Tere ishq mein-os (updated part 6- page-17) - Page 2

as per one of my friends request...!!

here are the page no.s for the updates...!!

part 1- page1

part2- page2

part3- page3

part4- page8

part5-page 12

part6-page17

hie friends...!!!

this is my first writeup...!!!

and my take on the current track in balh...!!! pls excuse me for all the mistakes...!!!

feel free to give your comments...both positive and negative.

<font size="5">Scene starts with priya coming back to the room after apologisng juhi..!!! </font>

<font size="5"><font color="#333333" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">Ram sees that priya is upset over what all hpnd...</font></font>

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He calls pr</font>iya : priya iam sry...i hurt u...!!! But...(he was not finding words to let her know that its b'cz of juhi he was able to take care of both the children and business..)</font></font>

<font size="5" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">Priya understands his prob: dont b sry mr.kapoor i understand. I should not have shouted at juhi. she was a great help in these 7yrs!! Thanks for stopping me...!!! She smiles at him...as if assuring everything is fine..!!! He feels good...and comes near her to give a hug...but backs himself remembering priya's dialogue..!! </font>

<font size="5" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">Both are lying on bed...but were facing their backs to each othr...!!! Ram realizes that he needs to allot more time for priya and find whats bothering her...!!! Priya on the otherhand assures herself that ram and juhi are just friends and but is a little bothered about pihu...but she thinks of finding every detail of pihu's life in the past 7yrs...!! </font>

<font size="5" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">Late night, its already cold due to the weather Nd ram has switched on his a.c. Priya feels cold and turns to the other side.Ram too turns..now both r facing each other. Priya snuggles unto ram..!!! Ram encircles his hand over her waist and pulls her more onto him feeling his warm hand, priya snuggles more, raises a little and kisses his cheek and buries her head in his chest and sleeps...ram gets awaken due to the kiss and realizes that priya snuggled to him and kissed him in his sleep...his joy knew no bounds..!!
He gets naughty and increases the temp.
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<font size="5" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">Priya feeling cold hugs him tightly.
Ram is on cloud9 feeling priya so close after 7yrs...he realizes his need of her in this life...Nd promises himself that he would woo her and marry her again asap...!!! He kisses lightly on her forehead hugs her tightly and sleeps.</font>

<font size="5" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">Morning time...!!</font>

<font size="5" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">Priya wakes up first and finds that she has snuggled to him. She feels bad. She thinks of finishing juhi and sid's marriage asap, so that she can marry her man again and hug him with all her rights.</font>

<font size="5" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">she removes herself from his grasp and moves into washroom to freshnup...!!!</font>

<font size="5" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">a little while later, ram too gets up and sees that priya has already got up...!!!</font>

<font size="5" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">ram thinks to himself (ram beta,chalo start wooing your own wifey)</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">to be contn.</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">feel free to comment...!!!</font>

Edited by chakravarthty - 10 years ago

Nice os...
ab ram kya krne wala hai...
raya ka romantic scene aur hona tha😉
raya k beech aur beech kuch kuch hona tha 😳
continue soon !!!!
Edited by Mini1991 - 10 years ago

That was a great start... Please continue soon... Thanks...😊

hmm only in ff ram will be wooing wife rest mein he is busy comforting juhi and wooing her

dekte hain chalo start karoo

Aww lovely start..lets see how Ram will woo Priya..
Do cont soon..

awesome writing... update asap

Part 1
I actually liked night scean where Ram wanted Priya but didn't crossed his limits & respected her wish too if in that hours he did anything Priya won't stop him but letter she will felt guilty or might be in middle only getting her lost seanses in her hubby... but loved Ram here thinking of marrying Priya ASAP after & wooing her back...waiting for next do post soon...

Ohho ohho naughty :P plz continue

Loved the OS. The hugging, snuggling and kissing was so cute. Please Continue. Cant wait for the update. 😳

friends this is the part two of this os.

hope you guys njoy this part too..!!

feel free to comment and like...!!!

Ram gets up, and moves to washroom.

