Jeevan Saathi, a SS on RaYa, updated on page 42 - Page 9

sree0007

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Posted: 10 years ago

nice preview...can wait...let her get well soon...this is more important.

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lpsakshi

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Posted: 10 years ago

wow ab ayega asli maza

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leena

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Posted: 10 years ago

awww yaar its ok tell her to update when ever she want... would love to see btw nice concept i actually like it a lot...

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vironikajain

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Posted: 10 years ago

Nice update..
Ram- Priya got ready for marriage..

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vironikajain

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Posted: 10 years ago

Outline of story is good..
Take ur time Drishti..

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jineejiggs

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Posted: 10 years ago

Dear readers, Dhrishti has asked me to post a beautiful writing, so am posting it here, do read you all, am sure you all will like it

Daughters spread like a music in the house...when she speaks, speaks without a break...& everyone says, "chup bhi kar jao", when she is silent, mother says, "tabiyat theek hain na", father says, "aaj ghar may khamoshi kyun hain", bhai says, "naraaz ho kya" aaand when she is married, all says, "aisa lagta hain iss ghar ki raunak hi chali gayi". She is the real non stop music...Dedicated to emotional, cute, pretty, sweet & sincere girls - That's Me...That's You...That's a Girl...Proud To Be A Girl, kyunki sari raunaq tum hi se to hain😊

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jineejiggs

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Posted: 10 years ago

here comes the next part, enjoy the RaYa saga

credit to original writer: Dhristi Kapadia

PART 4

Ram while returning home was thinking ye mujekya ho gaya jab usne mana kiya toj muje khush hona chahye tha par mene kyu use shaadi k lye manaya vikrma sahi kehta hai ki vakayi me muje ache dost ki zarurat hai jo mera sathj de shayad priya me muje woh dost mil jaye.

Priya thinking main kyu unke samne royi main aaj tak kisi ke samne nai royi nuts k saamne bhi nai fir main kyu apne aap ko rok nai paayi kyu mene unhe woh sab baaten kahi jo mene aaj tak kisi se nai kahi kya mera faisla sahi hai shayad ye shaadi meri jindagi badal de pati naa sahi ek acha dost toh milega jomuje samjhega mere sukh dukh me mera
sath dega.Thinking ths she went to sleep. After so many years she slept a gud nd a relaxing sleep.

Ram reached home nd told d news to his family everyone was very happy their happpiness knew no bound. After that he told dem dat priya wants nuts nd kartik to marry first
but dey all refused as kartik is younger to him then finally it was decided dat both d couple will marry on d same day

Priya's apartment

Nuts : dee I am vry happy dat u finally decided to move on I knw dat ram bhai vl keep u happy

Nxt day in d mrng kk neha nd vikram went to priya's apartment. She opened d door nd welcumd dem inside

Kk: priya cum nd sit beside me main tumse kuch puchna chahti hu kya tum ye shaadi apni marji se kar rai ho kisi ne tume force toh nai kiya na

Priya: ji nai aunty main ye shaadi apni marji se kar rai hu kisi ne muje force nai kiya

Kk: priya muje maa kaho ab tum meri beti ho nd dey all smiled aaj toh main jamm ke mithayi khaungi orr neha tum muje khane se nai rok sakti bcoz aaj mere dono beton ki shaadi fix huyi hai.

Priya hugged neha nd vikram

Neha: welcum to kappor family main aaj bahot khush hu aaj tum jo maangogi woh milega

Priya :neha I want ki pehle nuts orr kartik ki shaadi ho

Neha : I knw ram ne bataya isilye v hav decided ki dono shaadi ek hi din hogi

Then kartik enterd while shouting: dee nuts main aa gaya hu nd he got shocked to see his family der

Vikram: arey kartik tu yahan tabhi main sochu ki roj ek se doo baje tak tum jaate kahan ho

Kartik:wo bhai actually I use to omplete my assignment with nuts

Vik:well no problem love birds we have decided u to get married along with ram priya n engagement is tom

Kartik:yeah he jumped in joy n hugged priya n said wow nw u will be my bhabhi

After few mins they bid themself gud bye

Then nuts hugged priya

Nuts:di u hav made a gud decision rambhai is vry gud man I m sure he vl keep u happy nd no doubt u ll keep dem happy I love u dee

Priya : I love u too nuts

Priya went to ganesh temple to seek blessings as it was their engagement nd then both reach home and their phone rang

Priya picked up

Kartik: dee be ready by 6 in d evening I ll becoming to take u both for shopping for tomorrow nd have dinner in ur favourite restaurant...Dee I love u

Priya teasing kartik: ye love u mere liye hai ya nuts ke liye

Kartik : dono ke liye now dee be ready nd bye

Exactly at 6

Kartik horned his car.. Priya nd nuts came outside their house nd came to the car.. When dey opened d door dey saw ran nd kartik waiting for them

Ram looked at priya nd said : hi priya nd hi my doll [gudiya]

Nuts: hi rambhai ab aap ko gudiya dee ko kehna chahye

Raya were little embarrassed...

Ram nd kartik at front nd priya nd nuts sat at d back of d seat..ram set the mirror nd saw priya she was looking outside. The window then priya saw him nd gave a smile to him..

PRECAP--> raya nuts nd kartik goes for shoppping
Edited by jineejiggs - 10 years ago

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sampa123

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Posted: 10 years ago

kia yaar itna chota updt?not fair..long dia karo pls..thanks for the pm.n cntinue soon.n updt was nice

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lpsakshi

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Posted: 10 years ago

thnks for pm me dear cute one lovd it Edited by lpsakshi - 10 years ago

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shavii

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Posted: 10 years ago

finally raya are happy

next engagement followed by the wedding ... i want raya to get married first in morning and later nuts and karthick in eve😳

continue soon
Edited by shavii - 10 years ago

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