BEAUTIFUL
Enjoyed reading this redemption shot.
The end was beautiful. Khushi forgive him n gave him another under sky where there parents blessed them for the blissful life.
Posted: 10 years ago
Phenomenal piece of writing...i could visualise barun n sanaya playing out d whole scene...so beautiful...completly magical.
Posted: 10 years ago
sooo beautifully written ...

well done 
Edited by arshi1986 - 10 years ago
Posted: 10 years ago
What a wonderful story! I loved it! Thanks for the pm.

I wish I had known about this contest earlier. I too could have voted for you then.
Posted: 10 years ago
Time is the healer for both him and her. Beautiful OS. Liked it so much!
Posted: 10 years ago
Wow it's beautiful os...i loved it😊
Posted: 10 years ago
omg...this is...sooo...magical...pls...write some more...its actually beautiful one.:)..
u done a fabulous job...pls...writ one more...:)

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