OS: RAYA REUNION AFTER 5 YEAR LEAP

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Posted: 2013-09-28T07:39:34Z
Hey guys. I am back with just an OS. Today is a special day so wanted to write it for u all. N ya I will be back after 11th October with my updates on my ff.
This is dedicated to sanju dee. 

The OS is after the 5 yr leap

So here it starts

We see one lady with a sweet little child making her sleep.
Yes she is none other than our priya and the child is none other than her princess PIHU

P: chalo beta so jao

Pihu: mumma papa kab ayenge

P: jald. Ab so jao.

Priya tells her a story and she sleeps

Priya sits on the chair with her diary.
She writes in it

"Ram paanch Saal ho Gaye hai. Paanch Saal. Kitna bada arza. Hamari beti pihu 5 Saal ki ho gayi hai. Bilkul aap jaisi hai. Apne papa ko bht miss karti hai.
Sirf vo nahi me bhi apko bht miss karti hu. Kash 

Just then her phone rings

P: hello

Daijan: hello priya beta. Jaldi door kholo

P: Kya?

D: fast we are outside your house

Priya closes her diary and closes the door of the room so pihu doesn't wake up

P: daijan raina aao Kya hua?

They go inside 

D: priya

P: hua Kya hai? Btaiye?

D: Kady Bhag gayi

P: Bhag gayi matlab?

D: vo ghar chodke Bhag gayi

P: what ? Ye kaise ho sakta hai? Kuch hua tha Kya?

D: argument between Kady and rajAt. 

P: argument? 

D: priya tum toh janti ho Kady random boys se chat karti hai so isi bAt par hua jhagda.

P: rajAt sir kyu karte hai aisa? Ab pata bhi nahi hai kahan hai vo? Raina vo kisse bat kar Rahi thi?

R: wo

P: dekho I know tum janti ho ab kuch. Kady tumhe sab batati hai I know that. Agar mujhe koi bata nahi pata toh tumhe pata Hota hai. Ab bolo

R: priya dee vo koi Rahul se bat kar Rahi thi jab rajAt sir aye.

P: Rahul. Ok

D: apko pata hai kahan hai vo?

Just then she received a call

D: ha rajAt beta bolo kahan hai vo?

R: she has gone to India daijan.

D: India me kahan?

R: Mumbai

D: what Mumbai?

R: ha daijan. Ab Kya kare Mumbai thik se Jante bhi nahi hai hum. Me ram ko Bol deta hu is bare me. Vo dhund lega use tab tak hum bhi Jate hai Mumbai

D: let's take priya also. Vo Mumbai ki hai and Kady uski bata zaroor manegi. Me abhi usse bat karti hu is bare me

R: ok daijan

Priya hears this

P: daijan me Mumbai nahi aa Sakti. Meri shop and pihu ka school. No daijan

D: shop rajAt Bol dega kisi ko sambhalne k liye kuch dino k liye and pihu k school me leave note bhej denge.

P: daijan but

D: tum chal Rahi ho.

P: ok daijan

D: kal 6am ki flight hai

P: ok pihu or me ready honge

D: ab hum chalte hai. Chalo raina

R: mujhe yahan rehna hai n mene packing kar di hai.

D: achha thik hai

Daijan goes and priya understood raina wants to talk to her

P: bolo raina

R: apko kaise pata chala I want to talk

P: bachpan se dekha hai tumhe ab bolo

R: mujhe dar lag raha hai India Jane me. Apko pata hai jab last me india gayi toh I lost my mom. 

P: kuch nahi hoga trust me. Tumhe or Kady ko ma ka pyar diya hai mene. Koshish ki hai. So.. Chalo jao so jao pihu k sath me abhi ayi

R: ok priya dee

Raina goes and sleeps with pihu

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Posted: 2013-09-28T07:41:28Z
Priya is in the balcony

5 yrs k bad I will go to my country my city Mumbai. Kya hoga? Agar ram ya kisi ne mujhe penchan liya toh? Priya think positive. Kuch nahi hoga aisa

But destiny kuch or hi chahti thi ram priya k liye. Priya was thinking she will not meet anybody. But let's see now will she meet anyone or not...

Morning in the flight

P: pihu beta ab aap Mumbai me mujhe raina didi daijan ya rajAt uncle ko chodke kisi k sath nahi rahogi. 

Pihu: thik hai mumma. 

P: tum pihu kapoor ho priya kapoor ki beti. Meri bat manna 

Pihu: ok mumma 

RajAt and all reach Mumbai.

RajAt: ram kuch pata chala

R: abhi tak toh nahi koshish kar rahe hai mere log.

RajAt: thanks yar. Me hu India me abhi. Hum hotel ki taraf ja rahe hai

R: hotel kyu mere ghar aa ja.

RajAt : no it's ok. 

R: tu aa raha hai

RajAt: no yar

He cuts the call

P: Kya hua sir?

R: my friend ram wants us to stay at his house. 

