Originally posted by: bishop22Wow spend most of today reading your OS... it was fabulose to read and very well penned down.
I wouldn't mind getting the unedited versions. PM me please.Thanks
Originally posted by: vironikajainWow beautifull write up Shaz..
Loved the whole thing about promise..its so true 👍🏼
Emotional state of Ram nd Priya is very well shown..finally their love won.. 😊
Naughty at 60 RaYa..😆
Thanx for sharing ur work with us..
Thanx for pm..
Originally posted by: ShazK.123
🤣don't believe it, kyunki ek secret bataoon? yeh maine nahi likha... mere bhoot ne likha 😆😆sach hai, promises are meant to be broken... main roz kuch na kuch promise karti hoon phir break karti hoon 🤣iss baar aapne kehdiya toh accept karna padega 😆 lekin mere saath aisi formality karne ki koi zaroorat nahi hai 😉😉aapne toh thanks kehdiya... toh mai bhi keh sakti hoon... Thanks for your comments 😛😛
Originally posted by: leena04
last part
awww it was rally cute & emotinal part the way Ram was monnofying Priya was really lovely truely Ram loves Priya so much just as Priya loves no one can seprates them not even death... just amezing i really loved this small yet thouchy story its just mindblowing I want to see nuaghty at 60 so can u plz sand me unedited version of RaYa romance plz...
Originally posted by: peeyara
mujhe bhi laga k you were not in your true senses while writing this😉 😆but i hv always kept my promises..i hv never broke them😛ok...from next tym will try to be informal to you😆
Originally posted by: ShazK.123
yup you thought right 😆😆chote chote promises break karna teekh hai... bade bade nahi... mai chote promises break karti hoon hamesha... its difficult to keep small promises, I forget that I made them 🤣 "stupid" hoon na? 😉😉😆
Originally posted by: peeyara
promise karke bhool jaati hoon😲 😆mai promise karne se pehle sochti hoon k whether i can fulfill it or not then i'll decide 😊
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