***IsHq ViShK***(updated pg.36)

Posted: 17 years ago

hey everyone...me and my friend are gonna start a fan fic which is gonna be kinda differnet...as in its gonna include US....hehe...neways hope u enjoyπŸ˜ƒ

we will start soon.........thx 4 reading!!!😊

ok were here to update...hehe...ok here goes...btw their all living in LONDON

***THE MEHRA FAMILY***

MANSUKH MEHRA : He is a very strict man and is very old fashioned and he has 2 kids...one daughter and one son...he has disciplined his daughter very well but hasnt really succeeded on his son...but he still loves his children very much...and can do anything for them

DAYA MEHRA : She is a very sweet and caring mother...and well u can say tht her son is spolied because of her...shes a house wife and has tried her best to make her children well-mannered...

POOJA MEHRA : She is a sweet and innocent girl......she is close to her father but fears him very much!she is 21 years old and is in her 2nd lastyear of college.....she has two best friends....Kripa and Bubbly.....but she is closer to Bubbly......she also loves her younger brother ALOT!!....believes in love...going OUT with Ronit......!!(***if u want my pic just pm ok...i dun wanna post it on a public fourmπŸ˜ƒ***)

RAHUL MEHRA : He is a spoiled brat...and a very big flirt...and hes always going out and coming late at night...his dad is always yelling at him but it doesnt make a difference to him because his mom always takes his side...He says tht he doesnt believe in love but deep deep down inside he really does

***THE KAPOOR FAMILY***

SUKHMAN KAPOOR : He is not strict at all...and gives all the freedom in the world to his 3 kids...BUT still teachs then the value and traditions of their culture

MAYA KAPOOR : She is very modern and hates ppl tht are not her status...maya has spoiled her youngest daughter ALOT...shes not very "sanskari" but still loves her 3 kids to death and is willing to do anything for their happiness

SANDEEP KAPOOR : He is VERY VERY VERY sweet!!HEs sooo innocent and doesnt talk much to ppl he doesnt kno...hes in last year college..he loves his little sisters Kripa and Bubbly...AND he secretly loves pooja his sisters best friend and doesnt have enough courage to tell her...He respects his mom and dad very much and it all adds up tht hes very very very sweet!! hes 22 years old

KRIPA KAPOOR : Shes very cute..shes best friends with Pooja...shes extremely close to her brother and sister..shes in 2nd last year of college and she LOVES Angad!!shes 21 years old

BUBBLY KAPOOR : she is very sweet and bubbly..she is the youngest 1...AND very spoiled...shes best best friends with Pooja and her older sister kripa...she respects her parents and loves them alot...she is 18 years old and is just starting college...she doesnt really believe in love...and her current b/f is SAGARRRR!!! (***if u want to see my pic plzzzz pm me..me and pooooja dun wanna put it up in a public forumπŸ˜ƒ***)

***OTHER IMPORTANT CHARACTERS***

RONIT GUJRAL : He is a business tycoon...and is very career driven...all he cares about is his business...and barely has time for other things like Pooja

ANGAD KHANNA : A very sweet guy tht lives next door to the Kapoor family....he is also in love with Kripa...and is in last year college

SAGAR : He is very sweet...and alot of fun to be around...loves bubbly very muchoooo

 

 

***IMPORTANT COUPLES***

POOJA AND RONIT........AND THEN SANDEEP

BUBBLY AND SAGAR........AND THEN RAHUL

KRIPA AND ANGAD

 

 

Edited by ***HumTum*** - 17 years ago
Posted: 17 years ago
ok we updated it..and soon we will be postin a new part!!!! πŸ˜ƒ
Posted: 17 years ago
Originally posted by ***HumTum***


ok we updated it..and soon we will be postin a new part!!!! πŸ˜ƒ
cant wait πŸ˜›
Posted: 17 years ago
*~*PART ONE*~* ...its kinda short...post a longer part laterπŸ˜›πŸ˜ƒ