Priya(shouts): no sir

D: Kya hua priya beta ? 

P: daijan ram k ghar nahi Jana. I can't. Pls lets stay in hotel

R: shant ho Jaiye. We are not going to stay there.

P: ok thanks 

Daijan feels strange. She decides to talk later

They reach hotel.

Rajat leaves with raina to search Kady. Ram is also searching for Kady. 

Priya: pihu abhi thoda so jao

P: ok mumma

Pihu is sleeping and priya is reading a book just then daijan comes

P: daijan aiye na

D: priya tumse kuch bat karni hai

P: Ji kahiye

D: tum dar kyu gayi thi jab ye bat ki ram k ghar ruk ne ki..

P: wo me kisi unknown k ghar nahi

D: sach batao. Jhut mat bolo. 

P: me sach Bol Rahi hu

D: meri kasam khao apni beti ki kasam khao

P: daijan

D: nahi khaogi tum I know because tum jhut Bol Rahi ho. Me tumhari ma jaisi hu Bol bhi do.

P: daijan aap meri ma ho. Kady or raina mere liye pihu jaise hi hai. 

D: toh bolo pls

P: me Kya batau daijan. Agar vo landslide nahi Hota toh aaj shayad meri beti pihu ko apne papa apne nana nani dadi bua mama masi chachi chacha badi dadi sabka pyar milta. Unke sath vo rehti hamare bade se ghar me. Lekin usne hum sabki zindagi badal dee. Jab me landslide k bad raina k sath apne ghar gayi toh pata chala sabne mujhe mara samaj liya toh me raina ko like Dubai ayi baki toh apko pata hai

D: lekin beta tum ram k ghar Jane se kyu ghabra Rahi ho?

P: daijan aap samaj nahi rahe hai jahan aap sab Jane k liye keh rahe hai vo hi toh Mera ghar hai. Me priya ram kapoor hu. The business tycoon, the ram kapoor ki wife and pihu unki beti hai.

D: matlab tum ram ki wife priya ho

P: Ji daijan 

D: bht chupna ho Gaya hai ab chalo apne ghar

P: no daijan. Nahi hai himmat vahan Jane ki. 

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Posted: 2013-09-28T07:42:56Z
Just then priyas phone rings

R: hello priya rajAt here

P: ha boliye.

R: Kady ram k ghar hai chaliye udhar.

P: aap Kady ko kahi restaurant ya idhar le aiye but I can't come there pls

R: ok sunshine cafe me laga hu

They cut the call

P: daijan pls kisi ko mat boliye

D: thik hai but tum galat kar Rahi ho

Sunshine cafe

P: Kya me bat kar Sakti hu tumse?

K: priya dee 

P: just sit down 

Kady sits

P: dekho Kady I didn't expect u would do this. Aaj me tumhe ek chiz bataungi jo mene Kiya tha or tum samjhogi meri bat. I know u like that guy Rahul but aise galti mat karo. Mere sath bhi aisa hua shadi se pehle galat insan se pyar Kiya and he wanted money. Not me. I broke up with him and after some yrs I did arranged marriage and it was the best.

K: dee but I love him n he too loves me

P: can I meet him now?

K: yes dee. He is here only.

Kady turns and points towards Rahul 

P: Rahul 

R: mujhe aisa lag raha hai apko mene kahin dekha hai

Priya has recognised him.

R: aap?

P: priya 

R: ya priya aunty. Ram uncle ki wife right?

K: Kya Bol rahe ho tum?

P: Kady Rahul achha ladka hai. Daijan or rajAt sir ko Bol dungi and don't tell anyone about u meeting some priya n bye rajAt

R: Kady stop priya aunty. I need to talk to her. 

Priya runs and tells daijan to bring pihu from there to the hotel room

While running she collides with krishnaji.

P: sorry 

She looks and goes from there

Kk: priya zinda hai? 

But it's too late priya has gone 

Later pihu comes and changes her clothes and priya is sitting quietly.

P: Kya kar diya Rahul or ma ne dekh liya mujhe?

Kapoor mansion

Kk: biji rishabh saumya ram 

R: Kya hua ma?

Kk: I saw priya

R: priya 

Kk: yes hamari priya

R: how is it possible?

Just then Rahul comes

Rahul: uncle ye sach hai priya aunty is alive. She was with Kady.

R: what?

Ram calls rajAt

R: hello rajAt

RajAt: thanks ram 

R: me tumse kuch puchu do u know priya kapoor

RajAt: yes priya kapoor ne hi toh 

Daijan takes the phone 

D: ram beta what I am saying u do this. Tumhari priya zinda hai hamare sath sahi salamat. Tum ek dinner plan karo kisi tarah I will bring her there.

R: ok

Ram calls sharma family vikha and tell them to come for dinner

Evening

D: u take pihu for dinner with u I will bring priya with me

R: ok daijan

RajAt: pihu chalo we are going for dinner. Daijan or apki mummy ayegi badme.

