Jeevan Saathi, a SS on RaYa, updated on page 42 - Page 21

Posted: 10 years ago
A simple and lovely love story. Good going but I suggest that you should be careful while you use Past tense. Correct the grammatical  mistakes and it will be too good to read. sorry if I have hurt your feelings.
Posted: 10 years ago

Part 7
awww it was really cute one Ram don't wakes up early Priya went to weak him up awww his cute antics very so sweet... I loved the way Ram is obeying everything of Priya's talk so sweet he is now waiting to see their HM track takwe place... moving on next to read...
Posted: 10 years ago

Part 8
awww lovely RaYa's rromentic moment ok so HM postponded for some days no worry hope to see it soon... but enjoying current story too its amezing to see RaYa together getting gelled up with other & coming closer unknowingly... I thinking might be Ram took Priya at beech I feel so age ka toh story padh k hi pata chalega so moving on next...
Posted: 10 years ago

Part 9
OMG RaYa coming closer to each other so gud they r taking their own time to enjoy their journey from Friendship to love amezing... ab RaYa ko ek dusre ki aadat si padti ja rahi hai so gud I loved tieing hook wala moment awww...but what a twist at the end what the hell Apeksha did god moving on next...
Posted: 10 years ago

Part 10
awesome the way maturly RaYa & other family member handeled Apeksha's matter was so gud... RaYa become each other's emotinal support in all this all is gud everything is getting change between RaYa now... so sad Priya kissed Ram's forhead for first time & he even didn't know it but hope lot of more ahead for Ram & for us too...its reallly awesome update waiting for next do post next soon...
Posted: 10 years ago
thnks for all ur pms i am busy so sorry for late reply lovd it alot 
Posted: 10 years ago
sry 4 late reply, fantastic update Dhristi, Raya handle  the situation very nicely, looking frwd d nxt,pls continue soon,thx 4 PM
Posted: 10 years ago
Pl. update soon waiting.
Wish you both a happy new year 2014.
Posted: 10 years ago
Part 7
very sweet update
very cute scene...loved it
Thanks for PM and sorry for late
Edited by sandhyasn - 10 years ago
Posted: 10 years ago
part 8
sweet update
story is moving very fast...both are getting close slowly...
love the hook scenešŸ˜³
thanks for PM
 


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