Priya is in kitchen. After night's incidence she wanted to prepare something for ram, but the scenes at neha's place flashed back in her mind. She was confused now thinking wat to prepare for ram.
Just then nuts comes frim behind and and hugs priya.
Nuts: ab kaisi ho priya??? Adjust karliya yaha pe???
Priya gives a faint smile and: hm, try kar rhi hoon. Nuts ek hlp karegi pls...
Nuts: ha bolona. Anything for you.
Priya: ise lag rha hain ki mr.kapoor ki lifestyle bohot badal gyi hain pichle saath saal mein. Can you tell me...what does he prefer in breakfast these days??? 
Nuts : oh...acha...!!! Sirf mr.kapoor ko ya hume bhi milskta hain aapke haatho ka khana??? 
Priya,shyingly: chup karo na.aur bolo kya khate hain. Aur tumhare liye kya banau ye bhi boldo, banadungi.
Nuts: bhai toh sirf fruits khate hain, aur bread jam. Mujhe aloo ke parathy chahiye.
Priya(a bit sad): ok. Banadungi tumhare liye.
With a slight hope she asks if he prefers oats.
Nuts agrees and goes on: pata hain priya, jab se tum chaligyi bhai ka life style hi change hogya. Time pe khate hain. Aur sirf healthy khana kahte hain. Jaan na hain kyun?? 
Priya looks upto nuts as she contn. 'cz he loves you priya. Priya looks on shocked. She thought ram was changed 'cz of juhi's insistence.
Nuts: haan priya. Tum chaligyi aur bhai ko sab kuch sambhalna tha. Bche they family aur buissiness ki responsibility. Tab bhai ne promise karliya ki wo sab kuch sambhalngy for whch he needed to be fit. And from then on his whole life changed.
Priya felt happy that ram has taken good responsibility of their chldren family and buissiness but felt guilty that she had left him and her face goes dull.
Nuts notices it and asks her to forget what all hapnd in past and move on.
Priya smiles and starts boiling oats and simultaneously makes aloo paratha for nuts. Nuts helps her and entertains her by telling her the details wch hpnd in these sevn years.

Priya and natasha finally finish with the breakfast preparation and nuts asks bansi kaka to arrange thngs on table and bfr priya protests nuts drags priya into her room. 
Nuts and priya enter their room gossiping and shocked to see the view in front of them.
Ram is in his tshirt coming his hair.
Nuts whistles from behind. : oho...lgta hain kisiko protocol sikhani padegi. Ise dress mein.koi ofc jata hain kya ??? 
Ram turns around and is shckd to see them.
He comes near nuts and folds her ear: aaj kal bht bolne lagi hain tu. Mein kuch nhi bhula. Aaj offc nhi jaraha. Aur meri biwi ko mein casuals mein pasand hoon isliye ye. 
Nuts : arey bhai kaan toh chodo phle. 
Priya is shyng listng to those wrds from ram
Nuts: wah wah...biwi aagyi aur hume toh ab koi yaad hi nhi krta. And pouts 
Ram glares at her.
Nuts winks at him and slowly steps back and pushes priya on ram and runs from there. 
Priya falls on ram and they share an eyelock.
Nuts looks back and tells them to close the door and contn romance. 

Raya break their eyelock. And ram helps priya to stand on her feet.

ram asks her if she is free today, she looka at him as he continues wanted to take you somewhere so...and looks at priya.

priya agrees to him and calls him for breakfast.both of them come to the dining room.all the family members are shocked to see ram in this avtar.

daadi and krishna compliment him and myra and pari pull ram's leg.

juhi too compliments him and asks him if he's not going to offc today.

ram: nahi juhi. wo priya ko ek baar mumbai dikhane ka soch rha hoon boht kuch badalgya in saath salo mein.

juhi nods and evryone start relishing their breakfast.

Priya keeps the oats cup in front of ram. Ram looks at it displeased. priya feels sad as he forwards his hand to take something else, but suprising everyone he takes aloo paratha. Priya feels happy. but juhi stops him 

juhi: ram tumhara cholestrol bohot jyda hain you are not allowed to eat

ram: ek din mein kuch nahi hone wala. Har roz todhi khata hoon. Aur bht saal baad priya ke haath ka khane ko mil rha hain , so pls dnt stop me today.

juhi just backsoff.

As soon as ram takes the paratha nuts stops him.

ram:ab tujhe kya prob hain???

nuts: meine priya se maang ke banwaye. You cant at them. they are for me.

ram: arey tu fashion field mein hain. Fitness ka dhyan rakh. and immediately serves himslf the parathas made by priya ignoring the complaints from nuts.

after breakfast,

ram: priya tum ek baar kamre mein aogi pls.

priya: ha aarhi hoon. aap chaliye.

as soon as priya comes into the room, ram hugs her from behind.

priya: mr.kapoor meine aapse kuch kaha tha.

ram: whoz mr.kapoor here??????

priya: mr.kapoor mazak mat kijiye chodiye mujhe.

ram: arey sach mein. iam viraj, holding my mallika in my arms. apni gf ko hug kr rha hoon. tumhe prob kyun horha hain???

priya: acha. viraj smjhona ye mere aur mere hubby ka bedroom hain. Agar wo ajayngy toh problem hjyga. Jldi se niklo yaha se and tries to come out of his grip.

ram: arey tumhara hubby upar aarha tha, toh meine use pakad ke stdy mein band krdya. Ab koi dstrb nahi karega dn wry.

priya: shying, chodo na viraj meri nanad bhi aayi hain, agar usne dekhliya toh escape ho ne ka koi mauka nahimilega hume.

ram: acha toh phir theek hian. Chalo aaj hum date pe chlte hian.

priya: as she senses that ram has loosened his grip over her, mein aaj nahi aane wali. Mujhe aaj mere husband ke sath bitana hain and pushes him and runs from there. 

ram in an attempt to catch her slips and both of them fall on the bed ,ram over priya. Both share an eyelock and reminisce the old times. 

And suddenly there's a kncok at the door and neha shouting from the other side.