OS: Our Love Story Part A & B updated on pg-8

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Posted: 2013-10-01T01:20:18Z

Hello everyone! I was feeling very bore so I have typed this OS. I have typed whatever came in my mind so please don't try to find any logic in it. This Os is totally senseless n illogical. In short, ye story bina sar pair ki hai, dhundne pe bhi koi logic ya sensible baat nahi milegi LOL. So read at your own risk.

Ram and Priya are happily married and have three daughters-Peehu (16 yr old) and twins Myra n Pari (10 years) old. Ram is a businessman, so he hardly gets time to spend with his family. By the time he'll come, the children will be asleep. So one day his daughters complained him that he don't love them that's why he is not spending time with them. Ram argued that he always makes up for that by going on vacations with them at least once in a year. But the girls were adamant that he should spend good time with them daily like their mom. Ram was finding hard to convince his daughters and Priya purposely flew from the situation so that Ram handle them alone(her way of punishing him) so he ended up promising them that one Sunday in a whole month, he'll spent with them. His daughters were very happy.

Pari happily: we'll take mamma also with us

Peehu: good idea pari, I am with you

Myra:  I don't find it to be a good idea

Ram was listening his daughters' conversation and before he could ask Myra the reason why she didn't like the idea of taking Priya with them, Pari questioned Myra.

Pari: mamma ko kyun saath nahi le jayenge

Ram n Peehu were looking  at Myra for reply.

Myra: listen hum papa ke saath time kyu spend karna chahte hai?

Peehu: obviously enjoy karne ke liye

Myra: correct...agar mamma saath chalegi toh wo hame theek se enjoy karne degi?

Peehu brushes up her memory when she used to go along with her mom n dad n she remembers how her mom used to stop her from having her favourite food items, so she screams: nooo...mamma ko saath nahi  le jayenge

Pari, who never goes out with her mom: par kyun di, mamma ko chalne do na saath

Peehu explains: tujhe ice cream, kulfi, pasta, pizza yehi sab khana hai na bahar papa ke saath

Pari nods her head in yes.

Peehu: agar mamma saath chalegi toh hame ye sab khane nahi degi aur wahi fruits aur ghas phus khana padega...chale ga tujhe

Pari: nahi

Myra: toh ab bol mamma ko saath le jana hai?

Pari: nahi...sirf hum jayenge

Ram was stunned listening their planning to keep Priya out from the plan.

Ram: tum log apni mamma ke liye aisa sochte ho

Myra: oh papa, we love mamma but aap batao kya mumma hame bahar ka kuch khane degi, wo saath mai hi lunch lekar chelengi na...am I right?

Peehu: par hum toh aapke saath enjoy karna chahte hai aur waise bhi mamma ke saath toh hum roz time spent karte hai

Ram: oh! Toh ye baat hai, so done...no mamma only papa n his 3 princesses

Pari: par mumma se iske bare mai baat kaun karega, mamma ki permission chahiye na?

Peehu  n Myra shouts: papa karenge baat

Ram anxiously: mai? No ways

Myra teasingly: aap mamma se darte ho

Ram: no..tumhe kisne kaha

Pari: jab bhi hum mamma ko bolte hai k hum papa se unki complain karenge toh mumma kehti hai k app kuch nahi karenge kyunki aap mumma se darte hai

Ram looks at Peehu for answer n she nods her head in yes.

Ram: sach mai Priya aise bolti hai

Peehu, Pari n Myra innocently: haan papa

Ram: theek hai mai aaj prove kardunga ke mai Priya se nahi darta

Peehu: all the best papa

Ram along with his daughters go downstairs and found Priya arranging dining table for dinner.

Priya: aa gaye aap log, chalo jaldi se dinner karlo

Ram: Priya mujhe tumse kuch baat karni hai

Priya: haan boliye

Ram: wo mai...Ram thinks, "kaise bolu ise ke hum iske bina picnic jaana chahte hai, ye mera khoon kardegi"

Priya: boliye na Ram

Peehu whispers: papa maine aap ka kaam aasan kardiya hai

Ram: wo kaise?

Peehu points in Priya's direction: wahan dekhiye Pari mamma ko dance ke liye convince kar rahi hai, aap dance karte waqt mamma se baat karlena aur mamma ko mana lena

Ram: but Priya dance karegi abhi mere saath

Peehu: papa, Pari mamma ko dance ke liye mana karne degi kya

Ram: smart girl, bikul mujh pe gayi hai

Peehu : sorry papa, but smartness toh mujh  me mamma jaise hai, mamma se sikha hai maine kisko kaise convince karna hai

Ram: woo toh hai, tumhari mamma bahot smart hai

Priya shouts: Ram can we dance please?