Its really early in the morning and you see a girl waking up to the sound of her alarm clock which said 6:00am
She sets her feet on the ground and is just sitting on her bed rubbing her eyes(Her room was painted red with pink hearts on the wall...she had a really big picture of dev anand on her wall..shes a big fan of him πŸ˜› πŸ˜† ) she finally get up and goes to her window and opens her curtain we finally see her face...and she is none other then POOJAAAA..the light is shining on her pretty face...then she goes into the bathroom and takes a shower...shes out exactly by 6:15...then she goes downstairs...and there she see her dad and mom sitting at the breakfast table
(*P-Pooja...B-Babujee...M-Maa*)
P : Good morning babujee...good morning maa (she goes and touches their feet)
B : Good morning beta...jeete raho
P : Ok babujee mujhe college aaj jaldi janna
     hai...thou mein jao
B : Haan aur aapne bhai koh bhi jaara utaho...kitna    sotha hai...bahut bigade gaya hai
M : ok abhi bas laro bacha hai abhi
P : ok mein jakar utha thi hoon...(she goes upstairs to go and wake up her brother)

She goes into a room which says DO NOT ENTER on the door...the room is painted blue and has pictures of him all over the wall...theres also music symbols all over...the room is extremely messy...and theres clothes all over the place...and then you see a boy sleeping with his face covered

P : RAHUL WAKE UPPPPPPPP!!!!!!!!!!!!!
R : ........................
P : RAHUL WAKE UPPP...plzzzz i gotta go to college
R : ermmmhhhhhh
P : PLZZZ...(then she takes the blanket off his face and you see his cute innocent little face)
R : DIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII...let me sleeppppppppppppppppp...its too earlyy
P : I really gotta go to college early 2day soo plzz get up...
R : ok fine i'll be there in 20 mins.
P : Promise
R : ya i promise

Edited by ***HumTum*** - 17 years ago
Posted: 17 years ago
u better make the next part longer πŸ˜‰ continue soon!!!!Edited by kripa_angad=luv - 17 years ago
Posted: 17 years ago
we'll post the next part soon... πŸ˜ƒhehe πŸ˜†
Posted: 17 years ago
Originally posted by ***HumTum***


we'll post the next part soon... πŸ˜ƒhehe πŸ˜†
cant wait
Posted: 17 years ago
Ishq Vishk mein aab tak aapne paarhaπŸ˜† ...

P : I really gotta go to college early 2day soo plzz get up...
R : ok fine i'll be there in 20 mins.
P : Promise
R : ya i promise
 

*~* PART TWO *~*

Meanwhile At The Kapoor House!!!

We see a guy sitting infront of the mandir which is inside their house...praying...he finishes praying and goes to the breakfast table..he sits and picks up a peice of toast..and slowly reaches for the butter knife...he puts the knife through the butter and gracefully puts it on his toast πŸ˜† the butter melts on the toast...hehe...he opens his mouth and puts the delicious toast in..yum!!...he gets some butter on his chin..he reaches for the napkin..and his face is finally showed...its sandeep!!...

upstairs a girl is sleeping and snoring...drewl is coming out of her mouth..she swallows and chokes on her drewl...she wakes up coughing....she sees the alarm clock..it is 6:45 am...

k: oh my lord krishna!! wut have i done i slept in!! i need to get up and get ready to go to college!!

she gets up and runs to the bathroom...she trips on the way...she cuts her lip.. blood is coming out..

k:damn it!!not againnn!!!im so foolish!!

she runs in the bathroom and wipes her lip...she gets ready and walks down the stairs..you see her face..it is kripa!!....


K: morning sandeepp!!where's mommy and poppyy??

s: finally awake?? want sum toast? MOM and DAD are still sleeping..

k: wattttt??? whos gonnna take me to college??

s: duhhh mee!!! where is the other one??

k: still sleeping i think??

s: whatttt??? go wake her then!!

k: ok..


kripa goes up to wake her other sister...she grabs a soti and heads for her sisters room...

K:wakeee upppp???

B: huhhhhhhh?? :snorrrr:

k: i knew you wouldnt..thats why i brought my friend the soti..hehe

B:huhhhhhhh?? :snorrrr:

kripa hits the soti on her sisters buttt!!!hehe...

B:ouchhhhhhh my butt cheeks πŸ˜†

k: you idiot wake up!!!!!!

she gets up.....you see her face..its bubbllyyy!!!

B: wut time is it??

k: almost 7:00

B: then why are you waking me up??

K: because we have to go to collegee!!!

B: im too tired i dont want to go....:yawnnn:

K: im telling mommmy and poppy!!

B: your telling who???...hehe

Kripa goes to her parents room...the other one follows....

K: mommy...bubbly doesnt want to go to college..

M: (tired voice)so why u telling me?? i dont care..

K: ok poppyyyyy!!!

