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OS - PYAAR KI EK HAASIN RAAT, update part 2 on page 2

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hello everyone, this time am back with a very sweet OS from one of my good friend Dhrishti, I met her in twitter, she is a big fan of my writings and she too loves to read all the fictions here in the Forum. She is unable to register herself here so asked my help to post her one of the writing, so here it goes


PYAAR KI EK HAASIN RAAT


credit to original writer : Dhrishti Kapadia

Part 1

It ws going to be 1year today priya had arranged a small party in the
house wid close frnds n family..saying it was their 1st year of
wedding


it ws small surprise for ram as she hd nt seen him for a month..



Ram hs gone to US due sum work regarding business..



Priya noticed that guests r coming n suddenly a smile apear on her
face coz any tym ram flight is going to land...



When her phone rang she went runner to corner n picked up the phone n
heard his familiar,stunning n husky voice...


Ram-hi priya i m here in mumbai...



Priya-ram i m so excited aur thanks aapki kasam ke liye i cnt cum even
tn pick u up at airport( saying she felt sad)



ram-coz i dnt u to cm as i want to gv u suprise..


Priya-let see ram who gves better surprise than she hang the call...



Then ram enter the car which ws outside the airport n left for km




Priya ws busy wid the guest.as she felt better to serve it herself to
guests...one of her friend gave her compliment as was looking goregous in white saree.


She blushed at it n continue looking at the door...then she went in
the kitchen busy wid her work she felt a pair of hands encircle her
bare waist..she knew it was her ram then she turned bck to see her
luv...



Priya-ram!aap aagaye she was suprised he smelt so heavenly ever after
a long journey...



Ram-yes darling if ur finished checking me out i m bck...blushing
priya hugged him tightly feeling his warm..pulling him bck aap itne
tired lag re ho come lets go upstaris u need to freshenup...



Ram-priya thanks for the party i did gt a nice surprise i knw y u kept
this party n then went to their room



Ram locked the door while priya was searching the clothes for she
decide to gv him a brown kurta she kept on bed when she realise he ws
staring at her...ram went near priya n kissed her passionately the
need for her the longing for her n how he missed her was expressed
through kiss...priya responded bck in the same manner...



They broke the kiss n ram went to change n she went to check the guest



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Posted: 10 years ago
lovely one please continue soon.
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hmmm nice start ๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰but ending wrong time pe๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†continue soon...
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very nice ...cont soon
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nice part...!!!
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good start continue soon
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vry nice os dhrishti.cntinue soon
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Awww this is so shrt and sweet part ..
ending at wring time haaa...
plz continue soon..Good one dear .
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nice one
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Good one..very sweet OS
Thanx Ujjaini for sharing with us..๐Ÿ˜ƒ
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