One Shot : Sources of Light | TY Note: Page 15 - Page 11

Posted: 8 years ago
Just beautiful, the tears hat she shed, the pain he felt when he realised he had done her wrong, so palpable.. made me shed a few of my own. But the healing process to start betwen them was even better, because it wasnt a complete forgiveness.. it was one where she fought with her self to trust him again. Your words made me feel that although those words were not used. Just awesome!

You came 5th?.. my god I need to find that thread!
Posted: 8 years ago
Very beautiful os Ana and very well written 
You made Arnav's redemption very beautiful and honorable 
He made mistakes and he was repenting, very beautifully defined

 Loved it .


Posted: 8 years ago
Wow..!! It is so heart warming :) their unbearable pain as they are nothing without each other:( you've write each n every emotion so perfectly :)
Posted: 8 years ago
This is the best redemption OS I have read!
It's so heart touching.
Posted: 8 years ago
Wow That was such  beautiful os
Very lovely
Posted: 8 years ago
Hayye! Read this amazing one shot again. 
This one shot is on the top of my Arshi redemption one shots, because of it's sweet and practical ending. 
Wonderful one shot!!
Posted: 8 years ago
.Edited by .MissStubborn. - 8 years ago
Posted: 7 years ago
The terrace scene was so touching.Two words' Don't go', was enough to fill the great abyss existed between them, Beautiful OS👏


Love
Anna🤗
Posted: 7 years ago
brilliant os:)
loved it very much..it's one of the scene which I can't accept ..you gave a beautiful scene from it..his guilt, her anger ,their love everything is written perfectly..

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