OS:Tum ho....paas mere.....saath mere....

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Posted: 2013-11-25T05:11:18Z

Hola guys i m writin this OS with a very heart( RKR shuttin dwn)

the scene strts frm where Priya is shoutin on Neha 4 slappin Pihu

N:Priya tumhe sach me lagta ki mai tumse jjhoot bolungi

P:(angry) nhi pta mujhe

bt mai apni beti par pura vishwaas krti hu ki woh mera trst kabhi nhi todegi

hai na bache(facin Pihu)

Pihu lowers her head nd avoids eye contct

P:kya huaa bache??

tu mujhse nazre kyu nhi mila rhi hai

P:kya Neha aunty sach kehe rhi hai

still no answer frm Pihu

P:(restless)bta na Pihu

tujhe meri kasam

Pi:haa mumma

Neha Aunty sach kehe rhi hai

P:kyaa

Pi:mai Varun k saath thi

Priya is jst too shocked to react nd finaaly she jst breaks down

Priya turns twrds Neha

P:i m srry Neha

i m srry maine tum par vishwaas nhi kiya

nd she joins her hnd infrnt of her

N:Priya chodo yeh sab

nd hugs her tightly

Priya strts cryin more

nd she leaves Neha nd rums to her room

nd Neha nd Soumya run behin d her

bt Priya jst gets inside the room locks the door

nd strts cryin

outside the rooom

S:bhaabhi plz darwaaza kholiye

N:haa Priya hum Pihu ko milkr samjhaayenge

bt no response

S:mujhe lgta hai hume bhappa ko bta dena chahiye

wohi bhaabhi ko sambhal skte hai

N:haa mai bhi Ram ko hi phone lagaane waali thi

nd she calls Ram

N:heelo Ram

plz tum jldi se ghar aa jaao

R:kya huaa Neha

N:woh Priya

R:kya huaa Priya ko

nd Neha tells Ram everythng

N:tum tovishwaas karoge na mera

R:of course kaunga

kyuki maine bhiPihu ko kisi ladke k saath bike par dekha tha

N:wt

R:maine socha tha ki mai yeh Priya ko bataaunga aur woh yeh Pihu ko samjha degi

R:ruko mai bas aa rha hu

N:hmm

jldi aana

nd Ram reaches Home

R:Priya plz darwwaza kholo

bt still no response

R:bansi Kaaka plz spare keys dijiye

Ram gte the keys nd opens the dooor

nd he spots Priya sittin in the cornor of the roomm huggin her knees nd cryin

R:Priya

Priya looks up nd strts cryin even worse

Ram sits beside her

nd Priya hugs him as tight as she can

P(between sobs):i m sorry Ram

i failed as a mother Ram

mai humaari beti ki parvarish nhi kar paayi dhang se Ram

i ms orry Ram

mai humaari beti ko sahi galat mai phark krna nhi sikha paayi Ram

i msorry

R:Priya isme tum haari ko glthi nhi hai

plz apne aap ko mat koso

nd he hugs

Ram sees Pihu stndin on the door

for the frst tym in lyf Pihu had seen anger in her papa s eyes nd tht too 4 her

nd she went to her

P:hum Pihu se frise baath karenge

R:hum nhi

is baar sirf mai

baath karunga

R:Priya isme tumhaa

P:par

R:par var kuch nhi

chalo

he makes her stnd nd wipes her tears

Ram nd Priya cum inside Pihu s room

R:
Pihu ye sab kya chal rha hai??

Neha Aunty ne jo kha who sach tha ya nhi???

PI:
Papa mujhe nhi pta Neha Aunty kyu yeh sab bol rhi thi

R:accha par agar mai tumhe apni kasam du to kya tum yahi kahogi

Pihu lowers her head

PI:
I m sorry Papa

R:
aap ko pta hai aapne kya kiya hai??

Aaaj aap ki maumma ko kisike k saamne bezzat hona pada tha sirf aapki vajah se

Aapko pta hai who aapki mauuma ki childhood frnd aapki mumma ke bare mei kya soch rhi hogi

kyu jhoot bola aapne hhum sab se??

