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Maaneet SS BROKEN BY LOVE prt5 updtd on pg 15 - Page 2

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Posted: 10 years ago
Character Sketch
Khurana Family:
The respectable family of Delhi involve in Construction bussiness.

Yash Singh Khurana:

M.D of Khurana Construction,Maan's father.
He is very nice person.

Shalini Khurana:


A house wife love her family so much but angry on Maan

Savitri Devi:
Obviously Maan's dadi same as GHSP 

Anvisha Rathod:

Elder sister of Maan and happily maried.

Arjun Rathod:
Husband of Anvisha


Naintara Rathod:


Arjun's sister love Maan as her obsession and has major hand in doom of Geet

Maan Singh Khurana:


Bussiness man.A person who regret his mere existance on universe and have ton of remorses.Still in search of his long lost love and wife.

Geet Khurana:
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The Young bussiness tycon hard ,tough,arrogant.heartless stone.
This poem will define Geet's condition
why the fate is so cruel
why the world is so cruel
i wanna die buh force to live
why i forced to grow so early
why i forced to pay so heavily
Dun know buh fate sets its path
 whyyy
my soft heart turn to stone 
buh really m I a stone??
I am happy in my dreamland
buh brutally force to face harsh reality
They got nothng from their doings
  Except
turning love to hatred
smile and tears to blank
simplicity and innocence to arrogance & harshness
now time change
fate want the old time innocence back
buh don't u think it's too late
now there is nothing left
Except
a life less personality
or a ruthless girl 
who don't know how to smile & cry
buh why
now the only think is left
 Is remorses
Now it's their turn to feel the same pain
Now they have to shed the tears
Tears of remorses
Tears of regret
Tears of repent
But now nothing can change
They have to live the way they choose
They have to repent every sec of their life
They have to burn in the same hell
Which they make for me
aaahhh
Now am a living Zombie
But nothing can change the reality
Why the fate is so cruel
why the world is so cruel


Muskan Khurana:


four years old darling daughter of Geet.love to irritate her mom.

Kabir Khurana:

four years old.twin of Shanaya,two minutes elder than her.

Handa Family:
The  Middle class family of Delhi Do Bussiness of import and export before the establishment of their company Handa empire.

Sukhdev Handa:
  A man with high principles.Love his daughter very much but now hopeless to get her back.

Rano Handa:

A typical house wife and love her daughter very much and unlike her husband she is hopeful to get her geet back...

Brij Handa
:


Rajji Handa:


Mutual Enemies of Maaneet:
Ajay Kapoor:


Dev Shukla:


Tanya Shukla:



P.S here is C.S will update first part at night.


Edited by Alisha_gurti - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
nice start
update  soon
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Posted: 10 years ago



very nice CS...

waiting for actual story to start...
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Posted: 10 years ago

Thanks am updating at night and india forum is not allowing me pm the link sp tel me wad to do???
Originally posted by: 6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6

 

very nice CS...

waiting for actual story to start...

Edited by Alisha_gurti - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Thnks dear well.should i continue.it?


YES CONTINUE
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Posted: 10 years ago
Originally posted by: punam2712


YES CONTINUE

thnks

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Posted: 10 years ago
Note:First of all Thanks to everyone for liking this ss and ton of thank those who coment and sorry for not replying everyone but from tomorrow i will reply everyone and hyperlinks are not working in pms as am newbie so putting address and you have to copy paste the link on address bar now enough of my bak bak...


Part 1
Doctors force Maan to leave the I.C.U but as soon as he leave her hand her pulse start sinking and doctors have to allow him to be with her 
as they were busy in treating her.
Remorseful tears spilt from his eyes witnising her divine love after whatever  he did to her she still love him and he start thinking of that unfateful time month and specially that day and night which change their life completely...
...Flashback five years ago...
Maan Singh Khurana as well as Khurana family is called by Handa's at Handa Mansion and they beg him to marry Geet as their family reputation and family name is on stake and due to those snaps Khurana's reputation also question as these were the intimate pictures of Maan and Geet he was in furry and rage that how dare she use him when she herself and Dev but he agreed to marry her seeing his family asking to him and the wedding was held in a week and Handa's broke every single relation with Geet.During Grah Parwesh rasam he  recived a call which didn't help except done the work as oil on fire.His love for her was long lost and hatred took the place of the love he had.
After all the rituals Maaneet were retired to the out house for the night.
When he enter in his room he see her standing near the window and his last thread of control was break.
He came close to her made her face him and what he spoke he know he has attacked directly to her soul.
Maan:Geet i haven't thought that you could so low to get me.(Geet mene socha nahe tha k tum itna gir sakti ho mujhe hasil karne k liye)Geetwas startled by his harsh words unknown to the fact that this is just the start and after some hours  she will be left with nothing except her broken heart and bruised and deadth soul.
She tried to back off and say somthing in her defence but harshly stopped by the sudden slap and a abusive word.
Seeing her back off ignite his anger he pull her harshly towords him and place a tight slap on her face and throw her on bed.He hoverd  on her and with out caring about her begging and numerous protest he forsed himself on her.He was hard agressive and harsh towords her.
When he is done with her he throw her down the bed without caring about her state as she is fainted due to his brutal act but in his raje he didn't notice it and face his back to her and went to sleep...
...Flashback ends...
In his trance he didn't notice that his grip on her hand is becoming tight continueously and her hand start bleeding.Doctors jerk him and as he come back to reality he is shocked beyond limits and he immediately left her hand mouthing sorry to her and saying i always only give you pain.

Precap:More of Past flashbacks and Present of MAaneet Condition...

P.S:well thats part one and as promise i update at night...now waiting for your response and please tell me should i unedit it...
  

Edited by Alisha_gurti - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
nice cs.. loved the characters...
1st part was scary...
maan forced geet how dare he?
may be that is NT 's plan.
awesome update... do update soon
thanks for pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome
love it.
waiting
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Posted: 10 years ago
arghhh Moi hate Maan...
can't wait for the next part...