I read it thrice! THRICE coz I found it to be so sweet and well-written. Yet I fall short of praise for both your ingenuity in writing and the cuteness of the concept.
Will it suffice to just say it didnt feel like a random conversation at all? That his desire and desperation to be with her was quite evident and so was her 'exasperated' yet hesitant interest in him???
PS: She loves kids and he has stored that info in his brain for future reference. In this one sentence you gave me a glimpse of their aanewala kal too ⭐️ Edited by Rasgulla_sp - 10 years ago
Like always, I want more of these kind!! I'm being besharam in demanding but I'm beyond caring about that now :P
These conversations that you write, are perfect. The right words, the right mood and mostly, the pauses have perfect timing!! I just can't get enough of these!!
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