PI:par papa mumma ne bhi to mujhse jhoot kha tha ki who sirf aapse pyaar krti hai

PR:
Pihu mai sirf tere papa se pyaar krti hu aur kisise se nhi

PI:
to mumma yeh kya hai??
she shows the pic Varun had sent her

R:(furious):
Pihu tumko sach jaanna hai na

mai batata tu

P:
Mr KApoor saant ho jaaiye

R:
nhi Priya ab bas bahut ho gya
isse sach jaana hai na mai bataaunga

to Pihu sach yeh hai ki
haa Varun ke papa aur Priya ki shaadi hone waali thi

aur aapki mumma ne yeh rishta thukra diya tha kyuki Ashwin chahta tha KI aapke naanu unke ghar ki downpayment kare

aur aapki mumma ko yeh bilkul apasant hi aaya
isliye unhone manna kar diya

aur phir aap ki mumma ko pta chala ki Ashwain Shruti aapki mumma ki best frnd se shaadi krna jaa rha kyuki unke paas zyaada paise the

aur jha tak is photo ka sawaal hai yeh tab ki hai jab yeh dono acche frnds the

khush jaankar

PI:(cryin):
I m sorry papa

R:aap mujhse sorry mat kaho apni mumma se kho

(wen aal this was goin on Priya went outside the Room
she was numb to react tht all this had happened because of her past

Jab andar Ram ur Pihu k beech baath chal rhi thi
tab Priya bahhar aa gyi
usse bahut guilt ho rha tha ki uske past ki vajah se Pihu ne yeh sab kiya
Priya corridor par bas aise hi chali jaa rhi thi
usse koi hosh nhi tha ki aaspaas kya ho rha hai
aur badbaddati jaa rhi thi ki
" i m sorry Pihu
meri vajah se tumne yeh sab kiya"
tab vha Somya aati
aur voh Priya ka badbaddana sunti hai
"Bhaabhi bhaabhi aapko kya hua"
bt Priya vhi badbadaa rhi thi
badbaddate badbaddaate Priya ko pta nhi chala ki kab seediya aa gyi
aur wo un siddiyo par se phisal gyi
tabhi Somya ki cheekh sunaai di
"Bhaaabhiii"
yeh sunkar Ram aur Pihu bahhar aate hai
aur woh bilkul hairaan ho te hai ki kya ho rha hai
Ram seediyo par khoon dekhta hai
aur phir uski nazar neeche jaati hai aur woh dekhta hai ki Priya wha khoon mei leti padi hai
woh jld se bhaag kar Priya ke paas jaata hai
usse apni god mei leta hai
"Priya aankhe kholo
Priya"
par Priya kuch jawwab nhi deti hai
Ram somya ki taraf dekhta hai
"kya huaa tha Somya?"
"Bhappa Priya bhaabhi bas ekhihceez badbaddaa rhithi
ki i m sorry Pihu
yeh sab meri vajah se huaa hai
Ram phir teekhi nazar se Pihu ko dekhta hai
Pihu ki himmat nhi thi kuch bolne ki
uske muh se sirfek shabd nikla
"maa"

Priya ko jld se jld hospital le jaaya jaata hai
usse emergency room mei le jaayya jaata hai

Thodi der baad...

Doctor bahaar aate hai
aur kehete hai
"I m sorry Mr Kapoor..."

Ek pal
kayi bar kitna kuch ho jata hai ek pal mein
Kitna kuch kehna chahte hai hum par nahi keh pate
Kitna kuch karna chahte hai hum lekin nahi kar pate
Zindagi hume vo ek pal deti hai lekin hum use gava dete hai aur phir us pal k lautne ka intazar karte hai par zindagi toh aage badh jati hai us pal ka pata hi nahi chalta
Kaun janta hai vo lautega ki nahi


