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Posted: 2013-09-20T11:40:02Z

Ok...so i have decided...dekho yar...bhadas nikale bina mera kam chalega nhi...qki abhi m kuchh bhi andr nhi rakh sakti doctor ne mna kiya hua h...waise doctor ne to sochne k liye bhi mna kiya h...par wo to m nhi kar sakti...han protection k taur pr jahar andr nhi rakhungi nikal dungi...taki khun na jale...qki khun bnane k chakkr me meri solid watt lagti h...apple khana padta h...anar khana padhta h...healthy rhne k liye dudh bhi peena padhta h...to khun jalane ka risk ab nhi le sakte...already anemic ho chuke hain...to bttr option yhi h...ki "maine socha na tha" ko bhadas nikalne k liye chhod dete hain...aur is kahani ko ek naye mod se naye rup se shuru karte hain...kahani whi h..ram k samne challenge h...zindgi k panno me samne aaye priya nam k kore kagaz pr ek bar phir se whi kahani likhne ki...jo uski jindgi ka hissa nhi balki ek puri zindgi h jo dono ji chuke hain...pta nhi...ram ye sab kaise handle karega aur priya uska kitna sath degi??...lekin 100 bat ki ek bat ye h...ki chahe inme se koi bhi kisi bhi situation me ho...sath to ekdusre ka denge hi...qki pyar yaddasht ka mohtaz nhi hota..wo to dil me basne wala ehsas h...deemag se to uska lena dena hi nhi h...aur jahan pyar h wha sath to apne ap ho jayega...pehle shuru to karte hain...phir dekhte hain...dil aur deemag ki jung me kaun jit ta h...ok...here i am going to start with new thread & story..hope u all like it...sab kuchh wahi se aage badhega...bas thread alag kar diya h...

Ab naya thread bnaya h to nam bhi rakhna padega na...aur m apni writing se jyada consious apni kahani k nam k liye rhti...qki m hamesha chahti hu ki meri kahani ka nam hamesha meri kahani ko arth de...mera matlb h...nam padh k hi kahani ka criteria samjh aa jaye...aur log hamesha us nam se relate kar paye...kahani ko bhi aur khud ko bhi...toh isiliye main iska nam rakh diya h..
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"chalo ek bar phir se..."



hope ki logo ko pasand aaye nam bhi aur kam bhi..but i believe ki shuruat thodi dhamakedar honi chahiye...are bhai public ko phasana rhta h na...jab aap shuruat hi achhi nhi kar sakte to log aap se ek behtar ant ki ummeed kaise karenge...main kabhi bhi ummeed se jyada to nhi chahti...par ummeedo ko pankh jarur deti hu is ummeed se ki udo..kabhi na kabhi ashiyana jarur milega rukne k liye...toh agar shuruat pasand aa jaye to age badhne ka hausla dekar...ek nayi ummeed jarur de dena mujhe:...love u all & love balh forevr qki asual mujhe to rote hue bhi...

"bade achhe lagte hain na"

ok...start from a video...jo aage ki kahani ko describe karne me help karega...ye vm mne bht dil se bnaya h qki ye gana mere dil k bht kareeb h...qki is gane ko abhi tak maine sirf suna h...par jindgi me ek bar to mehsus jarur karna chahungi... ...aur isiliye is part ka nam bhi is vm k nam pr hi rakh rhi hu...

Part 1

"aaoge jab tum o sajna"


ram kamre ko dekh rha hota h..use har ek cheez me priya k hone ka ehsas ho rha hota h...puri jindgi thi ram priya ki is kamre me...pehli bar ladne se lekar akhiri bar ruthne tak..pehli bar nazre milane se lekar...akhiri bar nazre churane tak...pehli bar pyar ka ehsas hone se lekar...ek dusre k ho jane tak...sab kuchh tha is kamre me..ram bas yhi soch rha tha ki agar priya ko ye sab kabhi yad nhi aya to...???...

wo kamre ko dekhta h aur priya ki yado me kho jata h...

RAYA !!vm!! aoge jab tum... 

Neha pichhe se ram ko awaz deti h...jaise wo sapne jag gya h...

Neha...ram...kaha tha na maine...nhi hoga yar...q tu apne ap ko itni takleef de rha h...hum priya ko kahi aur le chalte hain na...keh dena ki tumhe wha kam h aur tu priya ko yha akela nhi chhod sakta...

Ram...nahi...i am ok...main priya ko yhi launga...uske hi ghar me..aur waise bhi tum shayad bhul rhi ho ki priya sabkuchh bhul chuki h...to wo meri itni consult nahi bare karegi...main uske liye uska ram nhi hu...mr.kapoor hu...jiske sath usne samjhaute ki shaadi ki h..aur waise bhi wo mujhe bhuli h...main nhi to main usko uske ghar aur apno se dur nhi kar sakta hu...isliye chahe jis bhi hal me rhna pade par main priya k sath isi ghar me aur isi kamre me rahunga..

Neha...lekin jab wo har bat k liye sawal karegi to jawab kaise doge???

Ram...de dunga...aaj tak usne mere bht sare sawalo k jawab diye hain...ab meri bari h...bas mujhe in yado ko sambhal k rakhna h...taki jis din mujhe meri priya ...ram ki priya...wapas mile us din main use uski yade lauta saku...

Neha...ram u know what...main hamesha sochti thi priya is the best wife of world qki wo tujhe sambhal leti h...but today i have to say that...u r the best husband in the world...tumhara dost aisa kyun nhi h???...

Ram...hehehe...qki tum meri priya jaisi nahi ho na..

Vikram...wah kya bat kahi h rambabu..

Neha...how mean...huh...main tumdono ko chhodungi nhi...

Vikram...mat chhodna yar qki humdono ka hi kam tumhare bina nhi chalega..

Ram...han tum itni achhi kamwali jo ho...

Neha...gggrrrhh..i will kill u both

teeno hasne lagte hain...ram sab kuchh 20 sal purane style me le ata h...isme 2 din lag jata h...wha priya bhi kabhi kabhi responce karti rhti h...pr bht bttr nhi rhti h...

Do din bad...aaj priya ko ana h...kapoor mention me...par ram use lene nhi jata h...shayad uski himmat nhi hoti h...vikram aur neha use lane wale hain...ram apne kamre me besabri se uska intezar kar rha h...waqt kate nhi kat rha h...

To b continue..


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Edited by veena23 - 2013-11-09T05:49:34Z
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Posted: 2013-09-20T11:41:45Z
continue and get well soonSmile
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Posted: 2013-09-20T12:30:18Z
WOW Nice update . you write so welll and the most imp ur vm was superb no words to explain that... just the way it should be for your update and the song was very apt to suit the situation...pls continue soon waise itna chota updated...not fair next time need a big one. ya before that take good rest and take car of urselfff..thoda sa tho dudh pee lena jaldi shakthi milega aur doodh kar update karna...waise thoda jyaada hogeyna...Day Dreaming
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Posted: 2013-09-20T22:42:49Z
wah ab shuru hone wali hai 
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Posted: 2013-09-20T23:00:29Z
di PM kyun nehi ki aapne?
Cry
 baat nehi karungi aapse Cry
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Posted: 2013-09-20T23:09:38Z
I am so excited to know what happens next...waiting for the next update Day Dreaming
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Posted: 2013-09-20T23:29:43Z
excited for new journey, it was superb...continue soonTongue
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Posted: 2013-09-21T00:17:06Z
 The line:" neha-  why vikram is not like u?
Ram- because u r not like Priya." loved it Thumbs Up
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