Hey, I asked you to squeeze an update for "Twisted Wedding". Not a new OS. But it's fine. Something is better than nothing, right😉 Just kidding😆 I loved it. Awesome work sweetie👏 Oh and congratulations on your first OS🥳
The first bit was the part I loved the most in the whole OS. You had penned down Arnav's life really nicely and emotionally, which made my heart cringe with sorrow. Poor guy, he had to go through a lot since his young days. And althoug he has everything today, he is still missing something in his life. Awe, my Arnav. I hate to see him all hurt and broken down
Next came our Ms. Mischievous Khushi Kumari Gupta. As usual she decided to interfere in others matter. Okay fine, not any other person, but her sister. But yet, she would have done something at the end and repented with puffy eyes due to crying. When will this girl learn to stop her herself from interfering others lives? Well, if she did so, she wouldn't be our very own Khushi Kumari Gupta, right?😉
I'm really glad that Khushi realized the so called Jeejaji was not for her Jiji after all before it became too late😊
And the ramp scene was really nice. I actually expected Arnav to lash out at Khushi or something like that. But you surprised me here. He actually was mesmerized by her beauty. And as expected little Miss Topsy Turvy missed her step and fell onto Arnav's arms. God, if that happened to me I would have swooned right on his arms😆 And the way Aman handled the situation when Khushi fell on Arnav's arms was awesome👏
Last part was lovely. I was glad at the way Arnav and Khushi talked to each other, and clarified their doubts. And then later when Arnav initiated the kisses, just like Khushi felt butterflies in her stomach, I felt my stomach doing somersaults. You wrote the scene perfectly. But in the last part the part that was so touching was when Khushi left and came back running into Arnav's arms for a well deserved embrace. And the way she kissed Arnav's cheek before leaving was really cute and lovely. Awe, my pagal Khushi. It was really sweet of her❤️
Overall, it was a super, duper OS. Thanks again for penning down such a wonderful OS, even though you are busy with your work. This hug is for you🤗
Thanks for the pm😃
Waiting to read many more FFs, SSs & OSs written by you😉
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