7 Years later...
7 years later...


Ram:
ek pal ksiki zindgibadal sakta hai
meri bhi zindgi badal gyi
aaj meri zindgi
mere paas hokar bhi mere paas nhi hai
woh jo sab kehete hai"zinda laash"
bankar rehi chuki hai
par mai jaanta hu ki meri Priya zinda hai
woh koi zinda laash nhi hai
mujhe aaj bhi yaad ki doctor ne kya kaha tha us din
Doctor:I m sorry Mr Kapoor
hum aapki wife ko bacha nhi sake
sar par gehri chot aane se unke brain mei clot aa gya
jiski vajah se wo coma mei chali gyi hai
us ek pal meri zindgi kha se kha pahuch gya
meri Priya abhi tak apni neend se uthi nhi hai
aur doctors ka kehena hai ki woh kabhi uthegi nhi
par mai jaanta hu ki meri Priya zarror uthegi
aur sab se pehele Ram kehegi
uske baad sharmaake Mr Kapoor kehegi
mai jaanta hu
in doctors ko koan samjhaaye ki pyaar ke aage yeh medical science kuch nhi hai
par khair chodo unhe
mei apni biwi se bahut pyaaar krta hu
aur yehi pyaar uski neend todega
meriPriya ko mujhse koi cheen nhi skta
bhagwaan bhi nhi
Priya mai is dard ke saath jeene ke liye taiyaar
par tumhaare bin nhi hai
tum mujhe sun skti ho na
to plz vaapis aa jaao
kitna so gi yaar
ab mai kharaate bhi nhi lunga
tum issi baath ka badla le rhi ho na mujhse
tumhaari nas nas se vaakif hu mei

Ram bolta gya par Priya ne koi jawwaab nhi diya
woh bas wha leti rhi

Ram phir usse pyaar se ek kiss maagthe par deta hai
aur phir haath par

Ram:
good night sweetheart

Bade acche lagte hain
yeh ghadiyaa tera sang yeh jeewan aur tum
Ram phir Priya ke bagal mei aa kar let gya
ek umeed se ki nayi subah shaayad Priya uth jaayegi
 
 
Nayi subah ek nayi umeed laati hai
aaj Ram ke andr ek nayi aur strong umeed hai ki aaj uski jaan uth jaayegi
aur usse uthna padega aakhir kal unki shaadi ki saalgirah hai
koi choti moti cheez thodi na hai
akkhir shaadi ko 20 saal ho jaayenge
yeh soch kar Ram man hi man muskurara rha tha
Ram:hi darlin
tumhe pta hai kal humaari 20vi saalsgirah hai shaadi ki hai
dekho dekhte hi dekhte humaari shaadi ko bees saal ho gye hai
aur is baar maine soch liya hai ki mai saalgirah aklele nhi manaaunga
pta hai kyu??
kyuki mujhe pta hai ki aaj tum zaroor uthogi
samjhi
Par Priya ki or se koi jawwab nhi aaya

Tere liye hi jiya main
Khud ko jo yun de diya hai
Teri wafa ne mujhko sambhala
Saare ghamon ko dil se nikaala
Main jo mit bhi gaya tto wajood mera
Sadaa tujh mein rahe zinda

Kyun ki tum hi ho, abb tum hi ho
Ki zindagi abb tum hi ho.. woh o..
Chain bhi, mera dard bhi
Meri aashiqui abb tum hi ho

