ArHi OS | A Crack In The Curtains *Awarded* - Page 2

simply brilliant
loved it./

loved it very beautiful...keep it up

This is...breathtaking! Left me speechless! Thanks for the PM!

Wonderful os. Beautifully written 

Why the hell u were nervous? It's so beautiful ! ( in arnies ishtyle)
Really, so emotional !

Don't bite your nails girl, stand up and take a bow!  It was sweet, touching and felt so real - especially that squeeze.  I loved how you meshed up the various storyline and came up with a closure for each one.  Loved how Arnav is remorse and knows what is at risk and is not willing to let go without a fight.  A chance for him to show her his love as she has seen mostly the anger and hatred, a chance for him to repent and tell her how much he loves and needs her.  I love that you left it at the squeeze and the happiness it brought to this tyrant who became a believer because of her goodness!  Yeah I like it, I like it a lot.  Thanks.

Darrrling Emma, this was one of the most beautifully written one shots I've read! And I mean it.

Your words made my water a bit but that's alright. It was worth it. I like crying about/for things I love.

You wrote it so wonderfully, captured the emotions just right.

Bas beautiful it was. No other words.

I was reading this at 3am in the morning whilst suffering from my every now and then bout of insomnia.  Edited by LondonChick - 10 years ago

Subah subah mujhe emotional kara diya..ek haappy ending wala doosra part bhi de dona..Arshi happily ever after...

For the first time in many many reads, I had tears in my eyes.  It was haunting but in a sweet way.  Loved it.