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Posted: 2013-10-26T01:37:41Z

This OS is for Deepu @Rachakonda Deepika on her birthday ..HAPPY BIRTHDAY DEAR .MANY MANY HAPPY RETURNS OF DAY. .u always want  a hillarious update from me..an i become most confused person on that ..chalo lets try again..yaar aise mauke pe hillarious kaha se layu..jaha mujhe hi har time raya k bade me soch kar hi rona ata hai..and one more confession after a long gap i am going to write OS..so dont accpect a good update from me ..just i am trying only for Deepu..

and also for my Jaanu too  MINI ..she wants an OS from me ..so here it is 


 this is basically based after the promo part -

Priya was standing at the corner of the terrace

Ram from  behind.: kya kar rehi ho..firse tare ginne ki irada hai kya?

Priya who was lost in her own thought just chuckle with Ram's comment: tare ginna?

Ram: ha tumhari pehli wish thi madam.

Priya: with her soft voice ..meri pehli wish..main kya koi aapko wish list di thi..

Ram: ha ha 7 days me 7 wish list ..

Priya: wo..aur aapne sab fulfil bhi kiye the ?

Ram: ha aur pata hai last wish kya thi tumhari?

Priya  with a surprised look : kya?

Ram: tum kisiko jindegi dena chahti thi..aur main itna buddhu tha k samajh hi nehi paya k tum kehna kya chahti thi..

Priya: first time after her getting back PRiya giggles with his comments..buddhu???? aap to abhi bhi Golu hi hai..

Ram remebers that day when Priya was drunk first time and uttered Golu so sweetly ..

Ram: dekho mujhe Golu mat kaho ..

after few minutes

Ram and Priya  are at terrace still now  .The Love birds r covered with sheet of twinkling stars..almost full moon and ..pleasant air is blowing ..among this pair ..one is trying to find out her own identity ..and the rest one is trying to find out the way to get back his Soul mate in true sense ..

 

Ram: kal main fasting kar raha hu  ..

Priya : kyun

Ram: kal karwoa chauth hai...,jab se tum hospital me thi . tabse mai har kc me  brat rakhta tha k tum wapas aajao   ..(wuth blushing cheecks)

Priya with her teary eyes : thank u for getting me back.

Ram: yaar rona mat plz..i cant handle all this aur waise bhi thand ki mausam me flood ..wo cant bare it  yaar..

Priya : wiping her own tears ..: aap bohut funny type k insan hai..

Ram: haaw Priya pata hai ..aaj k din mere liye sabse khas hai..

Priya: kyun..

Ram: kyunki .jabse tum mujhe janti ho..aur humare shadi k baad today is the 1st time u said me funny..nehi to tumhare liye Mr.Kapoor to Kadoos Kapoor hai na..

Priya: Mr.Kapoor?

Ram: wooo...Tum mujhe Mr.Kapoor kehke bulati thi..or occasionally Ram..

Priya: wo.. aacha ek baat puchu aapse?

Ram: ha ha pucho .

Priya: main aapko khadoos bulati thi to aapko koi problem nehi hota tha,..

Ram: sirf Khadoos ..yaar tum to meri kitne sare name de chuki thi..Polar bear,dinosourse..khadoos,Golu,,but in sabse mujhe Golu bohut pasand hai wo bhi tumhare mu se..

Priya: who is now another world .. karwoa chauth ..har patni karti hai na ..apne Pati k liye ..

Ram: ha ..

PRiya: to aap kyun? aap thori na...and giggles..

Ram: ha ha very funny i know it is weired but yaar kc matlab..apne pyar k liye duya mango..ya ful life uski sath bitana chaho..to..main wo hi chahta hu..k meri is life to kya aagle har janam tumhare sath kate to isliye main bhi brat rakhta tha..aur ye silsila jari rehegi madam..

Priya: to kya main bhi kal ..brat rakh sakta hu ..

ram: ha  mere patni hone k nate se to tum rakh hi sakte ho..but u r not well na so ..isliye ye saal tum skip kardo..aur waise to ek hi baat huyi na ..main rakhu yaa tum  matlab to yehi huya na k hum dono hi dono k sath chahte hai ..to kya phadak padta hai ..

Priya: r u sure na k main aapko Golu bulati thi..

Ram : with suprised voice ..ha..very much ... kyun?

Priya: nehi aap batein to Golu jaise nehi karte hai aabhi ..isliye puch rehi thi..

Ram:  he he ..nehi shadi k baad main smart ban gaya hu.akhir hitler biwi ko handle karna tha na mujhe ..

Priya: matlab..

Ram: nehi wo bad me batayunga ...

Priya: but really i want to keep fast tommorrow ..

Ram: ok ..pehle suhani se puchna hai..then u can ..but agar problem huyi to u have to leave this idea ..

priya: ok..