D: priya chalo tum ye suit pehno.

P: why?

D: wear it.

P: ok priya wears and comes out of the changing room.

RajAt Kady raina n pihu have reached the house.

R: hi rajAt. Priya kahan hai?

RajAt: vo ati hogi daijan k sath. Tu apni beti se toh mil le.

R: beti

RajAt: pihu.

She sees many people and she gets scared and just then priya comes and she sees her and runs to her.

P: daijan aap idhar kyu laye  ho?

R: priya 

Pihu: mumma aap in sabko Jante ho?

P: vo pihu

R: achha so u haven't told her about me 

Pihu: aap meri mumma se aise bat nahi kar sakte ?

R: priya pls Bolo use kaun hu me. Pls

P: pihu aap Zara andar jao.

Pihu is going but ram catches her

Pihu: mumma 

She starts crying

R: pihu don't cry. Me tumhara papa hu.

Pihu looks at priya and priya nods her head in yes

P:papa aap kahan they. I missed u so much

R: I missed u too. Now aap mere sath rahoge. Achha aap andar jaiye mujhe apki mumma se bat karni hai

Pihu: ok papa

Ram turns to priya

R: toh kyu nahi Vapas ayi mere sath?

P: ram can we go in the garden n talk. 

R: yes come

R: ab bolo

P: me ayi thi Vapas lekin aap sabne mujhe mara man liya tha. Toh fir me raina k sath Dubai chali gayi vahan jake pata chala I am pregnant.

R: tab bhi batana zaroori nahi samjha. 

P: ram mene call Kiya tha I think destiny didn't want us to be together. Aap kisi k earring ko praise kar rahe the. I cut the phone. 

R: vo earing me tumhare liye kharid raha tha. But tum ho ki...

P: I am sorry ram. Pls maaf kar do. 

R: maafi. Have u lost it? Tumne mujhse meri beti k 5 years cheen liye hai n u expect me that I will forgive u. 

P: ram pls.

Ram goes from there leaving priya crying.

Kk: priya kahan hai?

R: bahar hai. 

All go out and see her sitting and crying

Kk: chup ho jao priya. Hum sab hai na. 

P: ma I am sorry.

Kk: ye sab chodo apni beti ko hum sabse nahi milaogi.

P: milaungi na

Kk: that's like my good girl.

Priya comes inside 

Pihu: mumma

P: pihu aao chalo aapko sabse milwati hu.

Pihu: me janti hu 

P: Jante ho?

Pihu: ha papa ne milaya sabse.

P: achha. 

Pihu: mumma bhook lag Rahi hai.

P: ha chalo kha lo dinner.

Pihu: mumma yahan aloo ka parantha nahi hai.

All get shocked n even ram

Kk: priya beta ye toh 

P: ha ma ye ram ki xerox hai.

Ram leaves the table without eating.

Priya makes her eat.

P: ma ab hum chalte hai. 

Kk: kahan ja rahe ho.

P: hotel

Neha: kyu? Ye tumhara ghar hai just stay here.

P: neha ek second. Pihu aap dadi k sath sone chale jao.

Kk: ha aa jao pihu.

Priya kisses pihu on her forehead and she goes to sleep.

P: neha ab bolo

N: ye tumhara ghar hai toh tum yahi raho. Ram se jake bat karo. Manao use.

P: ok

Priya takes for ram aloo parantha made by herself as she knows ram loves her aloo parantha.

He is in the terrace so she goes there.

P: ram pls khana kha lijiye or ye apke liye kuch videos and diaries. Apko disturb nahi karungi.

R: priya sorry

P: no ram I am sorry. Mene ki hai galti jo maafi layak nahi hai.

R: priya galti hum dono se huyi hai. Mene kaise soch liya meri priya mujhe chodke ja Sakti hai balki vo toh mere pass hi thi yahan

P: ram m sorry. Pls 

R: shh.. Me Taras Gaya tumhare hath se khana khana ab tum mujhe khilao

Ram and priya feed each other aloo parantha and later read the diary and see videos of pihu

R: thank u n I love u

P: I love u too

The end.

It's too lengthy. Sorry for it.
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Posted: 2013-09-28T07:48:12Z
good oneClapClapClapClap
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Posted: 2013-09-28T08:26:51Z
cuteSmile
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Posted: 2013-09-28T08:34:15Z
riddhi kya kahu yaar 
itni pyar 
thank u 
thanku very much that 
u dedicated it to Sanju di 
thanku veryy much 
and about the os 
it superb cute 
logistic 
and fell like the a real matured story 

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Posted: 2013-09-28T09:18:44Z
Superbb one Riddhu.. Clap

Thanx for changing ur decision too..
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Posted: 2013-09-28T12:24:17Z
Awesome os cutie...
loved it 
super nice reunion ...
aloo ka paratha Tongue k sath ending...very very sweet
HugHug
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