RaYa - FF - Second Chance thread 3 special preview on page 145 - Page 2

Posted: 10 years ago
hello everyone and welcome to the third thread of RaYa Second Chance. I am happy as well as excited to start the third thread of this FF. I take the opportunity here to thank my readers for their love and immense support towards this FF, hope I can continue to garner that love and support from you all in future.



part 38 - page 2
part 39 - page 26
part 40 - page 44
part 41 - page 61
part 42 - page 78
part 43 - page 96
part 44 - page 107
part 45 - page 119
part 46 - page 133



Thread 4


Edited by jineejiggs - 10 years ago
Posted: 10 years ago
will update within couple of hours
Posted: 10 years ago
Congratulations fr ur new thread...
And
will be waiting fr ur update...
Posted: 10 years ago
CONGRATULATIONS!! 👏 👏 🥳


Hope u make many more threads of ur work.. 👍🏼 Edited by vironikajain - 10 years ago
Posted: 10 years ago
thread 3  so soon  great  buddy 
Posted: 10 years ago
congratulation...🥳👏 
Posted: 10 years ago
thanks to all of you for your wishes, here I come with next part of this FF, hope you all like enjoy it.

recap

...Ram smiled and said, come fast.



As per the plan Neha, Saumya and Natasha went to jewelery store to select the jewelery, with them Rishabh was also there. Priya excused herself today as she had some extra classes. Ab jewelery ke mamlo me ladkiyan kaisi hain, yeh toh hum sab jante hain, fussy and excited. Toh aaj Rishabh ka bura haal honewala hain, ek toh sab usse chidayenge upar se jewelery shop pe kharreddari hain, par kya kare aakhir Dilli ki laddoo jo khana hain, anyways, the three lovely ladies come to the shop along with Rishabh and headed straight to the main section. Actually aaj shaadi ki jewelery khareed na hain, toh Saumya brought her lehenga also, taaki woh iske saath match karke khareed sake, par aaj kal ki ladkiyon ko bhari gehne pasand hi nahi aate, par shaadi toh life me ek hi baar hoti hain toh usme toh bhari gehne hi pehnne parenge, toh Neha ne iss baat ko dhyan me rakhte huye sets select karna shuru kiya, par Saumya ko kuch bhi pasand nahi aa raha tha. Lekin after much time ek set pasand aayi and that too complement with her lehenga, the set is very pretty and at the same time kaafi heavy bhi. Saumya ka bohot mann tha ki woh apna mangalsutra bhi khareede toh she asked Natasha to help her, toh tabhi Neha ne kaha


Neha " arre yaar agar hum sab karenge toh Rishabh ko kyun bulaya, usse leke jao aur select karlo, waise Saumya yeh cheez tumhare paas Rishabh ki amaanat banke rahegi, toh usse hi choose karne do.


Natasha laughed and said, well said bhabhi, isi bahane dono akele reh toh payenge kyun Rishabh, saying this she gave a pat on his shoulder.


Both Rishabh and Saumya blushed, though Rishabh wanted to spent time with her but in front of every one he can't, in fact he can't wait any more, abhi bhi shaadi me ek mahina baaki hain. Rishabh and Saumya went to another section to choose mangalsutra.


While they were choosing, Neha and Natasha were just looking at other sets.


Neha " toh kaisi chal rahi hain teri family life, tu khush toh hain na Karthik ke saath?


Natasha smiled and said, haan bhabhi bohot khush hoon, wahan sab mujhe bohot pyaar karte hain specially papa.


Neha " jahan tak maine dekha hain woh log ache hain, ab dekh Priya ne kaise fatty ki zindagi badal di hain


Natasha " haan bhabhi, bhai aaj kal bohot khush dikhte hain, sach me Priya bhabhi aake bhai ko samhal liya.


Neha " am sure Priya, fatty ko bohot khush rakhegi, maine dekha hain dono ke beech me bohot pyaar hain aur ek dusre ko complement bhi karte hain, am really very happy for him.


Yunhi baatein karte karte aur Rishabh Saumya ki romance shopping ko mila ke finally jewellery pasand ho gayi and they all come back in Kapoor Mansion.