Ram: but Priya tumhe to kal mehendi lagani padegi tab..

Priya: ok..problem nehi hai..

Ram: mehendi me aapne pati ka nam bhi likhna hai

Priya: r u worried about this ?

Ram: why ...why ..why do I ?

Priya: nehi main .golu likhungi ..ya,polar bear .ya khadoos ..

Ram: he he mujhe koi problem nehi hai ..tum jo chaho likh sakti ho..but tumhare liye sab to main hi hu na ..

Priya gave a satisfactory smile to him

Ram: aacha Priya ek baat puchu ?

Priya: ha ..

Ram: bohut saal pehle aapne shadi k mehendi k waqt maine tumse pucha tha k mehendi k colour kis chiz pe depend karti hai ..But tab tumne kehi nehi thi..bohut dino k baad Neha ne mujhe actual reason batayi thi..kya wo sach hai..

Priya : as she was totaly lost ..not even aware about the reason behind mehendi's colour..

Kya reason hai ..

Ram: neha ne batayi thi k ..patni k haat k mehendi k colour pati k pyar k upar depend karta hai ..agar pati jyada pyar kare to wo bohut deep hota hai ..

Priya: mujhe ye pata nehi thi..but ..ek baat to tai hai k mere hato ki mehendi k colour sabse gehra hi hogi..

Ram looks at her with all his love..

Can i hold ur hands now.

Priya blankly looked at him..

But ram could read her eyes's expression and today its not a different one ..Ram can understand Priya's feelings, state of mind more than herself..

Ram catches her hands..and says

Chahe tume kuch yaad hai ya nehi ..chahe tumhare liye main stranger hu.but the main for me is u r in front of me..it is in deed a big deal for my life Priya ..aur baki yaadein .tumne hi kabhi mujhe kahi thi k

"insaan aapni pure jindegi do chizo me zoojte huye kat deta ek yaadein aur ek sapne,ek humara past .ek humara furture ..yaadein wo hoti hai ..jo gujar gayi hai ..jo lamhe hum ji chuke hai..jo humari personality ko shape karta hai..jo hume wo banate hai jo hum hai ..aur sapne hai wo jo hume sone nehi dete hai..subah subah uthkar ghar se nikal ne par majbur kar deta hai ..pura karne k liye .."

Through out his words ..Ram sheds his tears silently..this was his Priya who hold him in every way of his life when he needed support..now he needs support a big one, to get back his support system of life ..that's none other than Priya..

Priya: aaap..

Ram: pata hain in sath saal mera ek hi sapna tha k ..

 aane wala har ek pal main tumhare sath rahu..isliye subah  hote hi main hospital jata tha ..is umeed k sath k aaj sayad tum wapas aa jayogi mere paas..

aur dekho mera ye sapna pura ho bhi gaya so ..yaadon k bade me kyun sochna hai ..priya ..let it be na..

jab hum dono ek sath hai ..to nayi yaadein bhi to kar sakte haina ..aapne baki k life k liye ..

Priya: aap mujhe bohut pyar karte hai na ..?

Ram: ,,nehi tumse kam ...tum mujhse bohut pyar karti ho ..isliye firse laut aayi ho mere jindegi me..

But i want another thing from u ..

Priya: kya?

Ram is thinking in his mind: kaise kahu Priya ..i did  a blunder...pata nehi kaise kiya main..but unwantedly i gave u divorce..aur aab main ye baat tumhe baata bhi nehi sakta hu ..

Priya i want to marry you again..

Priya: but why ..we r married na..

Ram: yes we r very much we r ..but phir bhi main chahta hu ..ek baar tumse firse shadi karna aur wo bhi kal subah ..kya tum ..

Priya: ok..main bhi aapke sath phirse nayi jindegi start karna chahti hu ..

( total jump to the precap part ..it was not in my plan..as the OS was already done before thusday epi  but i wanna add something..coz i am drooling over the precap,wanna write something, badly i want )

Acc to Precap-

Ram and Priya at green room

Jaldi se ready ho jaiye..mujhe bohut bhook lagne laga hai aabhi .ha aur main chahta hu k mera chand guest se pehle niche aa jaye..

Saying this he was moving towards the door..

And said

Aur suno ..ho sake to aapne baal khule chod dena bohut pyari lagogi..

30 min was passed ,Ram's attention was only at the stair case to see his angel after 7 years with his fav combination of saree which was a gift from him..yes today he gifted her the red and green combination saree

What he knew Red is his fav colour and his Priya loves green ..and Priya lost her memory but he does not

 ..for him..they r still connected with an eternal bond ..

They will at the end of their last breath...

Ram: Mayra ..humare room me jaao aur dekho mumma aabhi tak ready huyi hai ya nehi..