Bahhaar Pihu khadi thi
darwaaze se chipakkar
Ro rhi thi
kyuki usse apni maa papa ki yeh haalat nhi dekhi jaa rhi thi
phir woh chali jaati
Ra,m sees Pihu
Ram:kyaa yaar Priya
bas karo abb
saat saal ho gye hai
saath saal
koi chota tym nhi hai
tumhe nhi baat krni hai to mat karo
kam se kam apne baccho ko to yeh saza mat do
tumhe pta hai us accident ke baad Pihu kabhi is kamre mei nhi aayi
woh mujhse nazre bhi nhi milaati hai
na jaane kitni baar maine usse se kha ki tum usse maaf kr dogi
bt u no wt she s guilty
itna guilty ki woh apni behno ko tak face nhi kr paati
saath saal se woh iss guilt ke saath jee rhi hai
tadap rhi hai woh in saath saalo se
plz Priya
yeh kaisi saza de rhi ho usse tum
mai maanta hu ki uski galti thi
par woh pachtaa rhi hai
woh mar rhi hai us guilt se Priya
tumhe pta hai jab doctor ne bataaya tha ki tumhaare bachne ke chances bahut kam hai tab
you know what she tried to commit suscide
woh to bhala hai Soumya ka
ki usne dekh liya
woh apni kalaai kaat rhi hai
humaare pyaar ki nishaani apni jaan lena chaahti thi
us incident ke baad se usne mujhse kabhi baath nhi ki Priya
it hurts me
ki meri beti apne aap ko itni bada saza de rhi hai
it hurts me(ram breaks down)
woh apne aap ko tumhaara gunegaar maanti hai
she thnks she s ur murderer Priya
mai nhi dekh skta usko iss halaat
tum Pari Myra ko kis baath ki saza de rhi ho
unho ne to kuch nhi kiya hai
unka bachpan Priya
jis time unhe tumhaari sab se zyaada zaroorat thi
tum nhi thi
woh pta hai
pihu se kya bolte hai ki di aap kitne lucky the jo mumma aapke saath aapke bachpan mei the
par di hum kitna unlucky hai
aur pta hai yeh sunkar Pihu
khud ko kamre mei band kar kr bas roti thi
us din naa woh kuch khhaati thi na peeti thi
Priya she s torturin herself
aur mai nhi dekh skta usse aise
yeh dekh kar mujhe khud marne ka man krta hai
kyuki i cnt see her like tht
Priya uth jaao yaar bahut ho gya
saath saal
unhone apni maa ke paas nhi rhe hai
itni badi saza tum humaa
ab to uth jaao Priya
mere liye nhi to kam se kam bacho ke liye
pta hai humaari saat saal ki shaadi mei hum sirf 1saal aur kuch mahine saath rhe hai saath rhe hai
shaadi ke baad k 6 mahine
pehele woh jail
phir woh 5 saal
then 6 mahineJaipur mei
phir 8 saal tak mei mai kaam krta rha
aur phir tum saath saalo se coma mai ho
humaari is shaadi ka matlab ka kyaa huaa
jab hum saath nhi reh skte hai
bataao Priya
jawwaaab chaahiye mujhe
Par Priya koi jawaab nhi deti hai
aur Ram gusse mei uthkar waha se chala jaata hai
ek bar mudkar dekhta hai aur kehta hai
R:mai tumse kabhi baat nhi karunga
i hate u(tears rollin down)

Tu mujhe chhod jaaye
Yeh nahi ho sakta, saathiya

Meri baaton mein tera zikr sadaa
Meri yaad mein teri fikr sadaa
Main jo bhi hoon tum hi to ho
Mujhe tum se mili apni adaa

Kyunki tum hi ho, ab tum hi ho
Zindagi ab tum hi ho..
Chain bhi, mera dard bhi
Meri aashiqui ab tum hi ho

nd he goes shuttin the door
Ram:Suhaani mai thodi der mei aata hu
Priya ka khyaal rakhna
Suhaani:ji sir
nd he goes
Inside the room
Ram ke jaane ke baad kamre mei ajeeb sa sannata chaa gya
par phir kuch aisa hota hai jiski kalpana kisi ne nhi ki hoti
 
 
CHAP:Tumhe Paake ke bhi khoya hu main...


Achaanak Priya ki saans phoolne lgti hai
machino mei se beep beep ki aawaaze aane lgti hai
aur Suhaani hairaan ki yeh sab kya ho rha hai
woh jldi se Ram ko phone lagati hai

Suhaani:Hello Sir aap plz jldi se aa jaaiye Priya mam ki haalal bigad rhi hai
Ram:mai aa rha hai

aur Ram bhaagta bhaagta apni jaan ke paas aata hai

R:kya huaa Suhaani???

S:sir mam ne respond krna ek dum se chod diya hai
asia lag rha hai
jaise ki woh jeena hi na chaati

R:theek hai
tum jaao
mai Priya ko waapis laaunga

Suhaani chali jaati hai
aur Ram apni jaan ke paas aakar baith ta hai

R:priya itna naaraz ho gyi mujhse
tum jaanti ho na mera gussa
i m sorry
aur mai tumse bahut bahut pyaar krta hu
ab to uth jaao
tumhaara i luv u bolne sunne ke liye taras gya hu main


Zindaa hoon lekin, wo baat nahi hai
Haathon mein teraa, jo haath nahi hai
Ishq ka hai naam bada
Maine hai kiya kaam bada
Kar ke magar aadha chhodoon na
Tere rukh se ye chehra modoon na

Tera rastaa main chhodoon na...


itna naraaz ho mujhse ki mujhse 7 saalo se tumne baath nhi ki hai
ha priya??
kya main itna bura hu
i m sorry yaar
Ram ki aankho se aasnsu aane lgte hai

c mon yaar itna bura hu kya
aur Ram rone lgta hai

Priya ek lump swallow krti hai
Ram Suhaani ko bulaata hai
dheere dheere Priya aankhe kholti hai
aur uske muh se ek shabd nikalta hai Ram
Ram ki khushi ka thikaana nhi hai

Priya apne aaspas dekti hai
usse dikta hai ki ek aadmi uska haath baar baar choom rha hai
aur ro rha hai

saaamne ek ladki khadi hai
jiski aankho se shaayad khushi ke aansoo tapak rhe hai
Par Priya ke man mei ek hi sawaal hai
aur woh bolti hai
Aap sab koan hai??
mai yha kya kr rhi hu??
aap sab ro kyu rhe hai??
mai abhi kha hu??