While Natasha and Neha was pulling Saumya's leg in front of dadi and Krishnaji, Saumya was sitting with embarrassed look, Rishabh went to his room leaving Saumya in the hall, actually after coming from jewellery store, all gathered in the hall and was showing jewellery to dadi and Krishnaji, toh tabhi Saumya ne apni mangalsutra bhi dikhayi aur Neha aur Natasha ne uske taang kheechna shuru kar diya. In the mean time Priya bhi wapas aa gayi and all had a gala time.


Bas ab sirf 10 days baki hain shaadi me, sab preparations almost ho gaye hain, card bhi aa gaya hain aur invitations bhi ho gaye hain, kehte hain sab se pehela card bhagwan ko charaya jata hain toh card aane ke baad tay hua ke Rishabh aur Saumya dono jayenge Siddhivinayak, toh dadi ne insist kiya Ram aur Priya ko bhi jana parega, leaving any choice all went to Siddhivinayak, ab bhagwan ke darshan ke liye aaye hain toh thoda waqt toh lagega hi, toh hota yun hain ki mandir me thoda waqt lag gaya, upar se Priya thehri bappa ka bhakt toh usne toh puja bhi de dali, bas sab ache se ho gaya...aaj sab Lalaji ki kothi pe shift kar rahe hain, kyunki Amritsar se Roshan aur Sohan aane hi wale hain aur Saumya ke ma papa bhi aaj ki flight se aa rahe hain toh sab wahi rehenge. Sab bohot excited hain, toh dusri aur Neha, Natasha aur Priya milke Lalaji ki kothi ko achhi tareeke se decorate karne me jut gayi hain.


Sab ne lalaji ki kothi me jab andar aaye toh Priya ne apna sarr dhak kar, dehleez ko chhu kar pranam kar andar aayi, issi ghar se uski doli uthi thi aur aaj isi ghar ki woh bahu bhi hain, yeh dekh ke dadi ki aankhon me aansoo aa gaye, Ram bhi Priya ko dekh hi raha tha, uski Priya aur bhi khoobsurat ho gayi hain, Ram ki aankhon me Priya ke liye ek alag hi roop hain, woh beti bhi hain, bahu bhi, behen bhi toh bhabhi bhi, premika hain toh patni bhi, dost bhi hain aur sahara bhi, jitni achhi insaan hain utna hi achha mann bhi hain uska, sab ke liye uske dil me pyaar hain, ek halka sa smile aa jata hain Ram ke hothon pe. Dadi aake Priya ko gale se laga leti hain aur kehti hain,


Dadi " jeeyundi reh puttar, tune aaj saabit kar diya hain ke mera faisla bilkul sahi tha, tuhi iss ghar ki badi bahu ke roop me shobha deti hain, aaj Golu ke dadaji zinda hote toh bohot khush hote, bas ab mujhe koi fiqr nahi hain, bas ab iss ghar ka waaris aa jaye toh main chain se mar sakti hoon.


Hearing this Ram and Priya looked at each other for brief moments then Ram came to dadi and said,


Ram " kyun aisi baatein karti hain aap dadi, aapko pata hain na mujhe yeh sab achha nahi lagta


Dadi " dekh Golu, tere bachhen ko apne godi me khilaye bagair main marne nahi wali hoon


Ram " abhi aap aur soo saal jeeyengi.


Aisi baatein baatein karte karte sab aa gaye. The whole Kapoor family was there along with them Shergills also came and Sharmas too, hala ki Sudhirji aur Shipraji aana nahi chahte the, jaisa bhi ho hai hain toh beti ka saasural hi na, par Natasha ke aage unn dono ki ek na chali, actually yeh dono Nuts se bohot pyaar karte hain aur Natasha bhi dono se bohot close hain specially Sudhirji se. Toh sab aa gaye, Vikram-Neha ke bachhe toh aake hi apne Priya aunty se jud gaye aur Priya bhi unn logon se baatein karne lag gayi, Rishabh gaya tha Saumya ke parents ko lane aur wahi dusri taraf Ram aur Vikram baaki ke arrangements me busy the aur Neha aur Natasha dono milke Saumya ko Lalaji ka kothi dikha rahi thi.


In the evening, everyone was sitting in the hall, and chit chatting rather discussing about the marriage and its procedure.


Ram " Prashanthji, agar kuch aur intezaam aap karna chahte hain toh bejhijhak kahiyega, main...


Prashanthji " Mr. Kapoor aapne toh sab kuch arrange kar liya hain ke mujhe lag hi nahi raha hain ke main beti ka baap hoon.


Krishnaji " phir bhi samdhiji agar kuch chahiye toh bol dijiyega.


