OS:Miracle Monday

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Posted: 2013-10-11T05:38:19Z
This is my frst OS on the forum
hope u lyk it

Aaj Kapoor Mansion mei bade bete Ram ki doosrei shaadi hai

ghar mei Ram ke alaawa sab khush hai

Ram jaanta hai ki priya uski vajah samjhegi par phir bhi usse aisa lag rha tha ki woh pane pyaar ko dhokha de rha hai

par aaj usse kuch alag rha hai

usse lag rha hai ki aaj kuch aisa hone waala hai jisse uski zindgi humehs humesha ke liye badal jaayegi

shaam ka samay

waqt aa gya tha

jiska sab ko sivaay Ram ka intezaar

shaadi

Ram juhi ki shaadi

sab mandap ke paas aakar khade ho gye the

aur Pandit ji ne mantra shuru kar diye the

Par upar Priya ke kamre mai nazaara kuch aur hi tha

Pihu aur Suhaani kamre mai the

achhank Priya ki saans phoolne lagi

Pihu dar gyi aur

Suhaani bhi nhi samajh pa rhi thi ki yeh kyu ho rha hai

phir kcuh aisa hota hai jiski umeed kisi ne nhi ki thi

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Priya Ram naam ki rut lagaane lag jaati hai

Priya ki zubaan se sirf ek shabhd nikaltna hai aur woh Ram

Pihu yeh delkh kar rone lag jaati hai

uski khushi ka thikaana nhi hai

Suhaani bhaag kr neeche jaati hai

SUhaani

"Sir "

Ram

"Kyaa huaa Suhaani"

Suhaani

"Sir Priya mam"

Ram

"kya huaa Priya ko"

Suhaani

"unko hosh aa gya hai

aur woh aap ko bula rhi hai"

Ram Juhi ki taraf dekhta hai aur keheta hai

"mai apni Priya ko nhi chod skta"

aur phir Ram idhar dekhta hai na udhar

bas apne priya ke paas daudta hai

THE END

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Posted: 2013-10-11T05:48:42Z
nice one continue soon with more os on raya
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Posted: 2013-10-11T06:14:51Z
Yaar your attempt is nice..You wrote it nicely.. Nice attempt.
But i don't want anymore miracles to happen, let priya get up when ram ties not to Juhi n leave KM forever. He didn't realize a minute to divorce her so not expecting this, and hard to accept it.
sorry i m not discouraging you , but its about ones self respect and self esteem and emotions.
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Posted: 2013-10-11T06:16:20Z
Originally posted by bpatil3


Yaar your attempt is nice..You wrote it nicely.. Nice attempt.
But i don't want anymore miracles to happen, let priya get up when ram ties not to Juhi n leave KM forever. He didn't realize a minute to divorce her so not expecting this, and hard to accept it.
sorry i m not discouraging you , but its about ones self respect and self esteem and emotions.
wt if Ram never filed the divorce???
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Posted: 2013-10-11T06:16:54Z
Originally posted by tulshan1989


nice one continue soon with more os on raya
thnk u
r u Aanchal???
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Posted: 2013-10-11T06:24:28Z
please continue rally interested to know whats goin to happen next...Big smile
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Posted: 2013-10-11T06:43:08Z
Originally posted by sadukudu


please continue rally interested to know whats goin to happen next...Big smile
hey it was this much only
thnk u 4 readin
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Posted: 2013-10-11T06:46:55Z
Originally posted by priyajan12


Originally posted by bpatil3


Yaar your attempt is nice..You wrote it nicely.. Nice attempt.
But i don't want anymore miracles to happen, let priya get up when ram ties not to Juhi n leave KM forever. He didn't realize a minute to divorce her so not expecting this, and hard to accept it.
sorry i m not discouraging you , but its about ones self respect and self esteem and emotions.
wt if Ram never filed the divorce???

 Do u really think if filed then only its divorce??
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