Mayra: yes dad ..and she turned to go..

Suddenly ..Ram asked her..leave it ..i am going to check her . (when he looked at Mayra and her grinning face ..he knew another attack from Mayra was  waiting for him only)

Matlab ki ..main aapna wrist watch pehenna bhul gaya hu to wo hi lene k liye jana tha  ..and he was trying  to move from there asap..

From behind only he could hear

Dad..black one is suited more on u..which is now on ur wrist..but this time plz try with silver one..

Ram was feeling shy with his own daughter's comments..but after getting back his wife ..after long 7 years waiting ..he feels more romantic now  ..mayra his daughter's  or his mother's words do not effect on him...

At their room.

Priya was in changing room..stuck with her blouse hook..

She  was ready partly ..but could not manage it..

Suddenly she heard a click sound of opening door..

Priya: kaun hai??

Ram: main hoon..tum aabhi bhi ready nehi huyi ho..

Priya: nehi Ram... main wo..

Ram  was remebering Nutz birthday party..

Do u need any help Priya..

Priya: haa aap Juhi ko bula sakte hai plz..

Ram got which type of help priya needed then ..

He said..main tumhara pati hu ..to i can help u na..main andar aa raha hu..

When he entered Priya was feeling shy..and Ram was numb  to see her mesmerizing beauty again..after 7 years ..lots of stress ..but she is looking more gorgeous and beutiful now..and it happens because her heart is more beutiful than her face ..which ram likes most ..

Ram was trying to knot her dori and hook too..even he wanted more ..but ..he could not .all he wants ..to get back his Priya..now which is most imp to him..

Priya : i am ready now..

Ram looked at her and said ..: no Priya u r not..

Priya was confused with his comments ..blankly looked at him..

Ram put vermillion on her mang and knot mangal sutra on her neck and said ..now u r ready..what i said yday..that i wanna marry u again..now u r looking perfectly

Mrs.PRIYA RAM KAPOOR..

 

  

Ok ok bye bye for now ..dimag me kuch nehi aa rehi hai..abhi ...so os is ended..

Deepu : hillarious to nehi hai pakka ..but jo bhi hai yaar comments kardena plz..sirf tere birthday k liye hai ..

 

Aur sab comments karo plz..bohut dino bad i am back with my OS..

Tada ..

 

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Posted: 2013-10-26T02:07:45Z
it was beautifulSmile
chalo atleast aapne toh dono ki shaadi phirse kara diLOL pata nhi cvs kya karenge is issue kaConfused
myra is superb LOL
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Posted: 2013-10-26T02:15:40Z
Really good job... Even I'm thinking the same about repeating of hook part and sindoor and MS  plus I just want ki kitna achha ho agar ram khud priya ko ready kare, I mean by correcting her bindi and making her wear bangles from his own hand,same aisa precap sach ho tho kitna accha ho...more over I want ki ram hi uuse khud mendi lagye, I mean apna naam tho likhi sakta hai na uske hatton mein and yes, waise tho koi fark nahi parta lekin agar woh sabke sammane priya se shaadi kare tho kitna acha ho, I hope ki woh guest koi aur nahi balki lawyer ho jo unki shaadi register karwane aaya ho.Big smile
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Posted: 2013-10-26T02:49:42Z
wow nice update
thanks for pm
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Posted: 2013-10-26T02:55:01Z
Originally posted by peeyara


it was beautifulSmile
chalo atleast aapne toh dono ki shaadi phirse kara diLOL pata nhi cvs kya karenge is issue kaConfused
myra is superb LOL
 thank u dear 
kya karu yaar 
badly i want  their marriage
 only
 
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Posted: 2013-10-26T02:56:20Z
Originally posted by devmohan


Really good job... Even I'm thinking the same about repeating of hook part and sindoor and MS  plus I just want ki kitna achha ho agar ram khud priya ko ready kare, I mean by correcting her bindi and making her wear bangles from his own hand,same aisa precap sach ho tho kitna accha ho...more over I want ki ram hi uuse khud mendi lagye, I mean apna naam tho likhi sakta hai na uske hatton mein and yes, waise tho koi fark nahi parta lekin agar woh sabke sammane priya se shaadi kare tho kitna acha ho, I hope ki woh guest koi aur nahi balki lawyer ho jo unki shaadi register karwane aaya ho.Big smile
thank u dear 
all u wrote 
u can write an os on that 
plz dear try on it 
ha main bhi yehi chahti hu 
atlst ram uski mang bharde 

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Posted: 2013-10-26T02:57:46Z
Originally posted by akkigoud2


wow nice update
thanks for pm
 thank u dear 

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Posted: 2013-10-26T03:15:24Z
really awesome part 
wish hook wala part come in real Balh too
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