P: yesss!!

K: tell herr she has to gooooo!!

P: uhhh bubbly you have to go to college...(tired)

sandeep comes up the stairs....

S: whats all the drama...

B: you go away!!

S: oh ok ill go

B: no im just kiding..stay...you go krips!!

k: KRIPAAAA!!!

B: if u can say poppy i can say krips!!

k: shut up youuu!!

they start physically fighting...sandeep comes in the middle grabs both their pony's and pulls them apart...

S: let go of her nose kripa..bubbly stop biting her arm!!!

B: eww take a shower smellynesss!!!

K:why dont you boogerlicios!!

B: fattytastic!!

K:shut upp!!!

m: stop it you two! your disturbing my beauty sleep!!

P: yeah mine too!! i need to look beautifull!!

s: okay bubbly go get ready and ill take you both to college ok??

B: ok..

bubbly heads to get ready...She gets ready comes down eats and the three head for college...

AT COLLEGE!!

Pooja and Rahul have already arrived...Rahul is gone off with his girlfriends and Pooja is standing and waiting for Kripa and Bubbly

P : Whts taking them soooo long they should be here by now???

(They all arrive)

K : Heyyy Poojaaa...

P : Heyyyyy

B : Heyy Poooo

P : POOJAAAAA...wheres the jaa??

B : somewhere..hehe πŸ˜†

(Just then Sandeep comes...)

S : ( To pooja) Hi (he starts to blush)

P : hiiiiiii

S : (in the most sweetest voice) How are you????

P : greattttt...and you

S : (still blushing) good...this is for you ( he hands her a flower)

P : thxxx

S: no problem..want to go to the canteen to get some coffee??

P: yeah sure lets go!!

he blushes a couple of times..then they go...

kripa and bubbly are standing there..kripa lookes at bubbly...

K: eww you again..go away!

B:..no mi property..ill pee on you;P

K: nastyy freakazoidd!!!...im going to the bathroom...too pee in the facilityy!!

B: you mean toilet?? goo i dont need you here!! fattytastic!!

K: ughhh tu tehrrr!!

kripa chases around the college..Rahul is coming from the opposite direction...kripa pushes bubbly into rahul!!

R: ahhhhhhh!!

B:...nooooo(slow motion)

In slow motion..she falls on him and they fall in the mud..they are covered in muddyness!! hehe..

R: u idiott cant you watch where your going?!?!?!

B:no sorry im blind....

R: ohh im sorry

B: im kidding idiotic imbosile...you watch where you step..!!

R: ehhhhh this is my college..i run itt!!!

B: my buttt!!! i rule this college im soo popularr!!

R: eww your butt??...retardd!! i dont need to waste my time on you

B: your lucky im talking to you free of charge!!

R: wuteverr!!

B: pshtttt!!! talk to the hand!!

K: ok you two stop lets go boogerlicios!

B: ok fatytastic...

they walk away...

R: cmon ladies escort me to the mens facilities i need to clean my clothes=D.

IN THE CANTEEN...

S: so... you..umm. doing anything after....cc.cc college??(blushing)

P: yeah im going to meet my lover boy!!!

S: whooo?!?!?!?!(stops blushing)

P: Ronittt my boyfriend..didnt you know??

S: umm no i thought you were single

P: hehe...no...didnt your sisters tell you??

S: nooo (sad face)

P: well hes a business man...

S: ohh...thats nice.

P: yeah i wanna marry him someday..

S: (breath is stopping) i..uhh..umm...have to go to class now..

P: oh ok see you laterrr then!! byee

sandeep walks away heartbroken...

kripa and bubbly come in the canteen...

K: pooja whered sandeep go??

P: he said he had to go to class...

B: ohh..

P: eww bubbly what happened to your clothes??

B: some dumb idiotic boy made me fall in the mud...

K: who you calling boy??

B: not you fattytastic..the other boy!!

K: oh yeah himm...

P: oh lord krishna!! boys theses days!!!

K: i know their so-

B: crazyyy and weirdd!!!

they all laughh and drink coffee!!
Edited by ***HumTum*** - 17 years ago
Posted: 17 years ago
heyy, i am the first one to reply
anywayz, i wud like to say that this ff is going really gr8 so far...
continue it soon...
can't wait2 read the next part
Posted: 17 years ago
it was really good. poor sandeep plz cont sooonEdited by Indian101 - 17 years ago

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