Os-2nd part Eternal love of a husband - Page 4

Originally posted by: Sakshiram

Its really vry beautiful emotional update dear...can imagine everything u hd put such a flow in the story loved t...can sense ram's feeling...nicely written story..thnks for the pm dear...riddhima as i already said v miss u dear

Originally posted by: Sharmirayanz

Really emotional...nd ur mes 4 ur frnd through thz story..tht idea is very lovely :) keep writting ...

Originally posted by: sandhyasn

nice update

u penned down each emotions very nicely...

beautifully ended. Priya open her eyes and see her love

thanks for PM😊

Originally posted by: vironikajain

Beautifull write up sanju..
Very touchy nd emotional..one can feel the pain of Ram through words..awesomly peened down emotions.. 👏
So finally his life opened her eyes nd saw the love of her life...
Loved it..perfect ending 🤗
Thanx for this OS..
Thanx for pm..

Originally posted by: bpatil3

sanju darling sorry for late.

yaar kya update hai sanju.

Pyar ko express karne ke liye zubaan hona zaroori nahi , agar pyar hai to wo kisi na kisi roop mein hi sahi dikhta hai, priya ki ek aasoon , uski finger movement, just opening her eyes,uski ek shiver by his hot breath superbly  wriiiten.

ram's pain, sadness, priya's words pinching his heart n he couldn't contrl any more finally he is broken.

Just outstanding. it touched my heart, i cannot express how touchy n eternal it is.

Hats off Sanju ..

luv u n big hug sorrry for late.main tujhe humesha wait karwaati hoon yaar. anajne mein ye hamesha  hota hai .will try to comment soon.

Originally posted by: BALHLOVER

thank u viro darling

yes i cant bear RAM's pain yaar

Originally posted by: Dsudipa

very touchy & emotional update, finally Priya open her eyes, u written very well Sanju, thx 4 PM