Yeh sab sunkar Ram ko lgta hai ki usne apni priya ko paake bhi khoya hai
 
 
CHAP: Hum tumhaare hai tumhaare sanam
R:Priya tumhe kuch yaad nhi hai
mai mai tumhaara Mr Kapoor
golu
tablet kapoor
common yaar tum aise kaise sab bhool skti ho
S:sir plz relax kijiye
R:mai kaise relax karu
meeri biwi ko kuch yaad nhi hai
S:Sir aisa hota
yaaddaash t jaati hai par aa bhi jaati hai
bas thoda tym lgta hai
P:suniye aap mere husband hai na?
R:haa Priya kuch chaahiye kya
P:par aap mere husband nhi ho skte hai
R:kyu
humaari shaadi hui hai
3 bache hai
mai hi tum haara pati hu
P:bt mere husband to kaafi golu
aur aap to bahut handsome aur dashin ho
R:mtlb tumhe mai yaad hu
P(teary eyes):aapko kya laga mai aapko bhool jaaungi
mai apne pyaar
apne bacho ko bhool jaaungi
aisa kabhi sochiyega bhi mat
samjhe
P(turnin to Suhaani):aap koan hai??
S:mai
mai doctor Suhaani
P:tum ro kyu rhi ho
S:(wipin har tears):bas khushi ke aansoo
mai chalti hu
Sir mam ka khyaal rakhiyega
and am just a call away
R:thnk u Suhaani 4 everythng
S:sir isme thnk u waali koi baath nhi
acha mai chalti hu
bye sir
bye mam
nd she goes
Ram Sits beside Priya
R:tumko pta hai tumne mujhe kitna dara diya tha
merito jaan hi nikal gyi thi
P:am sorry

R:ab aage se aisa mazaak kabhi na krna

P:mai kitne saal se aise coma mai thi

R:7

P(tears
): am sorry
mai aapko 7 saalo ke liye akele chodkar chali gyi thi


R:wipin her tesrs

aisa kuch bhi nhi tha Priya
tum humesha meri har saans har dhadkan mei thi
tumne mujhe kabhi akele nhi choda tha


P:Pihu kaisi hai?

R:tumhe dekhkar bahut khush ho jaayegi

P:mujhe bacho se milna hai

R:
abhi nhi
woh so rhe honge
plus tumhe bhi aaram ki zaroorat hai


P:i luv u

R:i luv u too

aur Ram Priya ek doosre ki baaho mai so gye hai


To yeh thi Ram Priya ke attoot prem ki kahaani


i ll be back with another sooon
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Posted: 2013-11-26T04:21:10Z

really nice update i wish Ram know abt Pihu & Varun in show too but i guess CV'S planned something diffreant so let's wait for that... I liked the way u wrote the whole story it was plasure to read it plz do write more will be waiting...
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Posted: 2013-11-27T03:34:14Z
ye accha tha serial se
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Posted: 2014-02-05T05:08:09Z
Originally posted by leena04



really nice update i wish Ram know abt Pihu & Varun in show too but i guess CV'S planned something diffreant so let's wait for that... I liked the way u wrote the whole story it was plasure to read it plz do write more will be waiting...
thnk u 4 ur lovely cmmnts
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Posted: 2014-02-05T05:08:41Z
Originally posted by vironikajain


Good one.. Clap
thnxx for 4 lovely cmmnt
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Posted: 2014-02-07T06:33:31Z
Originally posted by sinalbest


Nice..
thnk u 4 ur cmmnts
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Posted: 2014-02-07T06:35:22Z
Originally posted by tulshan1989


nice one
thnk u bery much
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Posted: 2014-02-07T06:37:19Z
Originally posted by anupam_dil


ye accha tha serial se
 
u thnk u
btw thx 4 ur lovely compliments
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