Binitaji " samdhanji mujhe bohot khushi hain ki meri beti ka rishta ek aise ghar me hone jaa raha hain jahan usse uske hisse ka pyaar milega, Mr. Kapoor ne jo kiya hain woh ek baap hi kar sakta hain.


Ram just smiled but Priya kept looking at him. She was feeling so proud for her MAN, sachh kehete hain sab aur ab toh Priya ko bhi yakeen ho raha hain ki Ram ek bohot ache pita saabit honge. Yeh baat sochte hi Priya ke hothon pe ek smile aa jati hain.


Kal subah Amritsar se Roshan aur Sohan apne families ke saath aa rahe hain aur uske baad asli shaadi ki rang jamegi jaise Natasha aur Ram ke shaadi me huya tha, kal lawn me shamiyana tangwaya jayega aur sab milke maze karenge wahi pe, waise yeh idea Nuts aur Neha ka tha jisme un logon ne Saumya aur Priya ko bhi shamil kar liya hain aur sab se badi baat khud high command yani dadi ne hi yeh permission diya hain toh sab kaafi excited hain.


Ab sab log dinner ke baad apne apne kamre me aa gaye hain. Priya was keeping her stuff in the wardrobe when Ram came and he closed the door. Ram came inside the room and saw Priya is keeping their stuff.


Ram " kal Amritsar se sab aa rahe hain, bada mazaa ayega


Priya smiled and teased him by saying achha, itna khush toh aap apne shaadi par bhi nahi the?


Ram " tumhe kaise pata?


Priya " aapki aankhen sab bayan kar deti hain


Ram came and hugged Priya from back and said, aur kya kya keheti hain meri aankhen?


Priya " yehi ke aap bohot ache hain


Ram " lekin mera dil ab kuch aur keh raha hain saying this he hugged her tightly now Priya couldnot do anything, was only feeling his hot breath on her nape. She didn't say anything. Ram turned her and said, dadi ne aaj kuch manga hain hum dono se...


Priya was feeling shy, she kept her head down and was playing with her mangalsutra, for some moment Ram looked at her and then raised her chin up. For moments Ram kept looking at her and then said, let me go and freshn up.


Ram came out freshening up and saw Priya almost completed her wardrobe task, she went to change. Ram was going through some papers when he found Priya came back wearing the nighty which she wore in their honeymoon, normally Priya doesn't wear nighty and Ram always complain her for that so when he saw her in this nighty for some moments Ram's jaws dropped down as Priya is looking stunningly beautiful in this night robe. It perfectly fits her and the colour also suits her. She came in front of dressing table and started combing her hair. Ram was still gazing at her and Priya could feel that. She too was apprehensive at first when she took the nighty but wanted to surprise Ram by wearing it again. Actually she wanted to see herself in the eyes of her MAN, while thinking this she blushed from the core of her heart. Still Priya was combing her hair, after she completed it, came to the bed and started arranging it. Ram kept looking at her and then came in the balcony of his room. Priya finished her work turned around and found Ram standing in the balcony gazing at the sky. She came and stand beside him. For some moments both didn't utter anything but can feel each others heart sounds, and then Ram said,


Ram " pata hain Priya main jab chhota tha toh mujhe gudiyon se khelne ka bohot shauk tha, actually mujhe na hamesha se ek behen chahiye thi, Nuts jab paida huyi tab main bada ho gaya tha par bachhpan me bohot miss karta tha ek behen ko, jab bhi doston ki behen ko dekhta tha bohot jealous feel karta tha, bohot dukh hota tha, aksar maa ko aake keheta tha main, toh ek din dadi ne mujhe ek gudiya laa ke diya aur kahan ke yehi hain meri behen, toh usse main hamesha khelta tha, usse protect karta tha, usse samhal ke rakhta tha, ek din uski ek finger me chhot aa gayi aur main bohot rone laga, toh maa ne usko theek kar diya aur kahan agar main apne gudiya ka ache se khayal rakhunga toh meri zindagi me koi aisi ayegi jo mera dhyan rakhegi, saying this Ram stopped for a while, Priya was staring at him continuously, Ram again started, pata hain Priya jab Sarah chali gayi mujhe chhod ke tab laga tha maine apne gudiya ko kho diya, nahi janta tha ke woh toh meri gudiya thi hi nahi, uske jaane ke baad kai baar maine socha ke kahan kami reh gayi thi mujh me ke woh yun chali gayi par aaj mujhe mera jawab mil gaya hain, jisse maine apne zindagi me gudiya mana tha woh toh meri gudiya thi hi nahi, meri gudiya toh woh hain jisse mujhe phir se pyaar karna sikhaya, mere pariwaar ko apna banaya hain, saying this Ram turned towards Priya and said, thank you Priya for being my gudiya, main promise karta hoon sari zindagi tumhara khayal rakhunga, ek pal ke liye bhi tumhe taqleef nahi dunga.