Ram: is waqt Priya?

Priya: haan abhi, agar humne dance nahi kiya toh Pari khana nahi kahegi..karna padega just for 5 minutes

Ram casually: ok

Peehu: all the best papa

Ram: thank u

So now Ram n Priya were dancing together.

Ram: Priya tumse ek favor chahiye?

Priya: favour? Kaisa favour?

Ram: favour nahi...permission chahiye

Priya: aap  mujh se permission kyu le rahe hai?

Ram: wo kya hai na , maine bachon ko promise kiya hai k mahine mai ek Sunday unke saath spent karunga

Priya: ye toh accchi baat hai

Ram : but unki ek condition hai

Priya: kaisi condition?

Ram nervously: wo chahte hai k tum hamare saath na aao aur us din koi restrictions nahi

Priya: oh! Toh ye khichdi pak rahi thi aap logo mai

Ram: please Priya haan kardo na

Priya: no

Ramto divert her mind: waise tum baccho ko kya sikha rahi ho?

Priya rudely: kya sikhaya hai

Ram: yahi k mai tumse darta hoon

Priya teasingly: toh usme galat kya hai

Ram: accha...kuch galat nahi hai?

Priya: nahi

Myra n Pari: peehu di, papa ko aur kitna time lagega mamma ko manane mai

Peehu: pata nahi

Ram: tum abhi baccho ko jakar bolo gi ke tumne permission de di hai

Priya teasingly: nahi kaha toh

Ram: nahi toh mai bacchon ke samne tumhe uthakar le jaonga aur phir jab wo ye sab apni Neha aunty ko bataye na toh jawab dena Neha ko

Priya: Ram you are not doing this

Ram: I will do it, agar tumne nahi kiya toh

Priya angrily: fine...bata rahi hoon

Priya goes to children followed by Ram and she says them, "aap log ja sakte ho aur us din no restrictions, It's mamma's promise"

Peehu, Pari n Myra: thank you mamma

Priya sadly: muhe saath nahi le jana chahte, mai hitler thodi na hoon

To cheer up Priya, Ram calls her as darling.

Ram: darling itna gussa kyun ho rahi ho

Myra n Pari giggles and Peehu controls her laughter.

Priya angrily whispers: kitni bar kaha hai aapko, bachon ke samne aise mat bulayie

Ram confusedly: kyu?

Priya: yaad hai peehu jab 5 yrs ki thi usne kya kiya tha

Ram confusedly: kya kiya tha?

One fine day whole family was seeing the old photos and they were asking Peehu to identify the family members. She was identifying everyone but then came Priya's pic and Nuts asks her "ye kaun hai" and Peehu replies, "ye papa ki jaan hai".

Everyone started laughing at Peehu's reply, Priya was very embarrassed so she quickly disappears from the scene.

Priya: 3 mahine tak ne Neha aur Nuts ne mujhe kitna tang kiya tha

Ram: sorry yaar, mai toh bhool hi gaya

Priya: chaliye ab dinner kariye

 Ram n his daughters were enjoying their only Sunday with no restrictions; they used to indulge in all the activities and eat all kind of food which Priya don't allow them in remaining 29 days.

One Sunday, they came back all exhausted from their picnic, Priya brings juice for them and asks Ram,  "aaj dinner ke liye kya program hai"

Ram: aaj mai bahot thak gaya hoon toh dinner ghar pe hi karunga

Priya angrily: maine socha tha k hum baher jayenge dinner ke liye

Ram: sorry yaar, par aaj possible nahi hai

Priya: mere liye toh time hi nahi hai, rehne dijiye

Ram: please Priya, aaj mai sach mai thak gaya hoon

Priya: theek hai, par dinner banayega kaun

Ram: bansi kaka aur kaun

Priya: maine sab ko chutti de di ye soch kar ke hum bahar jayenge dinner ke liye

Pari: mamma aap banao na aaj ka dinner, pls

Priya: jab mai khana banati hoon, tum logo ko bahar ka khana chahiye aur jab nahi bnaya toh mamma aap banao na...very smart

Myra n Peehu: mamma please

Priya: theek hai...batao kya khana hai

PAri n Peehu: aalo ka parantha

Myra: phirse?

Priya: phirse matlab?