Priya took Ram in her embrace and hugged him tightly and said, pata hain Mr. Kapoor har ladki ki tarah mera bhi sapna tha ke ek din koi rajkumar aayega aur mujhe apne saath leke jayega uske duniya me, my knight in shining armour!, jise main apna keh sakungi and am very proud to announce the world that you are my MAN, my Prince Charming, saying this she hugged him more tightly placing her head on his broad chest. Ram smiled hearing her out and kept one hand on her head securing her in his embrace. Both kept standing there for some moments, and then Ram asked her,


Ram " aaj tumne yeh nighty kyun peheni?


Priya " bas aise hi


Ram " yeh night dress tum pe bohot suit karta hain specially the colour


Priya " woh Neha ne London jaate waqt pack kiya tha aur usike wajah se mujhe London me...saying this she couldn't say further and both Ram and Priya reminiscence their first night in London.


Ram " waise uss din bhi tum bohot khoobsurat lag rahi thi aur peheli baar tumhare liye dil me kuch mehsoos kiya tha maine, saying this he cupped her face in his palm, both for sometime kept looking at each other, then finally very gently Ram took her lips in him and started to have the sweet nectar of her.


After a while both Ram and Priya were on the bed while Ram was on her top keeping his head on her bosom. Priya was gently caressing his hair with her fingers. Ram hold her tightly from waist securing her in his embrace.


Ram " Priya, zindagi bhi kitni ajeeb hoti hain na, aaj main ek pal ke liye tum se dur nahi rehna chahta lekin woh main hi tha jo iss shaadi se mana kiya tha. Aaj lagta hain agar hum log aur 10 saal pehele mile hote toh shayad...


Priya " Mr. Kapoor hum sab apni kismat leke aate hain, hum dono ka milna likhha tha toh hum dono aaj saath me hain, aur mujhe iss baat ki khushi hain.


Listening to this Ram raised his head and rested his left elbow on the right hand side of Priya and looked intently in her eyes and said, lekin pehele mile hote toh humara bachha bhi toh pehele hota, I will be almost in my old age when my child grow up, main uske saath khelna chahta hoon, waqt beetana chahtha hoon, woh sab karna chahta hoon jo babuji ne mere saath kiya tha, I want to be his/her best frnd like my father. Ab tak Priya was listening to him now she gave him a sweet smile and caressed his forehead and said, umar ho gayi hain toh kya hua hain am very sure u will be the world's best father, a dotting father, mujhe pura vishwaas hain.


Ram " Priya, kya hum nibha payenge yeh zimmedari?


Priya " am very sure Ram, hum kar payenge, aap aur main milke karenge.


Ram gave her a sweet smile of him and kissed her on her forehead, he trailed the kiss to her cheeks, jaws, crook of her shoulder, he stopped at the base of her neck and gently slided her sphagatti strap and kissed on her cleavage, Priya was enjoying the every moment of it. She arched her back and Ram kissed her on the neck. Priya's grip on Ram's back was getting more firm. Ram kept his head on her partial bare bosom and closed his eyes, Priya hold him tightly and also drifted to sleep. They both slept peacefully in each others embrace, this is the place where both belong to and also they find solace of their life...shhh! Let them sleep in each other's embrace, don't disturb them.






RaYa complement each other so well that their relationship always gets a newer meaning, I tried to capture that in this part, hope you all liked it. If you all like it then do hit the "LIKE" button and leave your comments.
Posted: 10 years ago
Nice update...
Loved the way u potrayed evry charecter...
And raya ka tadka bhi laga diya...

Thnx fr the pm...
Contn soon..Edited by chillpc - 10 years ago
Posted: 10 years ago
wonderful update
yeah it is true raya complement to each other
continue the ff till waiting
thanx for the pm
Posted: 10 years ago
Congrats for nw thread comment abt update little later

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