Ram:Myra beta chup hojao...kuch nahi Priya, mujhe bhi aalo ka parantha chahiye

Priya: Myra speak up the truth

Myra: kuch nahi mom, wo humne aaj lunch mai aalo ka parantha, noodles aur pizza khaya hai

Pari adds: aur clairs n ice cream too

Priya looks at Ram: mujhe kyu dekh rahi hoon, aaj toh inka din hai na isliye

Myra: mamma aalo parantha mat banaye kuch healthy banayie...aaj itna zyaada junk food khaya hai na toh health effect hogi...aur ek businessma kabhi bimar nahi padhna chahiye

Peehu: teri har baat ghum ke business par kyun aati hai?

Pari sadly: it means no aalo ka parantha

Priya: ek min..chup karo sab...poore apne papa pe gaye hai, kisi ko sirf khana chahiye toh kisi ko har waqt business hi soojta hai...hey Ram kya karu inka

Ram: tumne kuch kaha Priya

Priya : haan kaha par aap se nahin...bhagwan Ram se

Ram: unhe kyu disturb kar rahi hoon, unhone toh tumhe tumhara personal Ram diya hai na

Pari: wow mamma aap kitne lucky ho, bhagwanji ne aapko personal bhagwan diya hai...mujhe mera Ram kab milega?

Ram n Priya burst into laughter at her question.

Priya: mai sabke liye unka favourite dishes banati hoon ...ok

Myra: par tab tak hum bore hojayenge

Pari: papa koi story sunayie na

Myra giggles: papa ko story sunani nahi aati

Ram: yaar tu hamesha mujhe apni maa ki tarha under estimate kyun karti hai...dekh rahi ho Priya, tumhe lagta hai ye mere pe gaye hai but tumhari toh saari buri aadatein hai inme

Priya: excuse me ...meri konsi habits hai inme

Ram: tumhari tarha dominating hai, hamesha mujhe under estimate karte hai ye log aur bilkul tum jaisi ziddi hai

Priya: aur kuch reh gaya ho toh wo bhi batayie

Ram smilingly: hai na...tumhari tarha bahot khoobsurat hai

Peehu: papa aap hame ye batao aapki aur mamma ki shaadi kaisi hui...aapki aur mamma ki story sunao

Ram: not a bad idea

In next part I'll update the love story of Ram n Priya aur kisi ko bhi ye senseless aur illogical lagi toh I cant do anything kyunki maine pehle hi keh diya tha read at ur own risk LOL LOL

 

Edited by peeyara - 2013-10-03T01:46:55Z
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Posted: 2013-10-01T01:22:18Z
no logic no sense but an perfect loved story and happy family and light heart too, but sad they leave priyaConfused wish they learn the lesson and take  take priya too enjoy with them after rem after breast cancer scenario she tells ram weekly once they will have all tasty and yummy foodsEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed
but enjoyed the funny elements when ram is called darpok spl infornt of priyaLOL i wish soo which is not true

and ram ka darling jaan sab pasand ayaaLOLLOLLOLLOLmuje

last mein ram tells all have gone over u dominatingLOLLOLLOLLOL

very boring all girls yaar golu na sahi bring girl's boy friend and ram get angry on them and behave protective dadLOL

continue soon waiting for next funny part LOL
Edited by shavii - 2013-10-01T01:30:35Z
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Posted: 2013-10-01T01:35:13Z
Yaar itna bhi
Senseless ya illogical nahi thaa
Nice start yaar
Cont soon
Thanks for pm
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Posted: 2013-10-01T02:05:59Z
Sorry havent been commenting since long time...
But i loved your OS...With regards to logic jaha RaYa ho to logic ki kise padi hai...But i just loved it...Superb...Thanks for the PM dear...Hug
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Posted: 2013-10-01T02:51:10Z
Thx for the PM.
Wow cool baby..
Priya ko phasaane mein successful hogaye ramjiLOL

too good...Thumbs Up
enjoyed it to the core...yaar jab bore hui hai toh aise likh sakti hai toh jab mood accha hoga tok kaise likhegi??Day Dreaming
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Posted: 2013-10-01T03:56:37Z
Nuts asks her "ye kaun hai" and Peehu replies, "ye papa ki jaan hai".ROFLROFL 
superb yaar ideas kahase aate hai aap logonko
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Posted: 2013-10-01T03:58:13Z
Pehli baat yeh hai ki pyaar mein logic nahi hoti. LOL
Dusri baat- yeh bohot bohot cute OS hai. I was smiling throughout the whole thing... Very nicely written. Hayee Ram ne darling kaha uff, so sweet... Aur flashback mein 'papa ki jaan' so cute!
Last bit was funny and sweet too. I enjoyed this a lot!

I wish they had shown this in BALH before this leap.

Thanks for the PM
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Posted: 2013-10-01T04:08:53Z
very awesome update
continue soon
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